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Damn, this was an amazing chapter!
Zodiac: A happy ending indeed... and one of many endings I have seen in my lifetime as the Concept of Space and Time...
Aurion: And quite a beautiful way to end the story eh Zodiac?
Zodiac: Correct Aurion... thanks for coming by the way Aurion, feels good to see another Concept around when they're not busy...
Aurion: I'll always be around when there is good creative beauty in any ending Zodiac, wish I could say the same for our Angel of Mysteries...
Raziel: You call one of my titles?
Aurion: Well then... Hello there Raziel, how was your day?
Raziel: Been well I suppose... So... how's Trixie? She faring well?
Zodiac: Well... besides a temporary memory wipe from Luna, she's fine... You Really enjoy her presence huh Raziel?
Raziel: If you mean by her history? Then yes, I do enjoy seeing and visiting her from time to time...
Aurion: Oh my... I didn't think you would make a friend with a finite life there Raziel... Seems a bit out of character for you.
Raziel: Is it really out of character for me, or you just haven't seen my soft side?
Zodiac: I'd say the latter... Still, I'm happy with this ending for now but I can see that this journey is far from over.
Aurion: Indeed, I wonder how the other branching paths are faring?
Raziel: Who knows? Shall we take a look?
Zodiac: Indeed we shall... They depart and check the other timelines/universes
Fluttershy’s winged twitched harder. “Then, um… maybe someday… we…could…” she blushed fiercely
Winged? Wings.
And please please please you are going to do a sequel story with Fluttershy.
7831680 Huzzah! I have found a Brave Frontier fan!
7831907 Check out the Brave Frontier Displaced story I'm writing when you get the chance!
7832609 Oh that sounds nice! Check out my crossover story then in return!
Right, still gotta officially declare the verdict.
Trixie giving a compliment? Damn.
Agreed. It would not have enough space for your ego times 2.
Oooh!
All right, Vinyl!
Good line.
Presumably.
Hm, well, the gryphons have actual combat experience, however, Rainbow does know martial arts, and has shown to be able to hit supersonic speeds with little effort considering she Sonic Rainboomed with ease by Canterlot Wedding.
OK, that's funny.
You SURE that's a smart move?
Dear god there's two of them.
SHOTS FIRED!
Nobody can. Not for long, anyway.
You enjoy making her blush.
WingS.
Hehe...
It really is the little touches.
Everyone's a bit to blame.
To be fair, the majority of Earth is FAR more civil than a millennium ago.
Oh yes.
Please do.
Daaw...
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I don't mean to boast, but that was my idea. Note how it seems like it's brought up and not mentioned again. That's because it was placed in after I was given the final draft. Because I suggested it. I tend to make up a lot of humor based moments. Being a British dude helps.
Hahaha, wow... what an amazing chapter well done in time for New Years!
Dudes, awesome work on this, and to everyone in the comments!
HAPPY NEW YEAR!
Keep up the amazing work guys!
Good stuff, Firesight. This has been a fun read all the way through.
Now get back to writing Five Stars you lazy asdfasdgafgavavjafbvbl
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Thank you very much, sir!!!! We were definitely inspired and amazed and how easily this all came considering the long checklist of things we had to do within it!
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Good creative beauty, huh? I am happy to have been judged so well by those who have presumably seen it all! Then again, have you...? Still some surprises remain in the last few chapters, though these will be far happier and definitely M-rated ones!
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Well, I don't think I'd do a whole sequel around them, but acclaim does seem to be growing for the two to get back together... In the T&T-based sequel, she'll be visiting earth herself at some point in Twilight's company, you know... transformed into a human of course. Will there be a chance for her to be with him as a pony again? We'll just have to wait and see.
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Happy New Year to you, sir! Your comments and compliments have been greatly appreciated!
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Thank you, sir! Wow, you crack the whip even harder than Ever Ring!
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Wouldn't be Ace Attorney without it!
In the end, she's not stupid. She does realize how in over her head she really was there and how fortunate she was that Mia was there, even if she does remind her of Sonata.
Though the canon Trixie is far less powerful than mine, I do like her attitude and kept it. I'd like to think she does have untapped potential within her, if for no other reason that the comics showed she became the Element of Magic and an alicorn in Twilight's place in at least one alternate reality. The comics aren't canon, of course, but they at least show the writers thought that way...
Lucky mare! In the end, she gets the girl, and the notice of Princess Luna... :non-existent vinyl emoticon:
And very well-earned!
Thanks!
Definitely. This is Luna we're talking about. Her standards are very high and she doesn't give out titles lightly, especially one as high as that.
True, but this is a full year before the Canterlot Wedding, so she may not be able to do it on cue yet. Of course, you could make the argument that that's moot since this duel would take place in the dream realm... regardless, the gryphons are aware of her abilities and did face a pony who could do the sonic rainboom once before. How will this all play out? Not sure, and probably won't be explored here much. Be another sidetrack when we're trying to start winding the story down.
JCL's suggestion, and a good one.
In the end, it played out as Luna thought it would, as the epilogue chapter of Turnabout Storm demonstrates. Though at this moment in time, Celestia has reservations.
The Multiverse is doomed!
Meme never grows old!
Exactly.
But she's so adorable that way!
Fixed.
It's part jealousy, part protectiveness. Either way, the poor filly just doesn't get the attraction.
Indeed. And I'm big on them.
Bingo. The Nightmare, in the end, was really nothing more than a rank opportunist who took advantage of a sudden but very fertile set of circumstances. Initially, my plan had been that she had in fact orchestrated many events, like what happened to Maya by tweaking or pushing emotions during sleep, but in the end decided that would have actually cheapened things a bit. In the end, life happened and you have to deal with it; Phoenix had to face his fears, Maya has to face that what happened only happened because of her own feelings for him and Twilight that she's not infallible; that with great power comes with great responsibility, to borrow a certain superhero's motto.
Most of it. I'd love to send the Bolt Knights and Red Talons into ISIS territory to clean them out.
She'll visit in the sequel.
And that's to say nothing about what she'd love to do with Prince Blueblood...
An epic saga that ends on the most minor of moments, yet all the sweeter for it. Happy New Year, and thanks again for your usual longpost!!!
7834837 Aurion: I've seen my fair share of what the universe has in store for us Concepts but there are times where we still either get caught off guard or just enjoy the scenes this world has Mr. Firesight. Timelines, universes, regardless of what you call them, even if they are similar, they always have that one that is unique to them... Uniqueness is quite a rarity these days but that does not always make it special. No, rather regardless of whether it has anything diverse or not, it will always be beautiful in my eyes from the tiniest details to the more elaborate intricacies.
Zodiac: That's quite the speech you said there Aurion...
Aurion: Yes, I suppose so... Still, we await the conclusion of this story Mr. Firesight. I hope to see something quite astounding yes?
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Awesome man, glad to hear!~
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Fair point.
Also a fair point.
Well, I wouldn't say it's impossible.
Oh VERY.
Immensely.
You can say that again.
Ah well. I suspect another factor would be RD's ego, she's rather arrogant at times, and if you know what you're doing, you can use that to play her like a fiddle.
You're damn right.
Understandable.
Get to the paradox-proof bunker!
And it's great.
You're not wrong.
Ah well.
Oh yeah.
Fair enough.
I'd add other extremists to the list, religious or otherwise, but I don't think it'd be wise.
Ah yes, Prince Prick.
It's my pleasure.
AHH!
HOW?
CAN?
ONE?
EVEN?
WRIGHT?
THIS?
WELL?
:nonexistent twilight calming emoji:
another excellent chapter as always DHK
i'm one of those who reads for the plot,even while reading for the plot,and your stories never fail to please mepinkie.mylittlefacewhen.com/media/f/rsz/mlfw7519_medium.jpg
waay too many clopworks are justpinkie.mylittlefacewhen.com/media/f/rsz/mlfw11314_medium.jpg
yours aren't(not even UtM:MR,it was more,"you were cruel,have the sexing that you didn't know i wanted to give you")
anyways,keep up the good work!
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DIRECTOR:you're clear
DATABIT FILE:great,now that;
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HEY WAIT
Considering how tall Twilight supposedly is in this 'verse, and how long Phoenix's arms are, is this actually possible? I assume it is, but I thought judging from that image I was meant to judge the ponies height from, and judging that Phoenix is more or less eye level with Celestia, does this actually work?
It's still a cute gesture, though.
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Good! Exactly the reaction I was going for...
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Judgment reserved until we know the whole story and the episodes in question air. Effect on existing story, if any, will be determined later. If worst comes to worst, I will simply fall back on this being AU and ignore the canon. But like I said, judgment reserved until then.
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Of course
Dreamwarden is completely defunct, I clicked on the link but all I saw was a header. Anyways, glad to see that NMM got her just desserts, although I am slightly curious about the whole various "heavens" and the spirits and the "gods" that were mentioned a few chapters back. looking forward to reading the rest of this probably tomorrow. Love what you've done not just here but Turnabout Storm as well, you captured the essence of the characters and made them seem like real 3-D characters, also, I love what you did in regards to your unique take on Equestria in regards to the social structures, laws, and other such things. Most authors that I've read either make Equestria a facsimile of earth and the human world or ignore that particular avenue for world-building. The whole herd structure and the rules and practices surrounding it just works, maybe it's my own unrealized desires and fantasies, or maybe it's the fact that it is fairly close to how our horses operate. Also, I rather liked your take on Equestria's distant history, it was unique as a lot of the stories I've read (and actually remember) regarding the nation's history only go back so far, and even those that do try and peer back into what I can only call the primordial ether, typically use a similar base of the talking equines being somehow related to humans either directly or indirectly via "magical evolution". In short, I enjoy your writings and I'll be sure to check out your other stories in due time.
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Appreciate all your comments thus far! Very glad to know you’re enjoying the story!
Well, damn. At least I recorded my favorite pictures off it, then.
I don’t think readers would forgive me if I didn’t give her what she’d so richly earned! As for the heavens/spirits/gods questions, I’ll leave most of that open except to say that each world/race has its own heaven--the pony Summerlands; the gryphon Valhalla--but as Mia noted, any ascended spirit can travel freely between them. This model reflects to an extent my own beliefs but also one that more or less fits into my other stories.
Thank you! It’s not all me, though. I took inspiration from other stories and verses, including the Gentlemanverse and Xenoverse.
In fairness, I do that too, especially in my Firefly stories, which are canon to this. There, though, it’s mostly in terms of geography, though you’ll see some other interesting parallels as well. You’ll see Twilight and Phoenix discuss the question themselves in a few more chapters.
It is, though again, I can’t really claim credit for this. The idea of herds and how they operated was initially explored in the now-classic story Xenophilia, one of the original and best displaced story showing what happens when a single human ends up in Equestria and learns about how different their dating and mating rules are, trying to fit in with them. Can’t link it because it’s M-rated thanks to site rules, but you can find it on fimfiction.
I’d like that! But needless to say, be sure and finish this one first! There’s still plenty of good content to come, and the story ends with a flurry of M-rated fireworks that marks the culmination of each character’s journey in this story. If you like the worldbuilding of this tale, be sure and check out the Firefly stories for the full accounting of her story, and the Great Pony/Gryphon war.
...Doesn't Sci-Twi become a Wonderbolt significantly after Twilight becomes an alicorn...? Does that mean human-Pinkie can traverse time itself?
Buck me...
Spoilers? Question mark.
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Spoilers for Equestria Girls? That's a different verse to this one, Pinkie's ability to flit between them notwithstanding. I just meant it as a cameo and an homage to the series, as I do like the EqG verse.
Thanks for all the comments and the like you left on the story!