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Mr Ghostman


(No longer active) I'm more active on Youtube and Discord.

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6583582

You tell me. :ajsleepy:

I'm not even sure why I've written this.

A Bestiality fic.






...Our fandom truly has hit rock fucking bottom.

Beside the point that every humanxpony fic is technically bestiality...

Fuck my life. How did I get here?

6583692

With the power of magic. And fetishes. :trollestia:

6583699 fucking hell my eyes have cancer and autism 10 fold

6583703

Sorry about that. :fluttershbad:

6583708 pls do you have spare bleach?

6583717 ty


pours bleach in eyes

6583703

eyes have cancer and autism 10 fold

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Using Autism out of proper context is NOT ok!

Ok, I don't give a fuck about bestiality, or bukkake, or even incest (but thankfully your fic don't have this), but watersports? Really? That's one of the worst fetishes ever :rainbowderp:

6583775
6583758

I'm mixed about watersports. Sometimes it's hot and sometime's it's not. To be honest, I didn't like writing this clopfic that much and only wrote it to practice writing other better clopfics.

6583817 I don't mind watersports. It was the bestiality thing that turned me off to it.

6583875 Its all cool. You did this to practice. Though in the end game, don't write a story to impress people. Write it because you want to. I may not like it, but who cares. Just as long as you enjoy it.

I guess I'm the only person so far who's happy you posted this?

Was it the greatest clop I've ever read? No. Not gonna say that. But I'm happy it was posted. This story is like a lot of the drawings I see on derpibooru. Not the best art I've seen, but the idea behind it just fills my head with thoughts such that I end up loving what is really just an okay piece of artwork. This story surely isn't the BEST written, and it is certainly depraved as fuck. But I love it. Because it is exactly the kind of content which gets my mind going and fuels my own depraved thoughts.

The short version of my thoughts is this:
Maybe polish the writing a bit. But I love it and how depraved it is.

6583902

Thank you very much. I've written this to get my mind out of the gutter and to practice for more upcoming clopfics. The reason I've written this specifically was to get the clop out of the way first and it had just enough fetish fuel for me to write it. Plus I've also published and written this to fill the void of the lack of feral/pony, feral/human, feral/anthro (excluding the human/pony ones) clopfics especially the Winona/Big Mac ones.

Honestly, I plan on writing something way better than this some time soon.

I'm glad you're actually glad that this was even posted. :twilightblush:

What the Fuck were you thinking!?!? This is one of THE most disgusting things I have ever read. How this EVER got approved by the administrators is beyond me.

6584040

Yep. Just pretend this never happened. :trixieshiftright:

6583752 whalecum to the internet.

When using so many different fetishes, you're going to annoy almost everyone.
This wasn't amazing, but I don't think it deserves the hugely negative score it has got.

I'm not going to read this, but I'm still going to post this picture.
Be forewarned, this particular cat now sits in critical judgement of you and your apparently vile story (if these reviews are anything to go by).
May God have mercy upon your soul.
:3
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:twilightoops:I dont wanna read this but ...........it's just so rare to see this type of story that i'm strangly compelled to read it i mean im not that way but please wish me luck

6584871

Don't say I didn't warn ya. :raritydespair:

6584878 I just finished reading it and i have to say WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU i mean first he peed on her then made out with her fingered her then fucked her and then applejack came in didnt notice and was like oh darn and im just like:applecry: i mean honestly why did you write this i almost projectile vomited all over my computer screen i feel like my mingd was just taken ripped apart and raped why would you do this to us what is wrong with you

At least I enjoyed it. :)
Good story, just fetish fuel, but at least it's well written fetish fuel.

6584900

I'm so very sorry. :fluttershysad:

6584930

I'm glad you like it. I kinda didn't. :applejackunsure:

6584288

Meh. I never expected this to be that great to be honest but I just wanted to get this out of the way. :unsuresweetie:

6585467

I'm thinking about it. :trixieshiftright:

It was alright but not bad per say. Could have been longer with a bit more detail and feeling. :moustache: Make the reader feel what it is like to be there. I mean you focused on smell and sight and hearing but sense of feeling is important too. :pinkiesad2:

When Winona peed on Big Mac - Did Big Mac just not feel anything? I mean I know he started stroking himself but would have liked to know more of the feeling. :rainbowhuh:

6592012

Thanks for the compliment. And thanks for the feedback. =3

6593146 You're very welcome, Mr. Ghostman. :twilightsmile:

Yes! The evil has been written and accomplished! MUAAAAHHHHHAAAAHHHHHAAAHHHHH! :pinkiecrazy:

(Though it was honestly something I enjoyed to read, I felt as though you could've explained the scenario a bit more as it was bit-for lack of a better word-teleportey.)

6687396

Because Big Mac/Winona is the nastiest, disgusting, mostly sickeningly hottest thing in the world! :pinkiecrazy:

6619249

Excellent. To be honest you're right. I could've explained more on why Mac had a boner for boning the doggy with his bone (getit?). :derpytongue2:

6697768 YOU MADE THE WHY BONER RETURN WITH VENGANCE

:pinkiesick:6697768 WHAT THE SEVEN HELLS DID I JUST READ

6760781

Big Mac doing the dirty doggy. That's what! :derpytongue2:

This is really good. I absolutely loved it, great work!

Huh, so people who read my stories write this kind of depraved shit.


My only main critisism is that at some point you mention pulling out of Winona's ass when you were fucking her pussy. There was also no light cum inflation developed in this story.

10/10 would boner again

His daydream was cut short when he saw Winona lift her rear leg and let out streams of her pee onto his leg.

I'm pretty sure female dogs squat when they pee so.........

6583618

Bestiality would imply that the ponies of MLP are animals. I would rather see them as aliens. I mean, otherwise your comment would imply that everything that is non-human is an animal, which might be insulting to any sapient being of fiction.

Just a thought. :twilightsheepish:

6583902

I agree with triq267 on this. I liked the deprived idea of it a lot. It might have been not the best writing, but it was rather interesting regardless, so I liked it. :pinkiesmile:

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