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I write stories. I like PC gaming.
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Waaaay too short. It felt like you ended that chapter right in the middle of it.
SUCC
7634095 I think that might've been what happened.
7634095 Yeah that was the plan. I'm intending to make another chapter. Also this is my first time using FIM to, write a story or make a reply/comment. So if this doesn't go to Reykan that's because I've never used it before.
7634188 No actually that was on purpose. I ended that chapter there to give the reader a surprise at the end and so they won't feel winded after reading a great wall of china's worth of text and be burned out before getting to chapter two. BREVITY IS THE SOUL OF WIT!!! Even though that probably doesn't apply here.
7634457 unfortunately it didn't come across as a cliff hanger, it just felt jarring. Like I was on the phone talking to someone and the phone cut out right as they were speaking. Don't be afraid to hold onto a chapter.
What does MILC stand for?
7635651 Mom I'd like to Cuddle. According to Urban dictionary. I over believe it should stand for, Mom I'd like to Cherish.
This fic is a glorious mindfuck of the best kind.
MOAR NAO!!!
7634576 A six thousand word chapter can be very easily read when spaced out with paragraphs and such.
Is it wrong that I want Trixie to get the weight gain part of Chryslis's cum without the height growth?
7675855 Hey man it makes Celestia an hourglass it makes Luna a love blob at this stage in the story it could make Trixie into John Cena. Probably won't but who knows? The metal gear knows.
7675898 I kinda hope not, not much into muscle stuff, and I love me some chubby Trixie.
This story is so delightfully silly and wonderfully surreal, I love it!
Though I recommend taking a second pass over it, there are a bunch of spelling and grammar errors, and a few parts that seem to be pieced together strangely.
But don't stop, keep writing, I want to see how deep this rabbit hole goes. :3
I admit I'd like to see Luna's fat shift to mostly her hips and tits.
It's because of her aggressive and physically motivated nature you portrayed at the start.
Let her keep a layer of softness, definitely, but have most of her current excess fat go to her tits.
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MOON MILK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ugggh this is so weeeeeeeird .
Then,.... WHY DO I KEEP READING IT!
IM SO CONFUSED.
PLS HALP.
SEND A THERAPIST TOO.
DUDE. EITHER IM ON SOME GOOD SHIT, OR YOU'RE ON SOME GOOD SHIT.
EITHER WAY I WANT SOME MORE.
See, I can picture Celestia teleporting in and laying Cadance flat.
And by flat, I mean into the room under them.
Also: MILC it for all you can!!!
Oh shit.
To
Usernameforthewin
Ok next chapter that will be a fight scene obviously.
Chapter name:
MILC MILC ILL GIVE YOU MILC!
Then celestia charges in with a super futa dick amd fights cadences sword with dick.
Well, even though you don't like it, the battle wss good.
Eh you should have it to where chrysalis forgives cadence and shinning armour and then cock vores them and unloads them into twilights womb.
Chrysallis i thought was role playing a bit but after all her memories and pain she went thru during her childhood, and then forced to grow up so fast.
she's broken, she utterly broken in mind and spirit, she has reverted to being a child again, so Celestia raising her as her child would be the best answer, she needs to be rebuilt from ground up.
to be loved and return love.
Wow.
THIS chapter was so intense.
7721239 good someone else that sees that chrysalis needs this everyone needs a mother's love u and I are friends now
theres a saying.... push someone too far and your going to see the void, and let me tell you it's stare's back and then your fuck
*tumbs up* can't wait for the next chapter.n
I would say "Jesus take the wheel.", but based on where this car is going, it probably didn't even have a wheel.
7675898 How many different levels of high are you right now?
Yay!
It's back!
Ok i dont fet it yeah she may habe been bullied. Bt the scene luna ahowed was when chrysalis attacked cadence. So why did cadence start crying. Getting bullied is no excuse for being evil.
8020409 If someone's not taught right from wrong, or rather abused to the point where they lose their humanity how can you expect them to be a good person? Also Chrysalis kidnapping Cadence was supposed to prove that it was in fact Chrysalis's memories and not somebody else.
8020246 Yeah I REALLY forgot about this story... my bad.
Will you ever continue on this because this fic is amazing in many ways
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Ah christ I keep forget about this. I really gotta get back into that mind space. I'm hoping I can make something on this level again.
Hey, don't kill bystanders they are the one I mourning the most
When u do remember this how will u add to this many more chapters or finish this up with one more to make a sequel?