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Yikes.
Digimon Adventure 02 finale. That's all I have to say.
Here, here!
She's not quite wrong.
That's the general fanon.
Ah.
That's presumably the IDEA.
If you can catch a pony going at super sonic speed.
... I'm, not surprised.
She has more backup plans than goddamn Xehanort.
Of course not.
No, fuck off.
Maya! NIGHTMARE, YOU FUCKING BITCH!
Yes. And, tell me, WHY ARE YOU LISTENING TO SOMEONE CALLED NIGHTMARE?!
Uh?
Whoa there!
She's probably enhancing her rage.
Shut it!
I'd have aimed a bit more to the side.
Smart.
She has magic. I'm sure she can find a way.
Eh, I listen to some Power Metal now and again, but gimme Mozart any day.
Any more pride and she'd ben friggin' Vegeta.
A cliffhanger. Goddammit.
7609545 Maya's beaten, bloody appearance, that graphical screw up, and her first rant up until after "Snatch" is all me. Impressed, sir?
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Quite.
And it conntinues.
I haven't read this yet as I don't like reading in progress stories (makes remembering what I read in-between chapters hard to remember) but I am going to use up one of my questions to the author beforehand, and ask, "Does this involve Twilight and Phoenix solving court cases in the human world as well, or is it just a romance?"
I don't mind a character based romance or even the fact they are together at this point but it would be so cool to see Twilight solve cases as well as Maya (assuming this doesn't take place while she is gone between the conclusion of Trials and Tribulations and the new game which I haven't played yet nor do I want spoilers for outside knowing she returns somehow) being both Co-council and lover as well (Twilight not Maya)
There is a huge appeal to this and even when I skimmed a bad ending of Turnabout Storm, I find it stupidly amusing that Dash was implied to be an assistant to Phoenix in said bad ending.
I don't mind a romantic clopfic between the two, but is it all romance or does Twilight help in court cases as well. The only reason I am asking instead of waiting for it to complete and finding out for myself is because it finally got to me and I couldn't ignore that possibility.
I will give a much better comment once this story is done and I can read it myself. I have gripes on humanized ponies but my desire to read the closest thing we have to a sequel overrides my slight squick of Humanized ponies. I just had to know... so I can stop driving myself to madness over wondering what this story is like.
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This is an M-rated romance story for the most part, but it also segues into a very unusual trial at the end, which I will not detail here except to say it settles the question once and for all of whether what Phoenix and Twilight have is real or is somehow magically induced and has the highest possible stakes. Even before that there is lots of X-rated action and character development throughout the course of this story involving everyone from Twilight and Phoenix to people like Maya and Celestia, and I take the opportunity to engage in a fair amount of worldbuilding as well. The story will probably not be finished for some months yet, given the chapter sizes, so feel free to start reading if you don't want to wait. It's already novel-length and I like to think is perfectly suitable for rereading.
The sequel of this story will involve Twilight helping out in the cases of Trials and Tribulations, which hasn't happened in this timeline yet.
You don't like humanized? Well, there is some of that, but there will also be straight (so to speak) human-on-pony action. But even for the humanized, just give it a try. You might be surprised at the context.
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I am not the person to give into what is a squick to me. (I hate anthro with a passion but have read a few stories with it... I just have to like what it involves) I may not read M rated romance of actual Phoenix Wright Characters, but if there is a pony in it and the story isn't like horrible or anything, I may read it. (age old rule: Ponies make everything better!)
Twilight with Trials and Tribulations!? OMG, I just replayed that game not too long ago. It made me cry... again... I don't mind M rated Romance... hell, this is the closest thing we have to a sequel, I was highly addicted to the world building of the original. Only real gripe I had was Trixie... as I actually like Trixie... but that was a fault of the original video series so I can't technically complain. Plus, she reminds me a little of Franziska a bit.
I will keep this on standby and probably squee (loudly) when it is complete... I just have issues with reading in progress stories as my memory SUCKS... and it's a safety precaution. Stories I followed and read religiously have been cancelled before, so I wait.
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Why do I suspect Maya is Nightmare 's Ace in the hole not only regarding Twilight's possession, but as an alternative host and escape route if plan A goes awry?
Another chapter. Another longpost that only the stout of heart can wade through. There will be no cucumber sandwiches.
You could always ask to guard the dreams of 3rd shift people. Come check out mine sometime. They can be surprisingly epic.
With this bit and the bit about the course seeming to take longer than 12 weeks, I'm not convinced the training doesn't just consist of reading Fallout Equestria fanfiction.
What ever happened to lying by omission? You ponies and your caveats!
Spongebob Squarehorse. True story: a bunch of NEETS actually got offended because of how well the episode described them. Kkat was talking about it on her blog. (chuckle)
Oh why does this turn me on so much? Fucking normal people get to be normal and I have to stare at this pony's ass. Sure glad there's a website dedicated to this stuff...
In truth, the earth ponies took heavy casualties and things looked pretty bad. It was sheer stubbornness and Rock Biter's strategy of wearing down the occupiers resolve with round-the-clock fighting that finally brought them to heel, combined with the huge pincer movement the pegasi launched to cut the gryphons off from the outside world. 'Twas a very close-run thing.
I don't really get it either, Trixie.
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No, a reading perch!
Blown. The. Fuck. Out.
I might be one of the few bronies out there that really dig the Trixie look. Yeah, it'd look cheesy on anyone else, but she makes a good case for it!
Trixie feels like she's speaking for me here! We should go bowling. I bet we could find a lot of common ground on shit.
My first clopfic was a human and Trixie, actually. I'm guessing she won't hold out too long in this verse either.
You've had the rest, now have the best! No more blowing smoke up our ass. Moonie is breaking out the big guns!
Wew, lad!
Maya, if you ever get bored with channeling spirits, you could make a career out of shitposting.
That means you, Applejack! The whole truth! You are such a sexy pirate. Oh my god...
Successful troll!
You can find your way anywhere with enough ecstasy and wubs.
Does anyone else here Benny Lava in their head whenever she says V-jay? It's a curse!
Please tell me she doesn't want to swim in it...
I'm glad they're finally going to hash this out. I'm not even sure what exactly Maya and Vinyl have going on between them. They had sex but Maya clearly has no idea what to do with that information. Enjoy your longpost sensei and I look forward to your reply!
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That puts you ahead of many other readers on this site.
Don't worry, this story is anything but horrible. Don't let the number of downvotes fool you; most of them come from people who DV'd on the basis of the ship alone without ever reading it, though there was one idiot who somehow managed to not read the description, tags, or comments, started reading then complained when he got a few chapters in and discovered it was a clopfic. Just be clear that you know what's coming--this is an M-rated romance novel with several side ships other than the TwiWright one and includes a very unique trial at the end.
I'm playing through it now for the first time, on case 3. But yes, I know what's coming... as you probably already gleaned from the TAS novelization.
Then you definitely won't be disappointed here! There's plenty.
Watch out if (when!) those two ever get together! Be afraid, Phoenix... But actually, Franny does appear a couple times in this story. The second time in particular seems to be a fan favorite...
You needn't worry. We're just a few chapters from the end at this point; believe me when I say I have no intention of canceling it! You shouldn't feel you have to wait, though. I mean, 24 chapters and 197,000 words should keep you pretty busy for a while!
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My only real squicks are, Rape, Gore, ABDL (and it's related fetishes) death, and downer endings or Love triangles (I like people to be happy, not lose a friend based on loving the same person)
Everything else is because I don't particularly like it... but if it is good or the summery hooks me, I can read human and anthro I just don't like them in clopfics... I know none of the above squicks are in this story, but I tend to avoid them with little exceptions (unless it is roleplay or pseudo) and even that's bad. I tend to at least read something before giving up on something and I rarely downvote things I don't like. I don't even upvote things I don't like (if people do that.. I can understand downvoting things they don't like, but who downvotes things they do like... or upvotes things they absolutely hated with a passion? Trollfic parodies seem to be liked... and I don't count sarcastic upvotes)
I only DV'd one time and that was a story that had no redeeming qualities and was just a random death rape fic with a million to one dislikes. I didn't need to read it...
By the way, do you plan on crossovering with the Investigation duo of games either as a Trials and Tribulations extended universe, or just as a nod, cause Kay Faraday (rivals Maya and Pearls as best assistant) and I would adore her to get more love. She all but vanished after Prosecutor's Path (don't you hate it when we don't get a game in the states, that's Japan exclusive?)
It's fine if you don't plan on it, but she can make a wonderful impression on some ponies... maybe Twilight... If you haven't played that series yet, fine, but Kay needs more love! She can't vanish from the series...
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I can respect that. For the most part, those aren't anything I'd be interested in either, though I admit I'm not above some mildly NC stuff. I don't do grimdark, but I have done some pretty crazy stuff. If you want a completed story to look at where I completely go all out with no limits (because I felt like I really needed to cut loose in a story as opposed to my more 'serious' clopfics), check out Unleash the Magic on my story page. That's Equestria Girls based and very, very M-rated. Then again, you said don't go for humanized...
I too have have DV'd but one story in my life, and that was because it had a promising start and then took a very cheap kick-the-reader-in-the-gut way out. You won't get that with my stories. My philosophy on ratings is this: if I enjoyed a story and want to see more/would read it a second time, I'll upvote it. Else, I just move on.
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There's already a nod or two to the AA Investigation games in this story, and even one towards Duel Destines. Bring on Kay Faraday? I do like the idea. We'll have to see how feasible it is. Kay and Maya would get along quite well to be sure. and I'm sure Twilight would take a shine to her as well. We'll have to see going forward.
And yes, I do hate it when they made games Japan-exclusive. The one I'd really like to play is The Great Ace Attorney (Dai Gyakuten Saiban), which is set in the 19th century and features the English jurist system and even Sherlock Holmes.
What a doozy of a twist. I hope that Fluttershy gets her happy ending too.
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You're so cruel! I bet you blame me for the boat capsizing, too!
How do you know they're not just bored and making you those dreams?
With a side of Unleash the Magic...
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Considering how much that episode made me want to punch Zephyr in the face repeatedly, I have to call it an accurate depiction of them. Ship him off to military school and make Fell Flight train him! I'd pay money to see that...
You said it! *brohoof*
Indeed. It wasn't just pegasi, though--The Royal Guard spearheaded the flank attacks, marking their first major appearance and offensive in the war. It fell to the Equestrian Army and local militia to hold the town for as long as possible and draw in as many of the gryphons as possible where they could be trapped. It was Firefly's brainchild, and she personally led one of the flanking prongs, trapping the 6th Grand Legion in Stalliongrad, crippling gryphon offensive strength for months to come and ending the second great Imperial offensive.
Your rustles have been jimmied!
Can't sleep... ponies are watching me...
Or if you prefer, Burned. The Fuck. Up. I thought about letting Phoenix do the job, but it felt more appropriate to have the Nightmare do it when decided that Red Phoenix was doing more harm than good.
I love her base look without the costume, which I honestly think detracts from it. She'll get a new outfit when she fully accepts her power and Luna's offer of apprenticeship. Sadly, that means she won't be allowed to remember everything that happens in this trial, because Luna's not done testing her. She puts her dream guard candidates through hell, imagine how she tests a prospective apprentice. Actually, no need to imagine it, that was in the last chapter of TAS!
And shitposting!
G4M, I presume? That was a pretty good version of her...
Give the Nightmare due credit. She kept this tactic well-hidden until just the right moment, and even caught Mia by surprise.
If you think she's bad now, just wait until she posts about this on Facebook!
Yaaar! That really was a cute episode this morning...
You can find your way anywhere with enough ecstasy and wubs.Hear hear! You can be sure Vinyl has plenty of experience with illicit potions and the equivalent of acid trips.
Great... now you got me doing it!
Well, you've got it! Appreciated as always...
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Who downvoted your comment and why...? Yours are always among my favorites to read.
Poor Fluttershy won't be the same for this any more than Phoenix will.
Are deliberate omissions lies? Depends on who you talk to... but she's right, nobody ever asked her.
Who am I to fight it?
Very much so.
Actually, they once faced another pony in battle who could perform it... and no, it wasn't Firefly.
That's our dorkalicious unicorn.
You know, the actor who played the guy Vader choked actually died just fairly recently...
In fairness, she hasn't survived as long as she has by being dumb for the most part. She has definitely made contingency plans, of which Maya is one.
Sadly, it's not that easy...
Like I said a chapter or two back--nothing and nobody is off-limits to her. She'll do anything or use anyone to advance her aims, then discard them without a second thought. Being completely amoral has its advantages.
Good point. Perhaps I'll change it at that point so she just calls her Prosecutor Moon.
Funky text that apparently some people have trouble seeing.
She's clearly not in her right mind either. Nightmare's manipulating her in a slightly different way than Twilight.
... among other things. All will be revealed.
Suddenly, she's not as in control of the proceedings as she would like.
It wouldn't have hurt her much, but I can agree with the sentiment.
Vinyl's a mare who knows just what she's about. But she wasn't lying when she said she's a mare of many talents. She may discover another one here.
Most definitely. Even on earth, Celestia could level a city if she wanted to.
I was raised on classical, and that's probably why I don't care much for it now. I do listen to Sabaton, which is certainly metal and does inspire of some of my writing.
That's okay. In that case, Vinyl is Android 18.
It's my usual thing. Did it a lot in Turnabout Storm too. But at this point, there's only a couple chapters left in the trial. Things are heading towards climax. Take that as you will.
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Thank you. What would you consider a happy ending for her here?
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Good song... may use later.
There is something entertainingly morbid of Oldbag and some ponies meeting. I am sorry for all the questions, replaying Investigations and later the second game and remembering all these characters. I assume Larry is getting a cameo at some point... but Oldbag is one the best side characters in the game mostly because of her yandere (she isn't going to murder him at any point, but she is squickally devoted to a younger man, practically a kid compared to her (unless there is a joke there that she is secretly younger than her sprite looks and the game designers want to weird people out) personality toward Edgeworth... I can't explain it... It could be a bizarre Tsundere as well...
Please tell me you are considering Wendy Oldbag at some point... (please tell you are NOT going to hook her up with Edgy, as entertaining as that is, it is equally horrifying) in the series.
7610854 Herding with Phoenix and Twilight is Fluttershy's happy ending.
"ceiling pegasus reading perch" should be "pegasus ceiling reading perch"
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My guess? Someone doesn't care for my running commentary.
Nope.
Exactly.
Considering the name, my guess is they're the Elite of the Griffon forces. Or were, rather.
Interesting.
Indeed. Glad to see she's starting to fight back.
Wow, that's, sad, he was really good, at least at pretending to be psychically choked.
True, but at least Xehanort comes back in creative ways, differently each way, Ansem Seeker of Darkness, Xemnas, himself, Young Xehanort, etc.
If only.
Indeed.
Maybe a good idea. Because otherwise, manipulated or not, that reeks of Genre Blindness, I may not know much about the Phoenix Wright universe, but it seems to me that trusting someone called NIGHTMARE is a grave violation of common sense.
Ah.
Yep, Rage Awakened indeed.
Uh oh.
Which is great.
Hey, if it hurts Nightmare, even a little, I'm all for it.
Being multi talented is useful.
That's what happens when you have the power of the Sun at your disposal thousands of years of experience, and a hella lot of combat experience. She's at least a Nappa level threat. And considering how easily he wiped a city off the map and annihilated Earth's military, each.
That's fair.
Ooh, does she get to break her arms?!
Oh dear.
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Larry does have a cameo, and a rather memorable one at that as he tries to hit on someone who, shall we say, is WAY out of his league. Oldbag has not appeared to this point, but no, I would not hook her up with Edgey-Poo. Rarity, on the other hoof... Other notable cameos to this point include a couple from Franny. I daresay you would like the second one in particular, as most of the readers did!
One the subject of Oldbag, however, you should like this:
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That's one of those things where if I don't do it, some readers get disappointed, but if I do, others get upset. Some really want it, others are dead-set against any sort of herd-like arrangement. So what is a writer to do...?
What I always do... find a way to finesse it. As Phoenix now has multiple mares and his own assistant interested in him, the subject will have to be addressed by story's end. Either he'll decide he's a one-mare man, or...
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Fixed, and thank you.
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In a word, why? Running commentaries like yours are my favorite, and few people give them. You and AJA, pretty much.
Exactly. Though like the Bolt Knights, their name and purpose changed over the years. They're now the Silver Wings, the Gryphon Kingdom's aerial performance team, though unlike the pony version, they're still soldiers first.
Said pony will make an appearance in Rise of Firefly eventually.
The truth is seeping in despite The Nightmare's best efforts, helped by the presence of Phoenix and her friends. But there's now a major new blow coming... is Vinyl up to the task?
She can take any guise she wants. She's just chosen Nightmare Moon here.
Went ahead and changed it.
Though it's worth noting that once again, The Nightmare can't use what isn't already in your heart. She can, however, enhance it to the nth degree.
It ain't gonna be pretty, but the ending should be oh-so-satisfying.
I think the entire story readership is at this point! Guess I've depicted her well then...
Her stay on earth following this should be... interesting.
Celestia as Nappa? Can't say I thought of the comparison, but... https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4d4vGIH36ss
To little surprise, it especially helps with writing my Firefly battle scenes.
Just her case, but in many ways that's even more painful here.
I'd reply with the "Oh my!" gif, but it's overused at this point.
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At least Celestia is more than a nearly decade old meme.
Yay! I honestly love the Androids, they're really underused, I mean, for one, they're capable of curbstomping a case Super Saiyan, that's pretty impressive in terms of power, and we rarely see much of them.
Never stopped the Internet before.
7611611 Finesse the heck out of it.
Wheeeeeeeew hot damn man... I get so tired of how drawn out this is, but then you all throw in shit that draws me back in...
Fuckin' A man!
Missing a Quotation mark.
Nice job man!
7613867 It's only gonna get funnier from there.
I'm surprised you haven't used any song from the Spirit of Justice OST yet... I can see A Cornered Heart being very good here... Suddenly remembers an event involving Apollo at the final case that featured said song Goddamn it, I didn't want to think about that! That was a plot twist so heart-wrenchingly sad for both Apollo and Nahyuta! In any case, on to my OC chats!
Zodiac: Zap Apple Ether? I didn't know those kinds of fruits have a spirit in them even if they are considered living... Guess that explains how Pinkie does it with her special drink.
Destiny: Think I could one of those drinks father? I mean, as long as you watch over me then...
Zodiac: As long as I still have a sense of sanity before and after I drink it, you and Pure can drink it to your heart's content.
Pure: Thank you father! So... what about the current event we're watching? I'm surprised you're allowing us to even watch this anyway father...
Destiny: Pure's words do ring true...
Zodiac: No worries you two, you weren't raised under someone with no knowledge anyway. Besides, I've heard that learning this earlier helps the people in knowing what to expect.
Destiny: If you say so... I'm just more concerned about the human named Maya in question...
Zodiac: So do I... I do not like where this is going and no less what the Nightmare is doing right now. Truly wish I was there to get rid of her personally
Pure: I wish we were there so I can shot her with my anti-magic rifle!
Zodiac: Really Pure? Guns right now?
Pure: What? You already know that I'm tech-savvy even in my youth!
Destiny: Don't leave me out though! I want to get her too!
Zodiac: Haha... Oh what I do with your antics you two...
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Believe me when I say I can read 499 pages (I have a nook, I added this story as it is now to it and that is what it is telling me is the page number as it is now) in a very small amount of time. Especially if it is exciting. I read a two thousand five hundred and forty-four (hurray for spelling out numbers) in two weeks time and very little in the way of breaks except to sleep and eat... that may not sound like much, and still quite some time... but keep in mind I am a quick reader if I like what I read.
I can catch up (currently re-reading Turnabout Storm) quickly ignoring how I am waiting to finish TS first in as little as a week or less. On an unrelated, but still pretty cool note, I can beat a Phoenix Wright game in three days. I haven't Played Spirit of Justice or whatever yet as I don't have the funds and desperately and slightly selfishly hope you don't reference it.
Is there really an anime based on Phoenix Wright? I know of a Manga, but I thought it stopped at those (games and manga) two. When did they have an anime? Is it dubbed (I normally try to avoid the whole Dub VS Sub debate (did see a few Subs... Paprika, Mirai Nikki or Future Diary) but I played the American version of Dual Destinies and don't want to hear the Japanese voices for an anime based on a dub for a video game) and can I watch it online?
Played a fan case recently that was awesome... Shattered Glass where Edgey was a Defense Attorney (complete with Von Karma as co-council for the opening case) Larry was the accidental murderer who killed in self-defense, Cindy and was amazing. With knowledge of the first game in my head, I can assume Mia is the Big Bad for Phoenix who tries to frame and cover up a murder on Phoenix. Sadly this was released with only the beginning case. Admit that sounds amazing though. Franny is Edgy's Maya for the game, and probably uses a more honorable (like Manny Von Karma who is still obsessed with a perfect win record... but only if you do so with proper evidence to declare the client not guilty... he is still kinda dubious, but more like Mia) version of her Whip happy tendencies. I don't know if he is killed off though like Mia was and how this factors into everything, but it was three years ago that it was released... I cried when I couldn't find a case 2...
Most of the above is rambling and should go into a PM.. but it sounds weird and kinda awkward to just PM you about something like this
I only just realised in my head that you responded a while ago and as I was bored I decided to calculate how long it would take me to catch up to this story... I kinda rambled, in the story comment section instead...
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I don't use songs directly from MLP or Ace Attorney in this story. That would be boring, and too easy. Remixes and fan songs, however, are fair game.
This even applies to the Cross Exam themes, too. Yes, really. I got most of the CR themes from a game called Bejeweled Twist. Specifically, the CR themes that have a letter of some kind, such as Cross Examination A, or Cross Examination B ~ Allegro.
I also occasionally put special Cross Examination themes in for specific situations. Expect Maya to have one, for example.
7623305 Really? That's actually very interesting... Well, I won't complain about the choices in music, was just wondering is all
7626254 In case you're interested, my YouTube Channel actually has soundtrack playlists filled with music to use as mood music. Seriously. 5 playlists, one for each category. Across all of them, I've got more than 100 music tracks saved up,
They are unlisted, so you need a direct link to them to gain access to them. They're mainly for Firesight and Leo Archon to look at, and for me to organise future ideas for music.
The closest I have to actual MLP songs is a bunch of fan-made MLP instrumental tracks. Mainly used as character themes, of sorts. I think I showed that off in Rarity's testimony a few chapters ago...
Oh, and I'm using remixes for Phoenix Wright's theme, and Maya Fey's theme.
But the general music selection is across many varieties of sources, trust me. Hell, I used a song from Nightwish in an earlier chapter!
7629992 Cool! I really should start buying songs that are not MLP related, the only ones in mind that definitely fit that are songs from Globus, Two Steps From Hell and others
Is it weird I kind of wanna see Objection! in this
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zdVIB0kNktc
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I appreciate the enthusiasm, believe me! But unfortunately, the next chapter will probably not be out for several weeks at least, and I think it unlikely at this point the story will complete before the end of the year. I just have too many other writing projects underway and I tend to shift back and forth between them. Best guess is that there are 4-5 chapters remaining in the story at this point. So honestly... I'd just go ahead and read it. If you want a natural stopping point, that would probably be at part 17, the beginning of the story climax (figuratively and later literally!)
Glad to know you like the concept of Twilight exploring Phoenix's world. Plenty of worldbuliding and character development ahead, to say nothing of a whole lot of varied naughtiness. Hope you enjoy!
7653721 I suggest reading up until Wisdom of the Sun's end. I feel that's the best stopping point as of now, honestly.
Plus, I put a little something after the chapter there you might appreciate. A video of sorts. Hehe...
7653721 Also, Von Karma shows up later, and you just have to see what goes down when she threatens Phoenix in Twilight's presence.
Hahaha.......
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You wonderful man! I've read Longest Night, Longest Day. When I tried describing the uncanny and thoroughly disconcerting feeling the experience brought me, I couldn't quite put my finger on it. You just summed it up in two sentences like it was nothing! It's a well-written story with decent characters and a great villain, but seeing the Mane Six played like that, especially Applejack, was just gutting.
FoE was the first fanfiction I ever read, not counting a rather explicit Britney Spears one I found in an ancient 1990's-era movie review website that... has inspired some of my own work. I can completely understand your reluctance to read it based on its reputation. I imagine if I hadn't found MLP fanfiction through FoE, I would have avoided it like the plague. It's rough, especially chapters 3 through 5. Holy hell, what a holocaust of a thousand childhoods that reading experience was! Having read through it a second time this year, up to about chapter 25, I think the worst part about that story is the self-hating white-person feel to it. Oh, we're the real savages with our technology and running water, and blah, blah, blah. Couldn't we have done more for the religiously zealous and backwards zebras to prevent war? How could our leaders be so callous as to experiment on our own kind with the future of our people at stake?
I can't be sure of how much of Fallout Equestria is Kkat's cosmopolitan elite politics or how much is Fallout itself having never played Fallout 3, but if you didn't want to read through 600,000+ words of dead, dying, raped, splayed, burnt, irradiated, and tortured colorful equines there's that too.
7659885 Fallout is a game where you can blow up a town with a nuclear bomb as one of the first things you ever do in the game.
Yuuup.
It's been a while since I have read this! I have to say that this chapter is one of my favorites!
Finally caught up! And hoo boy, is this heating up!
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Welcome and glad to see you! I notice you blew through Turnabout Storm and this story pretty quickly. Hope you've enjoyed both so far!
7720509 Well, both stories had been sitting in my bookshelves for a while, and I wanted to finish them
Welp...... I'm reading this AFTER the season 7 announcements......
The ones regarding Dash's and AJ's parents.....
Yeah, I thought about what Luna does with her night guards. That is called sexual harrasment, you know
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Back before her banishment, it was part of the job description.