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Michael Hudson


Original Works. It was a good run.

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Pretend to sleep dosn't work, the link goes to the wrong chapter

6157681 Fixed, and apologies. We tried to avoid this, but no one is perfect.

I enjoyed that little adventure, despite the fact that I died a hundred billion times.

6158337 yeah... I probably included too many deaths. :twilightsheepish:

6158341 No, I didn't mean anything against the story, I just die a lot during these things.

6158345 Personally, I look for the deaths.

I enjoyed that. I'm willing to admit that i went looking for death lol.

So then is this the ending of this branch? Maybe include "The End" if it is.

6158440 It is, but I think like the deaths, allowing it to just be like that is best, especially since this is still technically a death, and not the end to the fic.

I don't think there's a link to this chapter, nor to the DullaMaud branch. At lest not that I found.

I've seen this chapter twice, the first time when I selected "Go back inside" and the second time when I collected the wrath essence. Apart from that, I'm enjoying myself!

6159895 Seeing as that is supposed to be kind of the hub chapter, it makes sense.

Damn, guys. This was awesome. Looking forward to reading more!

Ooh, a choose your own adventure, this should be fun.

Few questions though:

never to be seen by human eyes

So... humans?

and Tame watched as the timberwolf reformed next to his now lost bag. More green eyes watched him now, but they would be wary after such a failure. He stepped back with his bag in his hands

Didn't... he just lose that bag?

Huh... that could have gone worse.

#Deaths=3
I'll admit, this was just a YOLO one.

#Deaths(well, more of a game over)=4
Although, not really the worst way to end, eh? :twilightblush:

Also:

itself, ame’s tongue

Suddenly, new character "Ame"

6160751 You are pointing out just how much I liked killing this character.

Huh, didn't expect an end here... oh well, #Deaths=5

Also:

bosom bosom

:derpytongue2:

So... is this an end, or... or what?

Also:

ehr

6163220 Just another death scene.

A nice sexualised ending for Tame. I also enjoyed this story very much, and it is quite organised. This is similar to a book series called "ihorror", though this is MLP, so it's even cwool-a! Well done :ajsmug:

6163248 Oh... had to reread it to notice he choked...
Darn.
#Deaths=6

Ehrm... that was... unexpected? :rainbowderp:
#Deaths=7

Darnit, choked again. :facehoof:
#Deaths=8 (I swear, if I die one more time now...)

6159898 I know, but it says the same thing. Describing how he entered the room again the exact same way. Not that I mind, but, ya know... Never mind.

im getting pretty lucky with dodging these so far
(i come back to see if it was in fact a game over like i thought it was)

damn. first death

only died once
#pureskill

6165853 But you missed out on sexy princess deaths then.

6165873
thats what cheating is for

I got here on my first try. :derpytongue2:

When is the next update?

6173406 Fuck if I know. Some collaberators with me had eight months to write one arc, but only I ended up writing for this, so... Yeah, we'll have to see.

I died 0 times! pure skill!:rainbowdetermined2:

Well, i cannot claim that i had no deaths, as i pretty much stumbled upon them all when i tried using Game Logic.

::WARNING:: Slight spoilers below. I am using the spoiler tag below legitimately and not to hide a joke. Unveil the spoiler at your own risk.


First went to trixie's room, but left as the bed screamed 'trap'. Then went to twaiths, and got hung up on the whole 'This is a challenge' thing, ended up with an eternity with her. So that's one universe's Tame that got screwed over(Hah, get it? ..I'll go in the corner). So i then backtracked, and got success. So, when i returned, i thought about what happend, and decided to not be tricked into such a thing. Now, this is where most of my deaths happend, as i had entered Sweetie's room. By me saying that, you would be correct in assuming i got every single death from that one before finally getting it right. So, with the thoughts that stirred from that, i got into the way of thinking 'Let things happen, and observe. Do not be too agressive.' As there is only one other option left, i went back to trixie's and promptly sentenced another Tame to an eternity. After doing the option that made me have regrets, i then went straight for this option.


So yeah, that was fun.

Hmmm... Five deaths, three abandoned probable deaths, and one happy ending. Not bad. Now to see how every possible route could go!

Okay, this was fun. :) Brought back some good memories of the 'choose your own adventure!' books I used to read.

The only times I died were at the sexytimes

Damn died again. Though it would be nice to have a link back to the beginning here.

Those sexy Princess deaths are absolutely delicious, all three of them. Rest of the the normal deaths were pretty standard with some good writing in between to weave an actual story and some very interesting takes on some monstrous mares, but damn those sexy princess deaths are just the best. Don't suppose you've written anything else like those in your many fics, JumbledThought?

7204907 Snuff or comedic sex? Because in both cases, not really, but that's because of what I use mature sex, at least more recently, to do, and that's to tell a story with sex in it, rather than just sexy times. Unfortunately, this doesn't lend itself well to comedic sex.

As for snuff, while I actually don't mind it as a fetish, especially comedically actually, I am not into it enough to remember it for the stories I write. Sorry :twilightsmile:

7204920

More specifically the snuff, but tying it in with such light hearted and generally sexy sex stuff was most excellent. A shame to hear this was just a flight of whimsy rather than a trend, but you are right that this sort of work isn't really conductive to growth so I can hardly complain. This sort of comedic sex and short pieces is very unique to more interactive style stuff... Which incidentally is a favourite style of mine.

Still such light hearted but fatal smothering was most assuredly delicious. A shame this interactive idea seemed to die before it could take off. I might have contributed had I known, heh. I do notice you are the sort to take commissions though. Any chance you'd journey back into comedic snuff sex for a commission?

7206235As I said, I am slightly in favor of it, so I would not be. However... *sigh* I think you should come back to me at a later date on it. I've been unstable recently, and so would probably need to put your idea on the backburner, and I would not want to forget about it. Sorry

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