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HavokAfterDark


I'm just like everyone else... except for the part where I'm completely different from everyone else... and that's okay.

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Obligatory musical reference GO!

It's back!

Yay!

Dah, fuck, now I gotta wait for chapter 2!

OHHH SNAP IT'S HERE!

awesome! :rainbowdetermined2:
i love it! :heart:
see the story from a different point of view :twilightsmile:
I look forward to Chapter 2 :pinkiehappy:
it's good to have you back friend :raritywink:

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Well, all of my favorites commented on the first day... I'm proud of you guys. :twilightsheepish:

6032356 Yeah... I'ma fix it eventually, but for now I was more worried about the story than the thumbnail.

Needing to cool down after their impassioned love-making, Rainbow Dash moved to open the window. She stopped for a moment, a strange look crossing her features as she leaned out the window slightly to sniff into the cool night air. "... Why does it smell like tuna out here?"

"Here. I've got enough here for us all to have our own popcorn."

Enough money for popcorn for six people at the theater in this day and age? Did she win the lottery or something? :pinkiegasp:

that good! :pinkiehappy:
I'm glad to have something :twilightsmile:
that good chapter :raritystarry:
I look forward to see what happens :rainbowdetermined2:

Hoo boy this is gonna get real good. :moustache:

Is it okay I grumbled about that cliffhanger? Yeah I'm grumble about it

I want to see their reaction so badly now.:fluttershysad:

THE PLOT THICKENS.

Oh boy. Problem begins.

6085096 Among other things I'm sure... img.pandawhale.com/61427-George-Takei-oh-my-gif-Dzvp.gif (Sorry, couldn't help myself.)

When is the next chapter gonna be released? The plot just got interesting, plus I wanna see Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy's reaction to the video.

6101691 I'm glad you're enjoying it, friend. I got off work early tonight, so I'm gonna try to get it before the morning, but no promises. :twilightsheepish:

Uhhh Applejack...you better get ready to hold Rainbow Dash down from beating Adagio to a pulp in a few seconds. :trixieshiftright:

Gahhh... *Grips heart* AGAIN, THE SUSPENSE!

Rainbows gonna try to kill her, I think

oh uh... :rainbowderp:
this does not look good. :applejackunsure:
very good chapter. :pinkiehappy:
I waited forward to the next. :twilightsmile:

Honestly, they should have expected something from the Sirens. The girls did ruin something important to the Sirens that they'd had over a thousand years. Some simple teenagers can't possibly comprehend that level of loss, getting their family members killed off one by one might bring them close to understanding. Getting some petty revenge is basically the least they're entitled to.

Bad guys and all, but they still have feelings, and losing what made them who they were for longer than anyone can possibly understand is a harsh blow. Surprised they didn't kill themselves, really. That depression had to be DEEP for awhile there.

And drama begins.

I really am enjoying this story. You've painted a fun picture, and the drama is simply delicious. I'm excited to see more.

She tries to hit her even before finding out about the video? Wow. I mean, you already beat her at the Battle of the Bands and didn't even suffer a scratch from it, you took away her reason for living and destroyed a thousand+ years of history with your teenaged bravado and hubris - she had to be stopped, but at least understand why she had to be and what was lost in the process. Dash is a bitch.

If she's going to be like that she kinda deserves the whole video fiasco. Embarrassment weighed against unprovoked physical confrontation when the score was already settled. That's some serious thugging out.

"I thought it was kinda hot!" Dash yelled without thinking.

Deadpan stares from all of her friends met her response as they all went back to pondering.

I love this story. :rainbowlaugh:

Also, rainbow's an asshole!

I am happy to read this story :twilightsmile:
I love it this chapter :heart:
especially when sunset defended adagio :rainbowkiss:
I waited patiently for the next part :pinkiesmile:
Here's to a faithful follower :raritywink:

Fuck you rainbow I'll tear you apart!

6193841 Wow, that's a lot of aggression there friend.

6183549 I'm glad to see you're still enjoying it.

6044860 I know right? shoot it would be almost 80 for me and my family just to get in (family of 6 is not cheep) then I think 30 for popcorn and drinks.

that seems strange for Sunset to hand off money for individual popcorns, seemingly out of the goodness of her heart... I sense an ulterior motive - like she's actually a germophobe and doesn't like sharing her popcorn

"Because I want five quarts." Sunset snapped. "You guys wouldn't believe my metabolism."

okay I laughed out loud, but wouldn't she still look fat when she buys herself that much and everyone else just gets like a cone?
I like the small details that flesh out the chapter into more than just a rehash of your other chapter, makes the whole story a little fuller

wait, but at SunDagio's one-year anniversary party FlutterDash was only out a few months - did they continue keeping it secret after their friends found out? Assertive Fluttershy is hot, I want to hear what she had to say

no wonder Rainbow had it out for Adagio, now I'm just curious when she finds out who took the video
I don't see why Pinkie could be that surprised, they just went and saw her last night!

Rainbow's a regular firebrand isn't she? I wonder how she'll react when she actually finds out!

Mind if I ask when you think the next chapter is going to be out?

6264891 I will release a new chapter by monday.

6270465 cool, just wanted to ask because I like the story :rainbowlaugh:

6271589 well thank you I'm glad you're enjoying it.

ow dashie why punch adagio if she didn't sent the video though she did recorded it but she deleted it off her phone

also i enjoyed reading welcome to the show and this havok keep up the good work :rainbowdetermined2:

Man, I don't care who defended what. If you had a bit more fire and testosterone Sunset, you shoulda decked Rainbow. Doesn't matter WHAT the problem is, even if she knew Adagio took that video, you don't let things get past a well-deserved dressing down and guilt-trip. The moment shit gets physical you alpha-strike whoever laid hands on who you're with. I mean, damn, Rainbow's already done worse to Adagio than Adagio did to her and Fluttershy. It's uneven again. Lay Rainbow out, balance the scales. If you're going to wear the pants in the relationship, wear the goddamn pants, girl.

Rainbow's emotions are a bit chaotic and she seems to change her mind fairly quickly. She's mad at Adagio now but I think it'll get worse for maybe a chapter's length and then get much better considering the outcome.

6281685 Rainbow didn't know it was Adagio who took the video though, Sunset had to keep a clear mind and emotions in check to continue keeping that a secret. Plus I think that might validate Rainbow's assumptions of Sunset being influenced, turning against her friends and negative energy and all

Personally, I think it's cute that Sunset was more concerned with Adagio's well-being than her honor. In my experience as the dominant and non-dominant half in a relationship, I find myself upset at the prospect of my partner rushing to punch someone who wasn't in clear, continued pursuit (esp my dominant partner, it's a little endearing when I'm being defended by someone "weaker" than me); feels degrading.

Finally, the new chapter. Keep up the good work, this is a great fanfic.

Yay! It's here!

Although I don't remember Adagio sending the video in the first fic. :rainbowhuh: I gotta pay better attention. :unsuresweetie:

6298275 it never said she did :pinkiecrazy:

My life is insane now.

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