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Don't you think it's a tad risky to just give out your e-mail address here?
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Not really. It’s an anonymous account. Nobody has ever contacted me on it anyway.
Oooohoohoo, what a chapter, nicely done gang! Twas a good chapter, and we're getting close to the end... whew...
That's something.
Good show!
Well that was a whole lotta awkward at the end...
It's a week late for Fourth of July, but I can hardly tell. Old glory is flying at full staff; the fireworks are in the air; and I'm feeling patriotic as fuck. Let us not sit idly by while Phoenix plants the banner of freedom in Twilight's fertile soil, but be active participants in our brony democracy and leave comments on the chapter. Make me proud, gents. Make America proud!
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They didn't throw enough dots...
I tip my glass to you for including this!
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Wasn't expecting to see him! Then again, it wouldn't be right to leave our favorite judge out.
The time for stiffness will come later, believe me.
Oh, I knew you'd come around, Judge! Did he meet Mayor Mare during his time in Equestria? She's probably single.
I only wish there was a way to make it less of a skullfuck for the poor men out there. Our toxic culture has reduced the great institution to another wealth redistribution scheme. We have much as a society to be held to account for. Alas, as long as there are votes to back the now poisoned chalice of the marriage contract, the system will run until lack of new marriages to feed the insatiable ego of the modern, feminized woman collapses the entire structure.
Lotta Hart: The anti-Applejack. I only wish Apple Goddess was around to buck her in the face...
That's a nihilistic moment for the reader when they realize the only thing keeping the innocent from punishment due to her meddling is the occasional presence of Phoenix Wright.
You have no idea, Lotta...
Huh. I didn't know that was the singular term for it.
Of all the things she could eat before engaging in anal, she chose Mexican.
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Stop making me hungry!
First the ear nibble and now this! You just know it's coming. Our Twilight Sparkle is going to have another roll in the hay as a pony.
You might think that slavery of another sapient creature is wrong, but it's not half as awful as the HarryxGinny shipping. It pains me to say it too, as you'd think someone like JK Rowling would want an interracial pairing giving how she virtue-signalled herself into a coma over that black dude Order of the Phoenix guy (I forget his name) and his sexy, chocolate blackness voice (barf). She skirted the entire "current year/fuck until we're all beige" trope and instead delivered the least offensive choice in as shoddy a manner as possible, with virtually no buildup and no progression/evolution of their relationships as characters. The two were just dropped on us like a giant boulder in the shape of a middle-finger from the heavens above. How was this woman who could wield the English language like the hammer of friggin' Zeus so unable to pace and play the long game of story writing?
I'm really not sure how the three of them can work. Or four of them. It's going to be a very hard sell. But my exposure to AA is limited to J4A and some of the fan-made stuff on youtube. From what I gathered though, Maya and Phoenix really don't have sexual chemistry. He's a man-child and she's a... well... child-child who loves hustling Nick for burgers.
She wasn't wrong! What with Celeponian immigrants, a cowardly nymphomaniac, an equally cowardly, introverted flower pony with rage issues, and a bossmare with more than a simple curiosity about tentacle plants.
I can totally see Twilight throwing science at this.
It's a trap! It's the best of all possible traps!
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I'm not shitting when I say what follows is one of the best clops scenes I've ever read.
That's gonna feel really good where it's going! Turn Loose the Mermaids? More like RELEASE THE KRAKEN!
*Boop!*
Hey!
Ohhh yeah. I'm feeling it. The patriotism is back in full force! Truly it is for this righteous cause that we cloppers fight. The cause of getting pony oral.
He gives it as good as he takes! Or does he?
And I haven't even gotten to the climax yet! This was getting hyped to me for months and... yeah! It lives up to the hype. Holy shit, bro.
Ohhh say can you see? By the dawn's early light.
What so proudly we hailed at Twilight Sparkle's ass reaming.
Who's horsecock and horse balls? The man Phoenix Wright!
O'er the pony we watched, who's been so loudly screaming...
I'm just going to stop myself before I invite a much-deserved drone strike on myself.
Illicit inch! Knocked it out of the park!
Holy fucking shit! The Imperial Standard of measure wasn't enough so he's screwing her with the Metric System! I love this chapter so much...
Fifteen minutes. In Twilight's ass. Fifteen goddamn minutes! He is clearly a GOD!
I haven't experienced fan service like this episode 100 and Roseluck didn't even have sex in that episode so this is even better!
And I'm surfing atop the wave like an absolute madman!
He discovered God in Twilight's anus! Truly, the Lord works in mysterious ways!
My kink is more multiple shots at the end, but regardless... this is a fine way to handle the climax! Masterfully played!
Oh crap, It's looking for me! Gotta go!
The Judge is fun.
Huh, neat.
... Holy shit.
So this is pre-season 2 Twilight, interesting. Also, if you thought Nightmare Moon was bad, Discord is FAR worse.
I'd imagine.
A lot. And it's fascinating.
Well that's about as subtle as a nuclear brick fired out of rainbow colored cannon to Ride of the Valkyries.
That's important. I can feel it.
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I get it's the 4th of July, but what did you think of my musical score after Turn Loose The Mermaids?
Also, Twilight isn't American, any issues there?
So much yes to this chapter.
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That's a shocking revelation fam.
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Thank you very much! We are indeed getting close to the end here. Hard to believe...
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Maybe, but they’ll deal with it this time. If they’ve learned nothing else by now, they’ve learned that magic only acts in accordance with desires, after all...
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The music in this chapter was excellent, I thought. You have my thanks for it. Looks like I’m getting yet another Nightwish album...
Why would there be issues? I said 4th of July because even non-Americans would recognize that as an occasion for fireworks. Phoenix didn’t mention the day, only the narration did.
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How much yes is that?
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Sorry for the delay in response. Still decompressing after a not-so-fun week of work...
He’s a genuinely nice guy and a good man.
He figures somewhat prominently in the first game and also has an appearance in the third. He’s somewhat jaded and beaten down to start, but ends up, like so many others, being inspired by Phoenix... and Mia before him. http://aceattorney.wikia.com/wiki/Marvin_Grossberg
Twilight’s just doing what everybody wanted to in the course of the games. Even Phoenix slapped her once for being annoyingly obtuse and unhelpful. She admitted she deserved it though.
Better and worse. Discord won’t kill or wage war on anything except reality, but he does like corruption and he’s far better at it than Nightmare Moon. In a couple other stories, including one of my own (Five Star Service), such corruption also turns everybody’s sexual preferences on their heads, making for some very interesting scenes...
It’s part of the attraction of her to him, as well--Phoenix puts himself in harms way and actively tries to save and protect others, including and especially mares. So he’s nothing like the stallions she’s known back home for the most part.
Indeed. I think Twilight’s going to be picking up a book on human mythology now...
You’re right. So I’ve clipped it. Now it just says: “Right now, I think what I’d like to do is...” she just trails off and lets her actions speak for her, which is more powerful here.
Indeed. So what’s happening? Let’s just say a certain someone doesn’t know when to leave well enough alone...
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Of course he doesn't kill, he seems to consider Equestria his playground and mortals his toys, so why would he willing break one of his toys beyond repair? Once you're dead, that's it, nothing he can do to you, so killing someone is obviously out of the question. Repeatedly shattering their mind and sanity, then forcibly stitching it together only to redo such a thing over and over however, now THAT'S another matter.
Rule Number 1 of Reality Warpers: DO NOT piss off a reality warper. Doubly so if they can be or are actively malicious.
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That was actually because she decided to talk shit about Maya to Phoenix's face.
After all, who needs cookouts when you have TwiWright action? And why camp out for a fireworks display when you'll get some right here?
And now they lose 50 dps!
I was thinking of you when I wrote it! Though odds are Phoenix isn't aware of the significance of the gesture right then...
My thoughts exactly. He deserved a cameo in the story.
WHAT??? Are you implying that this chapter will be used for something other than perfectly family friendly fare????
He did meet Mayor Mare, and got along well with her. Here's a fun fact--at one point during TAS I considered hinting at such a thing! But I (rightly) decided that nobody would care for it. After all, who wants to hear about in the Judge in such a manner? I don't even think Rule34 has anything on him, not that I mind.
Men are going Galt at an alarming rate. Why should they enter a contract which basically says they have few rights, they have to give up their lives and livelihoods, will be subject of scorn and derision in popular media, and are assumed at fault for everything should the marriage end? I might be exaggerating, but not by much. The system is now stacked against men, and men are behaving accordingly.
Oh, I might be able to find a way to get the two together later...
I think the biggest indication that players didn't like her was that she didn't appeaer in the third game after figuring prominently in the second. She only had a single brief cameo in Miles Edgeworth: Ace Investigations as well. But that's okay. You're going to find out exactly why she didn't appear in a chapter or two...
She has an inkling now! Pushy Paparazzo gets the shit scared out of her shortly...
Actually, neither did I...
They might have had second thoughts if they knew! But then again, they had fajitas, and not, say, refried beans.
Quesadillas--Twilight Sparkle's kryptonite!
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I make some pretty mean fajitas, for the record. In fact, I do excellent Mexican in general.
You don't suppose lightning might strike the same place twice, do you...?
In fairness, she herself admitted it made no sense and was a mistake, but the story was too far into it by then.
Do yourself a favor and avoid the new Spider-Man movie then. Spidey was very well-played, but they took very obvious pains to make all of his friends and acquaintences diverse, even when it made no sense. For example, WTF are you doing make Mary Jane an angsty hispanic girl who sniffs that she won't go up the Washington Monument because it was built by slaves? I wanted to slap the director for that one.
The impression I got was that she simply didn't know when to stop because nobody would tell her to. She's not unlike George Lucas in that sense, and has a similar flaw--her vision cannot be compromised no matter what. In some ways, they were opposites, you know--Lucas told very epic and surprisingly well-paced stories but couldn't write decent dialog to save his life, while HK Rowling is an absolute master of the English language but her stories keep going off into useless subplots, tangents, and political correctness.
In canon, no, they don't, despite what Pearl thinks. The best non-canon portrayal of Maya I've seen is actually in Operation: Turnabout. I think they nailed her there. And here...? Phoenix's foray to Equestria and the presence of Twilight changes things. Phoenix rediscovers his interest in the opposite sex in the unlikeliest manner imaginable, and Maya is surprised to find herself jealous for it and forced to confront her own feelings towards him. When she's hit with the Elements of Harmony, all her feelings are laid bare and she grows up for it. She's not the same person now she was before that. Could everyone together work? Hell no. And I'll say now nothing will happen between them this story. As for when it might... I'll just say that given the events of T&T there's a very logical time for it to happen.
If only there was a story or two that brought all that together! But alas, that would be too much to ask...
Be warned, multiverse theory's a bitch, Twilight...
She wasn't planning this all along. Really. Nope nope nope. Completely spur of the moment thing, you see... *psyche-locks appear*
Thank you! As familiar and perhaps jaded as you are with these now, I consider that very high compliment!
Well, if you don't like there, I'm sure we can find another place for it, Twilight...
Well, you have to admit it's superb motivation! Who wouldn't want a blow job from TWilight Sparkle? Or Rainbow Dash? Well, after she's been trained by Rarity that is... you know the story of which I speak!
I'll let TWilight judge that one!
You're very, very welcome! I'm just sorry I made you wait so long, but it had to be at the right moment in the story, and I like to think that waiting made it all the more delicious!
*salutes!*
I'm just going to stop myself before I invite a much-deserved drone strike on myself.That's okay. I've been inviting a divine lightning bolt for a while now...
I'm particularly proud of that turn of phrase!
Thanks! And yet, as usual, a heavy clop chapter gains few comments... why is that?
Well, I hate to burst the bubble, but that was fifteen minutes since the start of festivities, as in undressing and Twilight starting in on him. The actual anal only happened for a couple minutes, but that was more than enough for rapture!
Glad to be of service! Kind of surprised Rose didn't have any comment on this chapter, given it involved her favorite pasttime! But then again, she's probably distracted by another X-rated episode of Terra Foliata...
Did that earlier today at the beach! Well, maybe not like a madman, anyway...
The song was wrong, or didn't go far enough--heaven isn't just a place on earth, it's in Twilight's tailhole!
I may change it. I'll let you know if I do!
Well, it's looking for someone. And it's armed with a camera, not a Maverick missile! This will be resolved shortly...
DELET YOURSELF. REEEEEEEEEEEE
8317704 It finally happened. TLaTU has driven someone to REEEE~!
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I am honored and flattered to have triggered someone to such an extent! Kek be praised!!!!
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Thank you for your incredibly intelligent comment. We appreciate hearing your thoughts on such a matter as this.
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that has to be the single weirdest choice for anal sex i have ever seen
"ah yes pick the song based off a mad senator with a penchant for MEMES!!!! and the power of nanomachines (son!) that will perfectly capture the essence of the anal"
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I didn't choose most of the songs. I suppose I should give everything a second look, including the music, when I finally get through this on my editing/update pass.
Everyone has their own weapon, Phoenix. XD
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Apologies for being two months late on this! :twilightsoops: Let me answer it now...
Twilight would agree he's got a very potent (usually) concealed weapon of his own at this point! And he doesn't even have a permit for it...