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Excellent Trailer-work there JCL
[eager anticipation intensifies]
Was Guiding Light by any chance a reference to this:
How would Octavia react to Vinyl bringing Maya to their relationship?
this story is truly impressive every time I read a new chapter it is just amazing.
the story line is laid out perfectly and flows so nicely.
exhalent work Firesight
Harts Fire
PS the photo at the end perfect.
You made me smile with that photo man, you really did.
Not a grin, not a douche smile, but a genuine smile of happiness.
Nice job dude, nice job!
CLEVER
Blasphemy, that's like one of the top-tier ships when it comes to Phoenix Wright! Besides... *obscurely suggestive music plays in the background* it wouldn't be the first time the mare experimented with her sexuality in a fanfiction.
Not necessarily. While the 8th circle is reserved for frauds, it is the 9th circle where those who betray those close to you reside. And besides that... well, let's face it: Dahlia incontrovertibly pulled more sh*t than Engarde ever could (Even moreso than the greatest Ace Attorney villain, period. Paragraph).
Hmm, let's see, here. The text that appears every once in a while is in a scraggly font and fades to red. That would imply that the speaker is either really messed up or has a deep-seated vendetta against some modicum of people. (Since this isn't Apollo Justice or Prosecutor's Path, I think we can all take a guess). Then, there's purple text, most likely coming from Twilight. Most likely, she's worried about Phoenix, but that's mostly due to the fact that Iris exists.
You know, if there's one thing I like to think about, it's character motivation. What drives one character to commit a certain action while most others would abstain from doing so? These are normally divided into three sets of answers: A. They were written as one-dimensional characters (I need to cover my tracks!). B. They were written as two-dimensional characters (I need to exact vengeance for personal reasons!). C. They were written as three-dimensional characters (I need to do a thing to avenge a person, even if it means convicting someone I believe may have done so in the first place!). For Dahlia Hawthorne, she may possibly be the greatest enigma when it comes to her motivation. What happened to her in the past that made her view everyone as mere poisoned pawns (pun intended)? Could what Iris said be true and things might have been different if Dahlia also grew up in the Hazakura, or was Dahlia always destined for evil? What was the thing Iris was supposed to do for the fake ransom caused her sister's opinion of her to lesson? Is she a better executed villain than Kristoph Gavin? More than simply "likely". Of course, that line of thinking may not amount to much. For me, in any case. What IS important is how you, the writer, the co-writer, the proofreaders, and the sound designer feel. What do you think about her situation? Is it something that can be dealt with at a glance, something to explore, or something to accentuate (If it's the latter, I hope you don't go too far with it. The last fic I read that did that had Luna end up as... well, I'd rather not say)? Of course, I don't expect an answer. Perhaps you'll reply with "I suppose you'll just have to wait and see " and let me stew on that for the duration of this fanfiction's second arc. All I ask is that you think about what I've said... unless you already did and the past paragraph was entirely pointless.
Huh, well this has certainly been an interesting chapter. Maya and Celestia had some bonding time, Twilight and Phoenix had some more bonding time, we had a trailer that alludes to some of the aspects that will be present in the second arc, and I spent the last hour thinking about a character referenced only once. I'd say this was par for the course in fanfiction reading, to say the least. Well, see you later.
Seeing a talking cow would make it impossible for me to enjoy eating them. As an aside, why do people insist on ruining a good cucumber by pickling it?
An intriguing issue for a woman to face, even if it is only a perceived one. Typically, it is the man who faces the prospect of being a genetic dead-end as a result of no longer being able to provide a utility.
There you go! That's pretty useful. Honestly Maya, I think you're going to be alright. Most people don't have the benefit of being physically attractive as well as possess magic we humans were not meant to know.
That's not fair! I was drunk and she seduced me with her sick beats!
Spies that get caught stealing tech are killed, Celly, don't forget that! This is a pretty neat headcanon, I must admit.
The only thing any organism needs to survive is adequate resources and we clearly don't have those, Celly. You're ponies sit atop an infinite reserve of magic while we slaughter each other on a dying planet. Fallout Equestria is still in your future if you go down the road of technological development. Still, I can understand the desire to stay cutting edge to keep the competition from getting too eager to try anything untoward.
Social Justice Warriors aside, I think most of us could survive without the internet. The thing that has allowed us to grow such a massive population is our infrastructure. Indeed, in the event of nuclear war, the loss of our buildings would reduce the survivors to little more than tribal apes.
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This paragraph intrigues me. It implies they had sex, but why are they embarrassed? Was one or both of them covered in taffy? It wouldn't be Twilight without her thinking about magical feedback loops after a marathon bang session though.
In Phoenix's case, the water was also quite deep.
Others have already brought up the season 5 joke, so there you have it. What I find most interesting about this paragraph is the way it shows up, adds flavor to an already rich narration and yet doesn't bog it down by going on too long. That takes a really long time to be able to master!
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I can just feel the internet draw back away from their monitors and think "is he really going to turn a human into a pony? Where's my cyanide capsules?" I don't really mind the idea, personally, so long as remains a way of telling their story.
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Shameless!
What killed the dinosaurs? The Ice Age!
Five times, actually. Human: vaginal and anal. Pony: vaginal, anal and horn.
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I look forward to the clop chapter!
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Did you two see the trailer at the end? What did ya think of it?
6522140 Looks very nice. Hopefully, it will attract some attention to the story.
6522168 That's good. Hey, seeing as it's vague as hell, anyone feel like making theories on what's going on, and what everyone could be referring to?
That trailer looks very nice yet I know well enough how much of a Rampage that's going to make, eh? Eh? See what I did there? Boo!Agh, forgot it, I suck at that. In all honesty, I decided to slow down the reading on Project Horizons and am at chapter 30 at the moment. So far lots of bleak moment but nothing that could make me barf or bawl.
Okay, I am getting off topic so let's just go back to what we were speaking. Very nice chapter I must say, and as I said about the trailer very neat, but going to be a lot of rage if one discovers its reasons for its existence. Not that I don't mind! I hope they don't end up in this guy since he's a God merged with a building or rather is a building... Shudders
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6522140 ... Well, it wouldn't be the first time.
Hmm, let's see, here. The text that appears every once in a while is in a scraggly font and fades to red. That would imply that the speaker is either really messed up or has a deep-seated vendetta against some modicum of people. (Since this isn't Apollo Justice or Prosecutor's Path, I think we can all take a guess). Then, there's purple text, most likely coming from Twilight. Most likely, she's worried about Phoenix' part of it comes from the danger he has to face (like falling off a bridge while coming out with only a bad cold) while another part of it comes from the fact that Iris exists.
As for the quality of the trailer, I'd have to say it's fairly decent. It hints at what's going to happen while not going overboard to explain what it is.
That, and she doesn't need to feel guilty about it since the bovines here aren't sentient.
Fairly certain Twilight doesn't know those kinds of spells, and even if she did, she's not the kind of pony/person who'd use them.
You can channel spirits. You've done is before, and I think it's saved his rear more than once.
How did you-
Celestia, you Magnificent Bitch I read your BOOK!
I, suppose.
Ah, I getcha.
I see, fascinating.
Well...
Not that big a surprise.
Yikes.
Agreed, even if an alicorn is just a crazy powerful pony with the power of all three tribes, that sort of being going mad, is not a very happy thought.
Which was?
Fitting.
Twilight, NOTHING can have too much cheese. Nothing.
Agreed.
I doubt he'll object much provided you treat Twilight like a person, which you do.
Good question indeed.
Interesting, sounds a bit wierd to us, but hey, they ARE technically aliens to us, different cultural norms, to them, it's something perfectly normal.
I, see, but, what do YOU think about the idea? As you said, here, you're his exclusively and vice versa.
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May it live up to my hype!
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I regret it was not, but it certainly works that way. I didn't know about those FMVs until you linked them. Interesting stuff!
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Thanks!!!!
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SHAMELESS
Seriously, I'm not proud but I couldn't resist.
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It's not so much a question of bringing her into their relationship as it's more like just an occasional exotic fling she has. The same relationship issues would apply to her and Maya as do to Twilight and Phoenix given the different worlds and races involved. In any event, given that Equestrian society is not monogamous and their existing relationship, I imagine Octy is fine with it as long as Vinyl comes home to her after. Vinyl shares something with Celestia in that she's got a bit of a wild side she needs to indulge once in a while, and I'm sure Octy is aware of that.
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I wasn't aware Rainbow Dash/Phoenix Wright was a thing! But seriously, I have other plans for Rainbow. I think that what would turn her on is someone who could hang with her; rival her and share her love for loyalty. Lightning Dust and Gilda come to mind for the former, but for the latter... well, there's a certain story that comes to mind. Just wish he'd end the shiptease...
I don't know... Engarde was just as much a sociopath and drove at least one woman to suicide and a second to attempt it, to say nothing of having de Killer hold Maya hostage and starve her to force Phoenix to defend him. Dahlia's got a higher body count and also wrecked lives, but Engarde's just as manipulative and in some ways more dangerous since he had fame and fortune backing him. He did betray those who trusted him, using and discarding them.
Hard to say, but in may not be anything that happened to her. It's possible that's just the way she was. Some people truly are born evil, or lack basic empathy for others, seeing other people as only tools to get what they want or obstacles to be swept aside.
Just par for the course in fanfiction? Aww....
Glad you liked it; I was actually worried this was one of the weaker chapters given the lack of action and clop in it. But if it's thought-provoking, then it's a success. Thanks as always for commenting, though I would recommend you start adding in some paragraph breaks to your text.
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I just hope he gets more chapters written......its not like he isnt around anymore, just distracted heavily.
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I love dill pickles! Especially crunchy ones on burgers. I'll even put raw cucumbers on subs sometimes, especially meatball ones. Provides a very pleasing crunch and cooling contrast to the otherwise warm, soft sandwich.
I think the main issue for Maya right now is that Phoenix allows her to be a big sister or even mother, and she doesn't want to lose that. Being able to take care of and help someone gives her purpose, and she's understandably afraid of it all being taken from her, though as Celestia's pointed out, there may also be at least some stirring romantic interest she's subconsciously trying to preserve as well.
Maya's going to be fine. I do hope we get to see her again in the future of the games, find out what kind of woman she's actually become. She was heard from but not seen in Dual Destinies.
Here's a news flash, Maya: you don't do anything drunk you're not at least capable of sober. There had to be some desire and connection for it to happen. Alcohol just lowers inhibitions; it doesn't actually change who you are.
Thanks! And I imagine she dealt with a few spies herself back in the day...
I don't agree at all that we're on a dying planet or can't overcome our issues, or that FoE is necessarily are future. We as humans have a tendency to adapt and overcome our problems no matter how intractable they may seem at the time, and I don't see that changing ever.
The scenario that worries me is an EMP attack. That could send us back to the stone age in short order. We could build our infrastructure to resist it, but that would require commitment and an administration who shows more interest in world affairs than a golf game and NCAA tournament brackets.
Ah, Molly... you are missed. The internet and especially tumblr just isn't the same without you.
This is simply the aftermath of the last clop scene. They didn't do anything else after. Reread the end of chapter 12 to see the positions they were in.
I guess my word-fu is pretty good...
What it may come down to is simply the notion that fair's fair--after all, she made herself human and otherwise moved heaven and earth to see him again, so why shouldn't he be willing to return the favor? And you know me--I don't do things lightly. If it happens, there will be a definite purpose behind it other than cheap clop.
Point taken!
Seems like everyone else is too! Here's hoping I can deliver...
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That's part of her justification, definitely. Remains to be seen if Twilight will decide it's okay.
What about the gotta-wanna-needa-haveit spell from Lesson Zero?
And it will again in a very major way...
I'd read her book! If it's autobiographical, might take a few volumes, though...
Quite true. See Nightmare Moon or Corona.
Well, I've certainly encountered some overly-cheesy art and stories...
It's not like he's one to talk at that point anyway, considering he's keeping his own relationship secret.
And yet to be answered in my own mind. Just have to keep writing and see what happens.
Exactly. Different races, different rules. They use what's right for them given their skewed gender ratio and mare-centric society.
Whether she's into mares more or not, Phoenix isn't her type. That's not to say she might not meet someone who is, though...
*goes off to stand in corner*
I'm shameless, I know. Then again, how else could I write this thing?
We all have guilty pleasures, definitely.
Not bad for something I just yanked off the internet and added a caption to... Should probably fire up something a little more capable than MS paint to fix it up right.
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That she will.
She was insane then, it didn't count.
I'm sure.
Yep. Not that book thouh, but the Magnificent Bastard/Bitch Book that she has. It's pretty good. Yes, I read it solely for the sake of the joke.
Or really ANY being with a lot of power going insane, or heck, a regular person. Prime example? The Joker. Perfectly normal, no superpowers, except he's completely insane.
I mean physical cheese.
True.
Indeed.
Precisely.
Who knows?
And stay there.
Yep. In fact,
Yes.
That was satisfying on so many levels.
I do kinda wish there was more comments on my trailer, but eh...I'll take whatever I can get.
Does anyone want to have any guesses at what it meant? I only got one full theory so far.
6522853 Welcome dude!
All the comments saying "Shameless". Did Kotegawa Yui suddenly take over these accounts?
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Well, it's not the size that counts, it's how you use it. Dahlia Organized boyfriend #1's suicide at the tender age of 14 (Eat your heart out, Kristoph Gavin), killed her step-sister, killed boyfriend #2, almost got boyfriend #3 convicted of the murder, came back from the dead to convict her twin sister (For the unexplained thing she did wrong), and had a breakdown simply from the fact that Maya beat her for the second time. Engarde unintentionally had a woman commit suicide and hired a guy to kill a guy and kidnap Maya, then had a breakdown because he was next... kind of adds up in the end. In any case, I see where you're coming from and agree that they'd end up in Cocytus. Just... don't make it too much of the same from the game. While it's essential to have a faithfulness to the source material, one must also remember that alternate interpretations are also an element of parody (That sounds familiar somehow...).
Well, see ya.
Dude. We're on TV Tropes. http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/PunBasedTitle
It's under Fan Works.
6524540 [Does a google search] Oh cool! An anime chick with cat ears! This is relevant to my interests.
Shame I can't display it.
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Since magic requires focus, it helps to meditate in order to master it, yes. It wouldn't say it's necessary for day-to-day magic, but it's certainly something Twilight does for the higher order spells she practices. She and Celestia actually mediated here when Celly was giving Twilight her magic lesson on how not to broadcast.
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The usual explanation I've heard is simply "Harmony", a master magic of sorts that pervades Equestria. Phoenix singing? Well, maybe humans can be affected by it too if they're in Equestria long enough or have otherwise absorbed enough Equestrian magic.
6528989 Hey, Firesight. We're on TVTropes. http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/PunBasedTitle (Under Fan Works. We're mentioned. Oh yeah. And thanks for answering my questions.
WOOT. Also, do you feel we need to give out any hints according to the trailer? Do I even need to ask your permission? Did anyone note that there's a secret hidden behind the purple text if you brighten the screen enough? OOPS ACCIDENTAL HINT *Trollface*
6529901 Okay, I saw an image of Twilight in the backdrop. Is there some sort of context I'm missing? Am I looking at the wrong time or something?
Also, considering how quickly this is moving, I need to do something with that side story. Otherwise, the story will leave me in the dust.
Can someone spam my inbox to keep me working?6522983 But you know, there is one thing I'd like to add. It's all-too possible that, if Rainbow were into mares, she'd be into ones like herself... but here's another possibility. It could also be possible that she secretly thinks that mares acting girly (marely?) is a turn on, much like some guys are into tomboys while others are into the more girly girls. Just a thought.
This story is put together so well! I am so eager to read the next part! Its killing me having to wait like this, I am looking forward to it!! How is production coming along on this? I hope it is going well and it won't be too much longer before we get to see the next part!
Can we have a scene where Twilight either watches or reads Nineteen Eighty Four? (The George Orwell dystopia novel)
Also, It seems that Equestria is too unfocused on the polygamy thing. I think more emphasis needs to be placed on that, and for it to become a tad bit stricter. Like, say monogamists getting a slightly worse rap or something.
I just hope Phoenix and Twilight don't break up.
6582176 What makes you think that has any chance of occurring?
Read the half of it, since I was busy with the other... Finishing this one tomorrow, I HATE MY OWN CLIFFHANGER FOR READING DARN IT!!! .... Worth the wait...
6589480 Oh, hey. Didn't know you read this, too. Did you like that trailer I made?
6589788 You... You made that? APEX of Perfection!!!
>>James CyberLink What made me think that they would break up is that i saw twilight make a comment about "phoenix please dont like another girl or something." I just dont want to see them break up :) they're such a good couple in this!
6591850 Apex of Perfection? Yeah, that for me is "less than a day in PowerPoint. Was a lot faster made than I thought it would be...Maybe I'm just boss at this.
6592283 Wow. Stroke your ego a little more, buddy.
6592767 I'm actually intending to ask if it's bizarre that I did that in less than a day. People are assuming I used Adobe Premiere or something. Then again, all my friends keep telling me I'm really good with Microsoft PowerPoint, so I'm just going to guess that's the reason. I could be wrong, but...you know....
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And I'm presuming Human Twilight in this story looks like that. Maybe a little less skinny and a little more....soft and cuddly. And maybe more assets on her bust and...rear bumper. Yeah.
6592951 Making it in PowerPoint and converting it to video in less than a day? Pretty impressive.
And my comment was directed at you saying you're boss at it. I was giving you a huge pile of crap. Luna knows I have plenty to spare.
OK, so the other day, I felt like answering a question on my mind: What's the etymology behind Dahlia Hawthorne? So, I looked up the first word and found that it meant a kind of flower, so it all clicked into place: Every rose has its thorn... or rather, every watermeal has its bramble. In any case, I decided to look up the etymology for Hawthorne and... well, you'll have to see it to believe it.
Even though the character "þ"is pronounced "th", you have to admit, it's pretty hilarious... maybe that's why she's evil (You know, aside from familial circumstance and not having a chance from the start)?
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6596729 Thanks. And, well...don't let those people hating on you force you down. There's a reason the likes on that story outweigh the dislikes, you know.
6597250 that reached you too? Well, it can't be helped. They always do and practically they can. But as my friends say, they stand by me, and I'll hold my ground.