Times are tough for a towering muscle mare with quite a bit of beef between her legs. Especially when her career is based on dragon slaying and the public refutes her political ideas because of it
What...the fuck did I just read? xD Pretty funny story you got here, mate, and I did not read the anthro tag before reading this, so I was surprised when you gave Luna a fucking wrestler/MMA fighter body, lol.
8042375 Thanks. I didn't know people could read this. FIMFIC didn't let me submit it cause of grammar mistakes and I couldn't seem to get a proof reader to respond. I'm glad to see somebody enjoy this nonsense.
This is... yeah. Find a proofreader. Take up the guy in the comments. The grammar and especially dialogue (might try for an editor as well) are... bad. DV for now with the potential for favor change if problems get sorted.
What...the fuck did I just read? xD Pretty funny story you got here, mate, and I did not read the anthro tag before reading this, so I was surprised when you gave Luna a fucking wrestler/MMA fighter body, lol.
8042375 Thanks. I didn't know people could read this. FIMFIC didn't let me submit it cause of grammar mistakes and I couldn't seem to get a proof reader to respond. I'm glad to see somebody enjoy this nonsense.
if you would like i can proof read it for you.
Great story so far. Can wait for next chapter
This is... yeah. Find a proofreader. Take up the guy in the comments. The grammar and especially dialogue (might try for an editor as well) are... bad. DV for now with the potential for favor change if problems get sorted.
8120458 The lines are supposed to be cringy for comedic effect. What specifically didn't you like about the dialogue? Or was it just the grammar?
By the name of the moon
Did Luna just wrestle gihdorah?