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Horses are man's true best friend. We couldn't have done it without them!
There are many, many guesses as to what the exact cause of the uncanny valley is. Wikipedia has a nice entry on it, and further explains that moving objects cause greater revulsion than still ones.
Tell us, great writer, what of the name of your epic tale? It sounded cool? Oh okay...
You're standing under the fan, dingus!
Worse, they're stringy! Stringy meat is icky!
In the Southern United States, people put pickles on chicken sandwiches. Pickles! Even Genghis Khan is cringing in the afterlife.
"The Best defense is a good offense." Take it from a former raider, and embittered paladan healer on World of Warcraft.
He made Phoenix read The Silmarillion? Oh, you poor dear.
All I'm saying guys is Equestria is kind of cliché. No offense.
I see you, Xenophilia. You can't hide from me!
The worldbuilding is awesome in this chapter, all of it! With just a little tweaking, you can make MLP into just about any kind of fantasy. My inner nerd is greatly satisfied.
Firefly is really cool. It's just a shame she has to be summoned. We need more warrior pony!
I love the details in this chapter it really makes for a good chapter.
Twilight is starting her fear of the horses some how I see human Twilight riding at some point.
or even Phoenix tacking Twilight out on a dirt bike at some point.
Harts Fire
So, Firefly couldn 't tell the humans during the Great Famine were malnourished and starving?
... Heheheh... As an editor to a certain fanfiction, I know exactly where this is going. I smell a suuub-ploooot!
What would a pony meditating look like?
OK, I have to know. Remember how in the end of the Mask DeMasque trial, Phoenix actually LOSES CONSCIOUSNESS because Pearly SLAPS him a bunch of times? Is there going to be an explanation as to how a grown man faints because a kid slaps him, or will it be skipped entirely?
D'aww, what an adorable idea, having Firefly watch Lord of the Rings.
Yaayy, more world-building!!!
Well, keep being awesome.
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I reworked that section. Give it a look now. It should make more sense and reflect much less badly on Firefly for it.
Wait this was a clopfic?! Holy crap, with the actual character interactions and how there's an overall narrative other than "SEX RUT" I didn't even notice. Good Job!
Someone today showed me this quote from your story on my thread to answer a question that was bugging me. I'd like to thank you for indirectly helping me with my problem. Thanks!
6081673 i nedd tp start counting all those things and turn it into sins XD
This chapter mentioned Lord of the Ring. Here's music from it.
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So do Cubans! Those sandwiches are great! http://www.food.com/recipe/cuban-sandwich-155359
By the way, you've got a friend request from Lero.
Agreed--it adapts well to just any fantasy or sci-fi environment, from Fallout to HALO. Seen it all. That's part of what makes it so incredibly good.
Thy wish may yet be granted...
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Thank you! And all in good time...
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Your avatar graphic is broken.
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You're welcome! Glad to be of service, even accidentally... horses were included here as a plot device, though not a major one.
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Hmmm... and what certain fanfiction is that?
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Most likely the latter.
Credit goes to Leo for that one! The sequence is his.
I'll do my best!!!!
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Hmmm... counting what things?
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That's actually The Hobbit, not Lord of the Rings. IMO, the Hobbit trilogy had some good moments and got better as it went, but is overall not as good as LoTR.
6084822 Meh, close enough...
I also forgot...This...:D
Yep.
Interesting.
Take your time.
Cute.
Hm.
I wonder...
I can imagine.
HEH!
Fascinating.
Battery, Twilight.
Troll.
Bonding. Never really found it that much fun, just give me a computer and access to internet shenanigans and I'm happy.
Interesting.
I did basketball once, it was fun, though coordinating myself with others wasn't easy.
Aw come on Phoenix, you're not exactly ugly yourself, I mean, objectively speaking, you are an attractive man, plus, you're very smart and pretty brave, you and Twilight work well together since usually you can have intellectual debates, provided it's not about magic
Make you you keep in shape, by doing a bit of exercise every day, not necessarily a daily marathon, but even if it's just a walk around the block or something, and you should do well.
I see.
Well, Celestia is generally considered beautiful by pony standards, and she's usually just as beautiful when humanized.
I see.
I suppose so, yes.
Gotcha.
I know, right?
I can imagine. Wait, sun AND moon? So this was during the 1000 years Luna was banished, and considering that he's roughly 40, I'd say that was during the last 100 years of her banishment.
That is a good question.
I suspect ANYONE would have.
Interesting.
Come on, Celestia may have flaws, but she's not that hot headed.
Good question.
Same, although I'm younger, so, no need for a bucket list yet, but, I can't say that's on my bucket list.
Interesting.
Horses are more intelligent than one would think.
You definitely know what you're doing, Celestia.
I see.
I should think so, dogs may be intelligent, but they're non sapient and they can be happy. Ask AJ,she's WInona's owner after all.
Adorkable Celestia is hilarious. And it's essentially something that is CLOSE to what you are in appearance, but just different enough for it to be unnerving. Like Android 19 in DBZ, or horses for Twilight.
Hm...
Basically.
In a nutshell, yes.
Exactly.
... She's got a point.
So it was Rule of Cool.
I see.
Hehe.
Hm.
*chuckles*
That must have been during the Great Famine, that was, not a good time for Earth.
Huh, so my knowledge of history proves useful. RESULTS!
Thankfully, no.
Ah yes, The Black Plague, vanished as mysteriously as it appeared, but not before taking most of Europe with it.
Indeed, thankfully for you, not enough to break my daaw meter, I'd sue you if you did break it.
Aye, so you don't need to worry about being surrounded.
Interesting.
Sadly, she's probably right.
Hm.
So, a demigod?
I see.
I see.
CUE THE FLASHBACK!
Ooh, that thing.
And if she's not wrong?
ESPECIALLY if it's a dark magic artifact.
I see, that actually makes sense.
That's, pretty smart.
Looks like it.
I see.
New drinking game, take a shot every time someone says long story.
And how badly did you get your ass kicked?
I see.
It's a fair assumption. Goodness knows martial arts has helped ME control my temper.
If only.
I see.
She's another G1 pony, isn't she?
Arcanocite? Must be a magic proof thing.
And cue Celestia's Ballad!
So My Liege can be used for a female ruler as well, good to know.
Say what?
I see.
Impressive.
And that's how Pinkie got her cutie mark, maybe next time we'll know how the Bolt Knights were formed.
Aye.
No kidding.
Nice save, Twilight.
That sounds adorable.
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*A la Robin Newman* I'-M N-O-T T-E-L-L-I-N-G! After all, what's the fun in spoiling things that won't be revealed for a couple years? N-O-N-E!
... WHAAAAT!? THAT'S TOTALLY WEAK, MAAAAAAN! Ooh... hoo... YOU COULD AT LEAST TAKE THE TIME TO EXPLAIN THAT SHE INFUSES HER BLOWS WITH SPIRIT ENERGY OR SOMETHIIIIING!! ISN'T SHE LIKE A PRODIGY SPIRIT MEDIUM, FAR SURPASSING MIA FEY IN TALENT ALOOOOONE?!?!?!?!!? IT WOULDN'T BE A STRETCH TO SAY SHE'S DOING IT SUBCONCIOUSLY... MAAAAANNN!!!
(Ah, pretending to be Robin Newman is fun. In fact, here's an awesome fan-dub of "his" secret being revealed
You're welcome, Internet)
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I'll Skype my full reply: the tl;dr is basically request emphatically denied.
I would love to see their reaction to The Return of the King... particularly the opening with Smeagol and Deagol. Twilight would probably cry.
Also their reaction other key parts of the movie.
Also... do the ponies have very long life spans in this story? Edit: Wait... she was a ghost.
I was kinda hoping for a little more of a to-do when Maya returned, bear as the day she was born. Especially as she seems to be having 'problems' towards Phoenix noticing her.
I'm wondering if 'herding' will be a viable solution?
Finally got to read this chapter. Man, sometimes life gets in the way.
From the prologue itself upon discovering what this sequel is, "Well I find this sequel and to my surprise and chagrin, it's a clopfic involving Twilight and Phoenix eheh Aw bloody hell, I am not a big fan of clopfics. This is going to end badly for me... Aw well might as well read and see how this goes *Takes a deep breath and starts reading* I am going to regret this...
Around to this chapter, "...I'm strangely aroused by this... Hmm... That scene though, not a fan but... Wow... I think I might enjoy this a bit..."
That basically summarized my thoughts on the matter of this book at hand. Considering that I'm not into clopfics, this would be the first exception to break that. I'm not into ships like this, but when done well... Well I'm intrigued to see how far will it go. Consider that you have gained a fellow reader for the book. If only my heart felt okay about this...
Heeheehee, FIrefly, I freaking love her. She's so cool, legit.
I wonder, if she'll be able to come back, like... full on.
That would be awesome.
Nice job you guys! :D
6086761 Firesight made sure not to write it in a way that gets the story stuck in a rut.
HARDY HA
6086761 There is nothing objectively wrong with reading a piece of fiction where awkward stuff happens. Be proud that you overcame a bias against clopfics and had an enjoyable reading experience. You're a better, more complete, person now.
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Well, if it makes you feel any better, you're in good company. You're not the first non-clopper to come in here and discover they like it. And I take it as very high compliment that it appeals across the board like this. Whether people come for the ship and stay for the worldbulding or come for the worldbuilding and discover that the ship actually is good for it, works for me. So... welcome and enjoy the ride!
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Know what that's like. Hope it was worth the wait!
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I wasn't aware Maya was born a bear. Don't worry, there will be more 'to-do' later.
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What I miss is some kind of plot. Now that Phoenix and Twi are happily together... What next? I would expect some kind of challenge.
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You will have it. This part of the story is more about them getting together--a challenge in an of itself--and worldbuilding/character development. The second and third parts, however, will be more conflict-driven.
6087864 Oh hardity har har mister
6088226 Thanks, I really needed that
6089061 I plan to enjoy the ride and trust me, I know I'm not the only non-clopper to read this book
6087864>>6088226>>6089061 Speaking of which, anybody wants some imaginary delicious apple cider after them finally getting their compromise off and them now getting along well At least I think they did? Drinks are on me!
6090418 By the way, I don't clop either.
6090934 Eh I'm not surprised
6089061 for the record, can we stop with the world building? I know you're building a world, and it's a nice world you built, but it doesn't need an extensional greenhouse or conservatory, you know!
6092630 The Flower Trio disagree; there is always place for a greenhouse.
6095489 ...Wot?
Is this that bit where Trixie rejects the Alicorn Amulet's power at that epilogue bit of Turnabout Storm EX? (I'm calling the novelization EX from now on)
As a hater of shipping, a non-clopper, and someone who, as you quite well know, is not in support of this (I assure you, it's bestiality....fictional or not), nor of the shipping that I felt did not have a place in the story, I wish you luck in your future endeavors with this. Much as I'd like to continue pre-reading and reviewing for you, I can't bring myself to read this.
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As someone with an opinion on the internet? Go on...
This is a completely valid statement and is the legal basis for incarcerating people of thought crime.
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6108730 Ya might as well get out now, it's gonna get worse. RUN FOR YOUR LIFE!
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...that's why I'm not reading it. I just thought I'd drop a friendly little word for Firesight.
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You're making fun of me, aren't you?
So my opinion is less valid than yours because it differs? Kinda rude.
FYI, bestiality IS a crime, and in the Christian faith, a sin. If that floats your boat, do it, but don't go around parading it.
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Guys, if you don't mind, I really don't want this kind of debate starting up in my story comments. KBP, I'll PM you separately later.
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Alright, please do. :)
If Equestria has those gender ratios...what would Sex Ed be like?
You know, I always wondered why this fandom seems to think Equestrian ponies would freak out if they encountered an Earth one. To me its like a Human seeing an ape. We may have come from them but we're a completely different species now. But I digress.
6126885 Equestrian ponies descended much more directly from regular horses than humans did from apes/monkeys. That's why.
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Apes are closer to people than horses are to ponies, both in terms of appearance and intelligence. Humans evolved over a very long time, ponies came from horses exposed to wild magic and made a much bigger and far more sudden leap. So the psychology of it is different. It's more akin to meeting an alternate version of yourself that grew up as a caveman.
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That's in this story though, I'm talking about the fandom in general, most stories I've read where a character meats a Terran pony is freaked out.
Another thing most people fail to consider is that the Equestrian ponies are much closer to humans than to horses. In fact the only thing that keeps them from being anthromorphs is the fact that they walk on four legs.
Any ideas on how Equestrian Sexual Education would work, guys? Seriously, I imagine it as a stallion lying face first on some kind of table. With their dicks poking through a hole in it. And a load of mares sucking them off. At once.
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That's the fantasy one. In all seriousness, I don't think they'd need much in the way of sex-ed since their sociey is more open and they're always naked anyway. You don't exactly need an anatomy lesson when everything's already plain to see. Mares start coming into heat sometime around adolescence, so they have to know what's happening by then. I'd be surprised if they go through formal sex ed in school, since these subjects aren't as difficult or taboo in Equestria, they probably get taught about them by much more readily by their parents, perhaps with the aid of a book or two.
I just realised. Rather than the average romance story of the male trying to seduce the female, or the pony standard of the female keeping the stallion interested, this is a case of both the male and the female in a contest where they are seeing who can seduce their lover the hardest.
I think Phoenix is winning.
So I just finished playing (Not watched, PLAYED) Phoenix Wright vs Professor Layton, and I have to say: 11/10. You could be a fan of Phoenix Wright, of Professor Layton, or neither, and you could STILL find enjoyment from this game. Maya finally has a voice actor (Don't worry, Kay, you'll have your day soon), the puzzles are great, the cases are great, and Darklaw looks kind of like Aura Blackquill for some reason
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(... They could be TWINS).
Not to mention, if you download the Special Episodes, you get the most meta thing you'll ever see created by game developers (It even rivals the recent Nintendo E3 digital presentations)...