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Welp, like I said before, not really into the whole... whatever happened before at the end of the first chapter. And as bad as it may make me, I breezed through it, but... I will say this.
It was written well, enjoyable for plenty, I'm sure. Had some good moments, so nice job! I'm not sure what's gonna happen next... but chances are it's not gonna be my thing, what with the ropes and collar and all.
So... apologies once again, I'm not upset! This is a damn good story, just probably not into whatever's happening next.
So keep it up man, legit.
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Answered by PM, but I’ll reiterate here: the next chapter won’t be what you’re thinking, so don’t be afraid to stick around.
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I'll stick around man, I've done so this far And I'll trust ya on that man! :3
Then I am quite pleased you took my advice on how bet to pleasure your
On how best?
There are two other typos, but for the life of me i can't remember where.
Eagerly await more.
The songs grabbed from VA-11 HALL-A still have the full playlist tied to them. You might wanna change that so it' just the songs by themselves.
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And I very much thank you for sticking around this long! I’ve always looked forward to seeing your comments and knowing that you enjoyed the latest. Hopefully the next chapter will be more to your liking! I’ll even tell you over PM what’s going to happen if you like.
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Fixed, along with one other missing word I saw. Those seem to be the bane of my writing existence; my brain outpaces my fingers when I type. Glad you enjoyed, and more is definitely coming! I’ll be aiming to get part 2 out in a week...
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Fixed. And thanks for pointing me to the playlist, which I do like.
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No problem man, legit. You and the peeps you work with do good work!
OhnowthisisgonnagetREALgood...
Yep. Gives you an idea of how much self control she usually has, huh?
Damn...
Want It Need It spell.
BeSt.
Damn, I have nothing witty to say to that.
... Damn.
I think this shouldn't be in italics.
OH, oh, dear.
They can do that?
Shots fired.
You have made that exceedingly clear in the past, yes.
Perhaps. But she's an EFFECTIVE insatiable and irredeemable creature who seeks only to spread her corruption further.
Goddamn, would that even FIT?
Fair, I suppose.
Do you just want him for yourself?
I figured. If there was any actual danger, this would have stopped long ago. I doubt that sobering spells are that uncommon.
Huh. How 'bout that?
I've said it before, I'll say it again. Phoenix Wright, you lucky son of a bitch.
Well then. You did mention that this was going to be like Unleash the Magic, so, I can't say I'm TOO surprised.
You are too kind, Phoenix Wright.
Seems harmless to me.
How creepy that would sound were this near any other character.
I think.
Again with the theatrics, I know people who want to be actors who are less theatrical than you. Honestly, such a ham.
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Hey! Appreciate the longpost as always. I’m heading for bed now so I can’t reply in full until tomorrow, but I did want to at least say I fixed all the stuff you pointed out. Thanks and apologies.
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No problem.
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At her core she is creature of passions, doubly so for having to suppress them most of the time. What Mia is ultimately doing is giving her a safe space to indulge them fully, and there’s actually a lesson in it at the end.
The irony is, before the dream trial, Phoenix would have been badly upset by transformative magic being used on him like this. That he’s not is a product of the trial’s outcome, of coming to terms with magic and things in general. Of course, the cider and Celly’s mating aura helps too...
Corrected.
Fixed.
This is also a hint as to what Vinyl held over Trixie with regards to what she threatened to reveal during her cross-examination of Maya:
Vinyl’s quite open about things and takes even wild and crazy sex in stride. That doesn’t mean, however, she’s not above tweaking someone else about it who’s not.
A story that may have to be told someday...
Oops. Nope. Fixed and sorry.
Don’t worry, they’ll get their mirror call... though they might be a little surprised when it happens!
Since Pinkie’s abilities pass through ethereal realms they have access to, yes. They did it when she was starting to misuse it and made clear to her that with great power comes great responsibilities, to borrow a phrase.
My vision of these two is that they have rather intense but friendly rivalry over their romantic conquests. They respect each other’s seductive abilities and partners greatly even if their tastes in them aren’t at all the same. Phoenix is actually one rare instance where their preferences in (potential) partners coincide.
Only problem there is, Pinkie isn’t really Phoenix’s type...
And more to the point, she’s inviting her to do it.
Depends on who it’s being used on! For example:
You can bet it was her intention to have Phoenix fuck her with it after she was done with the two girls, but Mia prevented that. Celly might even have been planning to change back to an alicorn for the purpose.
At this moment, yes. She planned this too, and even let Maya know she would be doing it. In all honestly, part of the reason Maya agreed to it was she REALLY liked the idea of her sister screwing Phoenix while in her body, meaning that in a roundabout way, Phoenix would also be making love to her. Something you can bet she’ll tease him with later.
Celestia knows them, and I’m sure Twilight does as well. But in the end, they were enjoying the evening and each other too much to use them. This, again is thanks to Mia. She arranged things this night, though the stars had to be in alignment for it all as well. This wouldn’t be possible without all that came before. Phoenix and Twilight had to realize their love was real, Celly had to be ready to cut loose, Phoenix had to be okay with magic where he wasn’t before, Maya had to have come to terms with her feelings for Nick and Vinyl, and Vinyl... just had to be Vinyl.
Indeed. It wouldn’t have been instant, and both still had some healing and growth to do, but yes, they would have grown closer together over time for all the cases they fought together, and this would have been the inevitable result.
My biggest peeve about the Ace Attorney games is that he never seems to get a decent reward at the end. In my stories, he does.
With Celly in the role (more or less) of Midnight, yes.
Part of the reason she’s willing!
And considering how showy she was otherwise, appropriate to her character, her think.
It’s rubbing me at least slightly the wrong way as I read it now, so I’m rewording it... done.
Yes, she did, at least temporarily. That’s also why she dispelled Celly’s magic on him. She wanted him as he was, his real and true self, and she didn’t want him to be feel that he only did it because of mating magic or cider. This had to be his freely given choice, and it was.
It’s (mostly) for show because she knows how Celly will respond to it--respond to being dominated by a more powerful mare. Which is not to say some appropriate punishment for her excesses isn’t planned or called for...
Thanks for the post! :pinkiehappy.
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That is certainly ONE way of putting it.
And Celestia can be trusted more than the Nightmare. Though to be fair, DISCORD can be trusted more than the Nightmare, at least Discord you can expect to fuck with your head.
Oh yeah, well played.
Of course, that's half the fun.
Hey, I'd read it for the plot. Wait...
I eagerly await.
Yes, a phrase I'm glad was not in a certain recent movie which I won't spoil in case someone reads this and has yet to see it.
I can see that.
Yes, she's a little too, hyper.
And Celestia can safely take the invitation because she knows Mia can stop her if she goes too far.
I, suppose that's fair.
That is a VERY roundabout way. We're talking Jojo's Opening number 1 levels of roundabout. (The joke is it's called Roundabout).
And things played out in the favor of sexy fun times.
Huh. Neat.
Considering the shit he goes through, I'm glad.
Minus being driven at least slightly insane from magical overload "infecting" the mind and body of a teenager who has never experienced magic before, and is thus completely overwhelmed by her Id.
Agreed.
I'll re check out the chapter, or at least that part, to see the rewording then.
Fair enough.
I don't doubt that. And mind you just because it's theatrical, doesn't mean it's a bad thing, it's why I enjoy seeing Trixie on screen, she's such a Ham, she knows she is, and revels in it.
Well, that was something. I don’t know what to think of this other than it was hot, and . . . Something. I don’t know what but it was something.
NO WAY! Someone made a continuation of the Turnabout Storm!
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Hi! Just to be clear, this is an M-rated romance/legal drama continuation of the unofficial Turnabout Storm novelization, not the videos, exploring a deepening relationship between Twilight and Phoenix Wright. It’s very adult at times, so if you want to follow it, be aware of that.
Apologies if you already understand this, but I’ve had people come in here not knowing it and being shocked by the fact it’s actually an adult story. If you’re still interested, then welcome and enjoy!
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Yea it's fine dude. I gotcha! I'm still gonna read it, I've read plenty of other stories like this one. I should be fine!
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Cool! I’ll be very interested to hear what you think. Hope you enjoy!