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you an ass >.< WWwHWHHHHYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!
5917678 Excuse me, would you mind explaining what you meant by that?
5917706 the level of shipping is crazy here atop teasing me >.<
I personnaly dislike this version of Celestia. Remind me to much of some distastefull characters. Especially with that last line to Larry.
Well , mostly because I can't stand the "casual lover" kind (especially the rich playboy womanizer archetype . In our case , Zeus from the greek mythology come to mind , even if he had more dubious reasons.)
Granted , i get her reason for doing this , she explained that well enough in the previous chapter but... well , Celestia's conduct that the present chapter hint at echoes with my strong distate for those type.
Well , it at least means that Luna has a stronger will. She made do with herself for one thousand years after all....
Then again , this is just a pet peeves of mine and I might be a tad old fashionned in that regard.
5918723 You're welcome to your own opinion, of course, and thank you for not trying to shove it down our throats like some people.
Anyway, as Celestia explained in this chapter, she tends to associate the human form with sex. Ergo, when she changes into a human, she subconsciously begins acting more sensual, as the spell is molded to fit her desires.
Ironically, this is, in fact, a contradiction with something else she says in this chapter: she doesn't want to rely on magic to have fun, yet she casts a spell to transform herself in order to have fun... I just now realized this.
Wow! So far this has been pretty awesome! I'm really looking forward to more!
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That middle name is canon for me now.
I know I heard that from somewhere. Where is that from?
5917839 This is a TwiWright clopfic, you should have expected this by now.
5919831 That major malfunction line is from Full Metal Jacket. Gunny Hartman FTW.
5918160 Eh. I'm not expecting a fight between the two of them. Much to my chagrin, that is a ship that's going to have to sink. However, I hope that it'll be handled with class.
5919851 I knew it. I remembered that line. Even though I didn't even see the movie.
Blackmail material, I'm seeing it now.
"Sleeping with a horse! Everything alright, Wright?"
5918723
Celestia likes to tease, and even troll, but there's nothing casual about what she's doing. That's her long-time lover, who she doesn't get to see very often and who we'll meet later. She said she's loved and treasured all her lovers in turn, and this one is no different. As for what she did to Twilight... part of it was teasing, part of it was what Leo said... but part of it was she genuinely wants Twilight to know her real self and not the persona she has to project most of the time.
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Sorry, but I'm very big on teases. If I'm leaving you groaning in agony, I consider my work done there.
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Thanks!
5919861
Yep. Good movie, classic scene, iconic character. There was also one other major movie reference in there, regarding Celestia that nobody's pointed out yet. Did you catch it?
5919851
Things with Iris will be handled when we get to that stage of the story. That's all I can say for now...
Well, I can't say I like the "no inhibitions is your true self" human thing. It makes more sense for celestia since she maybe can't be herself normally as a pony. However for twilight, she is her normal self all the time, and it's the HUMAN form where she is acting different.
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I 100% agree. Just be patient. Things have to happen in their proper order and lessons learned in due course.
That is indeed a question they're already grappling with, and will have to figure out the answer to.
Indeed it is, and both Vinyl and Celestia made that point to Twilight. But as Celestia says, she can't easily have lovers in Equestria. Earth and the human form is her escape from the pressures of being a princess and where she can let her proverbial hair down. That is NOT to say she only has sex as a human, however...
Not yet. Have faith, sir. I know where I'm taking the story. It isn't realistic for all questions to be answered up front. Some only are in the proper course of things.
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Is she, though? You saw how she was acting towards Phoenix in Turnabout Storm. She pretty much offered herself to him in part 59, snuck peeks at him naked, teased him repeatedly in later chapters, and things happened at the party she doesn't remember. So as Celestia says, she *was* herself and all that really changed here was the manner in which it happened.
But Celestia and Vinyl didn't say Twilight had 'no inhibitions'. Celestia suggested that she (Celestia herself) perhaps becomes 'slightly less inhibited' for what she has come to associate the human form with, while Vinyl simply said that maybe the human form was loosening Twilight up a bit and helping to bring out that side of her not unlike Pinkie's party punch. Plausible given her unfamiliarity with her human body and being caught off guard by it.
“I’m impressed, though. You handled my teleportation, and quite successfully I might add. Most humans vomit their first time…”
“Can’t imagine why…”
I want to say these lines were used by Albus Dumbledore and Harry Potter. Excellent story, btw.
Oh no, Celestia's sad! Quick, Firesight! Write a Twilestia fic... or, even a Dusklestia fic.
... I hate to be "that guy", but... I don't remember Maya from Apollo Justice onwards (then again, Phoenix never even have his NAME mentioned in the Investigation series, so maybe they're still in touch. He's gotta be getting his Steel Samurai DVD's from SOMEWHERE.).
Huh... was she talking about paizuris?
... ... .......!!!!!!..... . . . I knew it. The very instant Celestia was talking to Twilight about how it is to be immortal, and the "benefits" of being human, that Larry Butz was going to meet Celestia. I don't know HOW I knew, but I just did... I feel pretty sorry for him, though; he's like Brock: you WANT him to have the time of day, but he doesn't get it because either A. He messes it up somehow, or B. Life just sucks. In this case, it's a mix of both, as he not only did A happen by fawning over Celestia when he just admitted to having a girlfriend (however bad she may have been), but had B happen by the WORST POSSIBLE OUTCOME OF CAUSALITY EVER... well, maybe he'll become a famous artist and live as an accomplished bachelor; he CAN reproduce any event he's seen through detailed drawings, after all...
WAIT A SECOND!! I CAUGHT UP!? DANG IT!!! Now I'll have to favorite your story 5 times for how awesome it is!
5920144 Snowdrop is so adorable! Also, that's not blackmail material, that's Captain Kirk's diplomacy.
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Princess Celestia representing the Element of, Mischief!
Troll.
Fair enough.
I see.
Turnabout is very fair play, after all, Nick is the Turnabout Terror.
Speak for yourself.
You will do nothing, they are both consenting rational adults, what they do is their business.
And bad fanfic writers.
Eh?
You kinda have.
Riiight. You realize you launched wave of PhoenixWorth slashfics, right?
Discord...
I find this way funnier than I should. Also, Celestia, pardon the joke, but I think it's less WHAT you want to do, and more WHO you want to do.
That's, pretty smart.
Ooh myy!
HEH!
A Japanese restaurant perhaps?
Called it.
I see.
Indeed.
HEH!
Oh this is going to be fun!
A goddess he says, oh if only he knew.
You moron, even I know that's a faux pas.
Eh?
Him.
Troll.
Oooh myyy!
He's got a point.
Man oh MAN do you not want me to answer that
Fair enough.
Daaw.
Whoohoohoo! Another great chapter, nicely done man!
This was nicely done, nothign went wrong that I could see.
All in all, good show kid, good show.
Keep it up!
5921112
... THANK YOU! I'M NOT THE ONLY ONE WHO NOTICED!
LISTEN UP, EVERYPONY, I'VE GOT SOMETHING IMPORTANT TO SAY: FANFIC WRITERS CAN COMMIT CHARACTER ASSASSINATIONS!... Not so much Firesight, though. Sure, Maya's a TOUCH vindictive, and he kinda missed a great opportunity to make Spitfire Shi-Long Lang's counterpart (They're intimidating, wear shades occasionally, a part of a familial occupation that's survived hundreds of years, and sometimes they are a few hairs short of the truth [like with Lightning Dust/"Shih-na"]), but he's certainly not a character ASSASSINATOR.
5919851 B-... But I LIKE Wriris! It's like the only canon pairing that was legit... except for the fact that she was arrested, but still!
And yeah, I know it's not going to be an epic fight scene, I just wanted to say the eventual confrontation that'll happen in a humorous way.
5924034 Feenris is my OTP. But for the sake of this story, that ship has to sink. I just want to see it done with some class.
5924279 Huh, Franzworth is MY personal OTP (They're so cute together, especially in the Investigations series)...
I just thought of something RIDICULOUSLY STUPID, but would solve all of his problems! OK, what if... Wright established a herd?... I know, it's stupid, but I just had to say it.
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I was making a joke! It was a jab at mostly grimdarks. Prime example, Cupcakes.
5925641 Well yeah, I know that. But unfortunately, character assassination does happen. For example, there was this one fic where Trixie turned out, not only to be Sunset Shimmer, but a black market dealer as well, all so the author didn't have to write about either character. Heck, one guy even replaced Detective Gumshoe with an OC CHARACTER! Hell, there's even one fic where Luna is labeled as a murderer, a rapist (though there was initial consent, so I have no idea why no one mentioned that in the story. Besides, it'd be more like abuse if you think about it.), and insane, and it still hasn't ended, despite the fact it's already been MORE THAN 130 CHAPTERS!!!... The point is, there are some messed up writers out there.
That's kind of odd, though, because aside from the obvious psychosis and murderous intents, wasn't Cupcakes Pinkie Pie considered one of the more realistic depictions?
5924012 Uh, where was it stated that the Wonderbolts were a familial organization? That's not the case at all. The Bolt Knights were founded by Firefly, but it wasn't just her and her family in it, far from it.
5925841 ... Er... I dunno? Sorry, kind of a spur of the moment thing... Although, if you take into account that pegasi are typically depicted as a militaristic clan, not to mention that everyone is essentially a distant cousin, then it'd resolve itself in that manner. Not to mention... if Rainbow Dash somehow managed to be a descendant of Firefly, who's not to say that Spitfire is related in the same way (After all, mares can have herds too, right?)? People become a part of the military all the time because their family was (Except me, 'cause I'm weird), so who's not to say Spitfire became a Wonderbolt for similar reasons? Even if Shi-Long Lang wanted to be an investigator, his familial position didn't give him that, his efforts did. I mean, if your family name is dragged through the mud because of evil prosecutors, and STILL have the highest arrest rate in all of Interpol, you'd have to use SERIOUS amounts of effort...
Of course, that isn't to say that Spitfire would ver use her familial connections as the reson for how she became the leader of the Wonderbolts. Even if she WAS somehow relaed, I think she'd keep i relatively low-key, and any utterance of a possible connection with Firefly would simply be a hint to a connection between her... well, hat's what I would do if I could put Spitfire in my Edgeworth sidestory that I'm not writing... Surprise could probably be Kay, a couple of OC's could represent some other characters, MAYBE Maud Pie as Detective Badd, MAYBE Fleetfoot as Shih-na, and maybe Tirek as Simon Keyes... I dunno, just some thoughts.
5920545
Um, I kind of already am.
Wish you could, believe me!
5926319 Huh, thought this was a Twiwright fic... oh well, it was nice while it lasted.
5921112
Thanks again for all the commentary!!!!! Your posts are one the highlights of these chapter releases, now...
It's Trollestia, with at least a hint of Molestia.
Sorry to disappoint, but there's plenty already out there!
Glad to know you enjoyed the chapter! Especially looking forward to your commentary on the *next* one...
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It very much is, but that's not the only thing happening!
5926348 ... OK, it looks like I wasn't COMPLETELY wrong. It's not Phoenix who's getting a herd (Well maybe, only time will tell), but rather- I see.
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I dunno about Molestia, Molestia tends to be a pervert that will screw anything that moves, this Celestia has standards.
I was afraid of that.
Oh?
5927326
As I think about that, you're right. I stand corrected.
Yep. You won't have long to wait.
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Grante, she does associate her human form with sex, but she's not going to say, screw Twilight. She might screw WITH her, but not screw her.
Sweet.
I feel bad for Larry..... Why do I want to see him go out with Celestia...
I was going to weight till I was up to date with the story to post but this chapter is just to good.
princess celestia cutting lose so to speak that is scary in a good way with her powers and stamina her partner better be in really good shape or she will brake him.
as to twilight and Phoenix he is doing the best thing he can do right now. just hold Twilight and love her, she is in shock right now.
this story is really good and has a really good plot to it.
Harts Fire
I know you mustve had a lot (and I guess a lot) of people ask if there will be court room shenanigans and that sort of thing and I wonder the same thing,or...will it be just Twenix shenanigans?
Okay. I like this story. Just not as a sequel to Turnabout Storm. I feel that it the story so far completely demolishes the charm of the original series and what makes MLP and Ace Attorney enjoyable, replacing it with a decent romance story. I'm giving you a thumbs-up because this fic is great as a standalone and as a continuation of the romantic sub-plot you introduced in the novelization. Plus, you're a good writer. It just isn't what I (and probably many who downvoted this) want as a sequel to one of the greatest crossovers I ever watched.
Dang, so many feels!
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She knows exactly how it went, but in her mind, a) he doesn’t need to know right then that she was there watching and helping, and b) she also knows that right now, he needs to just talk and order his thoughts, so she’ll let him do it to get what he needs to off his chest. Mia has a major role to come, though it’ll take a while yet to reach that.
In the meantime, welcome to the story!
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That’s what I expected to happen.
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Larry's not a bad guy, but you absolutely hate having to deal with him in the games. And yeah, there are times you really want to smack him like that when he's being particularly obtuse or idiotic. But in this case? It's not the first time Celestia has been so clumsily hit on as a human, and she gets more enjoyment out of teasing/trolling than she would embarrassing or punishing him. Larry truly does have no idea how far out of his league Celly is, but he'll also forget about her as soon as he sees another cute skirt.
8820923
When something smells, its usually the Butz
Is Twilight going to have a crash on Celestia's human form now?
And that's why she needs to get laid, just not with her own student.
What dark ages? Luna would feel right at home on Japanese islands during that time period of civil wars, bloodshed, and badassery.
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Perhaps. You’ll have to read on further to find out if or where it goes.
And that's why she needs to get laid, just not with her own student. Exactly. And that’s where this guy comes in. You’ll learn more about him later.
This is going to be changed in the coming story edits, though it’s not the Japanese islands she’ll favor.