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I write stories. I like PC gaming.
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What...the fuck did I just read? xD Pretty funny story you got here, mate, and I did not read the anthro tag before reading this, so I was surprised when you gave Luna a fucking wrestler/MMA fighter body, lol.
8042375 Thanks. I didn't know people could read this. FIMFIC didn't let me submit it cause of grammar mistakes and I couldn't seem to get a proof reader to respond. I'm glad to see somebody enjoy this nonsense.
if you would like i can proof read it for you.
Great story so far. Can wait for next chapter
This is... yeah. Find a proofreader. Take up the guy in the comments. The grammar and especially dialogue (might try for an editor as well) are... bad. DV for now with the potential for favor change if problems get sorted.
8120458 The lines are supposed to be cringy for comedic effect. What specifically didn't you like about the dialogue? Or was it just the grammar?
great job. cant wait for more
What does THOT stand for?
I've heard and seen many acronyms of lewd nature, but have never come across this one, and am intrigued to its meaning.
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Never heard more than one interpretation. As far as I knew THOT stood for That Hoe Over There
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Thanks
By the name of the moon
LOL
this is a good story in concept but you could use some work in execution
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How so?
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i think its just me exspecting more story from what is clearly shameless clop. Which there is nothing wrong with Shamless clop
Did Luna just wrestle gihdorah?
Continue bro Plz