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One assumes that if she's in the AA universe, she'd be in the style of characters there.
Feel the objection like you've never felt it before with right-aligned images!
Seriously, give Firesight thanks for having to re-justify everything after import. Stupid google docs messed up the import badly and it took nearly an hour to remove all the [ center] and [ /center] tags and align everything by hand.
Aren't you glad Firesight is writing this and not Peter Cetera? I will never forgive the man for giving us the line: "Like a knight in shining armor from a long time ago." Peter Cetera you are an unforgivable hack and Chicago is the worst band of all time.
Is it wrong I cannae stop staring at her horn?
Linky, I'm shocked. Shocked I tell you! Thinking of another mare's horn instead of mine!
We all have our dreams. Some of us have our nightmares too.
You're a dangerous mare! Just hope she doesn't return to troll you in your sleep by confiscating your coat!
Twinkle, Ahm gonnae build a wall and hide behind it until the U.S. election is over!
(Pro tip: Green = hyperlink)
The hours of pain and suffering. Male characters really got the shaft in the old days.
Blasphemy!
Give Twilight credit, she fit it in! It's more than Carrot Top and Berry Punch could do...
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This scene really works — on like a visceral, subconscious level. I really like it when crazy shit is going down in mundane or unexpected situations and no one is reacting to it or reacting to it like it doesn't matter. Huge turn-on. It's really similar to how some folks like it when two characters are broken out of character into having sex they'd never have if they were in-character. (shiver) Yeah... thumbs up for this scene.
Yeah. That's the stuff!
Nothing shocks me anymore. Thanks Fallout Equestria.
I don't normally listen to embedded music while I read... but when I do it's Nightwish!
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To be continued...
Oh yeah. Ohhh yeah.
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And we all thank you for that because f*ck you Nightmare.
You really think that trusting NIGHTMARE MOON is a good idea, grudge or no grudge?
That is the idea, yes.
Necessary low blow.
And that's all we ask.
She's gonna need therapy.
Eh?
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Erm...I...am entirely confused. Did we date, or something?
Opening salvos confirmed.
Hold on to your seats, it's going to get rough.
Anyone else managed to pull off the dream of every clopper and sleep with a pony?
She's not that bad, she's just a bit flat. Christ, Trixie... you're making me compliment a woman's beauty! They don't need any flattery from the Aficionado; they get enough from the rest of the simps I have to share this planet with.
Only in the Phoenix Wright universe would a demonic being composed of pure spite be allowed to give testimony on someone's character. Oy vey...
Mountizuma's revenge!
If there was an award for being completely ungrateful for the breaks you've recieved in life... Obama would win it. But dammit, Trixie, you'd be runner up!
If Phoenix is Player 1, then Mia is the End Boss. NMM stands no chance with her low-energy arguments!
Ace Attorney players and savvy internet arguers will recognize this tactic as poisoning the well. Good to know the Nightmare knows how to wield the best of the worst.
Mia can duck and weave like a pro! Phoenix would save himself a lot of embarrassment by withdrawing every now and then instead of plodding into the minefield like a Soviet shock division.
Death only made Mia Fey more awesome.
Show some grit, Trixie! Can't be anything worse than what you did with Anon inside your wagon...
Worst. Rapist. Ever.
This leads to a very important legal question: how exactly is rape defined? In the United States, each state has different statutes. Leaving aside jokes about California and their stupid, stupid California yes-means-yes law, it's tricky to make a case here. I can suspend disbelief to accept that magic is being applied as a sort of drug or alcohol, but I recommend anyone reading my comment to study the differences in the law and their moral implications. Is telling a woman you make more money than you actually do to get sex an act of rape? Is posing as someone else to get sex an act of rape? She did say yes, after all. It's a very messy issue.
I was a bit nitpicky over wording in the proofreading process but I must give credit here; this works a lot better than I originally gave it credit. This is an intriguing problem. You could argue that such exposure over time would be like slowly poisoning them with arsenic to kill them, even if the dispensing of said toxin were not intended if the knowledge of the effects were known. Awkward though it may seem, Twilight could be argued responsible for the consequences of her magic. Bravo sir. Bravo!
Well met. Means and opportunity must be joined by motive.
Burned!
People, go read Turnabout Storm quick and track down this clue!
Man oh man this chapter is some of your best work ever! And that Nightwish song is my new crack. Thank you James Cyberlink for your contribution to the chapter and my latest obsession for the next couple months. Can next chapter manage to somehow be just as amazing as this one?
7195220 This is a thing I do in Firesight's other stories. I write as some of the characters from my other stories. I kinda figured something like this incident would occur actually.
7195299 It was inevitable, yeah.
MY BONER IS CONFUSED ONCE MORE!
(But seriously, this could even count as Fan Disservice in a way...)
Hazabuwha?
What a glorious chapter well done, well done, nice job man!
Dark and sexy indeedy~
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Yeah. The fimfiction editor blew up on the right-justified graphics, and it can't seem to handle the image links either, resulting in garbage until I fix it. Plug and play it's not.
Hearing that line gives me flashbacks to watching Karate Kid II in theaters...
Yeah. I'm that old. *sighs*
Never knew large horns were a turn-on for you, Linky!
I'm going to bed. Don't wake me until 2020, when hopefully some form of sanity has been restored to American elections...
What exactly is Spike to Twilight? Assistant? He seems more like an indentured servant.
Now, now, if Edgeworth can defend, than there's no reason Phoenix can't prosecute someday...
Just imagine this chapter turned into comic form!
Thankies! I think the scene works because it actually fits. You can't deny this is probably exactly what Nightmare would do to Twilight in this situation. And actually, I think that's a turn on for a lot of people. Losing control, helpless to stop what's happening to you... and worse of all, unable to keep yourself from enjoying it! It pushes buttons in a lot of people, myself included!
Figured you'd like it! See if everyone else does...
Wasn't quite meant as an unintentional FoE reference...
First time I heard this music was today. I'm getting that album now!
I'm sorry, were you saying something? I was distracted...
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I only wish.
Just wait until Trixie crosses over and takes human form... hoo boy. I already have a scene in mind where Phoenix first encounters her.
And for all that, it's still a more sensible legal system than ours sometimes!
So does Trixie keep a toilet in her wagon? Or does she just hop in the woods to do her business? Maybe there's just a hole in the back like the ships of old...
Now now, give her a chance... besides, wouldn't you take advantage of a situation like this if you thought it was a dream where nobody was actually getting hurt?
Oh, believe me, NMM hasn't even begun to fight. Right now, she's mostly just taking Mia's measure...
Indeed. She didn't become The Nightmare she is without knowing exactly when to strike.
Only the WW2 Soviets wouldn't care about minefields, marching through them like they weren't even there...
If you think she's a badass now, just wait until... oops. My lips are sealed.
It'd be funny if Mia actually brought that up somehow.
Good question. It's been defined so far down nowadays that just about looking at a woman constitutes it. Seriously. That 1-in-5-women-raped-in-college stat only works if you count things like unwanted kissing or hugging. If that's your definition of rape, me and most guys have been raped. But in this case... the thrust of argument is, could Phoenix actually offer true consent, or was Twilight's magic inducing him to do it? There is an answer, and we will arrive at it in due course.
Well, I did change the wording on this after your initial comments, and after some additional feedback from CtH. You both made valid points, and so I addressed it. That's what prereading is for!
Agreed. This is another instance where prereader feedback plugged a plot hole and smoothed out an argument/counterargument.
You know, is Trixie is better than Twilight at anything, it'd be alliterative insults.
Seriously! I think I'm going to have to make a blog post on this since there seems to be confusion...
Thank you thank you! Plenty more to come! We'll just have to wait and see...
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The problem is, she f*cks back...
In fairness, Trixie doesn't think she's real at this point. She thinks she's having a dream and is going to take advantage of it.
Pity it's going to backfire...
Indeed! Actually, a prereader used almost that exact phrase when commenting on that point.
Ain't easy to put aside your personal feelings sometimes. Even a dedicated judge like Due Process had trouble doing so in Trixie's trial.
And lots and lots of hugs.
Maybe I shouldn't have left this hanging so much. I was warned maybe I was. You'll get a clue to this in Part 60 of Turnabout Storm.
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/6177/61/phoenix-wright---turnabout-storm/part-60---the-time-has-comedrop-the-bass
Needless to say, events only touched on or implied then are going to be expanded on...
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That would be Linky (aka Shoeshine) and Twinkleshine, two background ponies. AJA has them as a couple in his own stories, and has given them an interesting background. Linky is Caleponian, which basically means Scottish. He uses them to comment on the action in my Firefly chapters, since they both enjoy military stories. They've often quite clever and they make his comments very fun to read! Here's an example:
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/281029/before-the-storm-the-rise-of-firefly#comment/7039107
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Opening Salvos indeed. Actually, Just a few ranging shots or shots across the bow. They're both taking each other's measure right now; the real battle has yet to begin. When it does... watch out!
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Pretty much the reaction I was going for! You will find a clue to what she's talking about in part 60 of Turnabout Storm.
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/6177/61/phoenix-wright---turnabout-storm/part-60---the-time-has-comedrop-the-bass
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Thank you thank you! And plenty more of that kind of dark sexiness to come... Nightmare's not about to stop using such an effective tactic, after all...
7196109 I know what it is precisely mate! I'm just shocked to find it coming sooner than expected!
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Quite welcome dude, hehe.
I await with bated breath
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If it's still causing confused boners, then as far as I'm concerned the chapter is a success! The reason the scene works is because it fits in with what's happening.
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Sometimes you have to fight dirty to win because in cases like this, so will your opponent. Besides, for all her faults, Trixie would NEVER let herself sink to Fair Verdict's level.
Aye.
Those help, but seriously, she's going to need the help of a professional therapist after all this because even without this, she's got a few issues that need some resolving, especially with Phoenix.
7196109 Regarding the mystery of the rape allegation before S. Tarot's trial...you must mean...
TAKE THAT!!
THIS must be what you mean, right?
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That moment when you're swept overboard taking a dump, realizing it will be your last.
Siege of Castle Harmony remnant. She likes them long because horns = power. It's a throwback to the old style Linky when she was a Maregolian.
You wake up and find images online of the Great Wall of Trump. What do?
The prereading was such a profound improvement to this chapter. Just a shame it didn't generate more buzz... It's really good!
7196179 That was just a joke, but yeah, decent argument. I was hoping our friend AJ Afficionado would remark at the return of the Confused Boner joke. I hope I can put it in a later chapter...
this is a different style of righting but I like it.
looking good and the chapter is really good also.
Things are stating to heat up.
Is the Cliffhanger referring to Twilight sleepwalking into Phoenix's bed? Or something like that? Because...that happened.
7203761 It's all right. In any case, probably Midnight Sparkle.
7203801 I did see a Rule 34 pic of Midnight getting naked and raping Flash Sentry...Jesus, Phoenix would have a hard time.
7204197 Hmm, you don't say...
Psht, wow, the look on his face!
7204241 Look on who's face? Did you seriously just google that image?
7204260 Come to think of it, we're probably looking at different things. I'm looking at an image on derpibooru where she's cowgirling him in one frame as Midnight, and revealing that she had a baby in the other as Twilight. His reaction is what's priceless.
7204268 Are you taking about a second frame in the upper left? Because that pretty much IS an accurate description. I'm more focused on the fact that Midnight Sparkle has a hilarious expression on her face. She's...REALLY enjoying herself.
If this was Phoenix rather than Flash Sentry, it would probably be in a bedroom.
On a bed.
That Phoenix is chained to.
He isn't the kind to just let an evil spirit take over Twilight and then rape him.
7204274 Huh, my image has it on the upper right. But I don't know, Flash looks like he's enjoying himself to me... but yeah, this is a common trope in stories, giving up the world in favor of awesome sex with a hot villainess, so yeah, Phoenix would definitely have issues with that.
7203761 Anyways, to answer your question about my personal favorite AA villain. I'd have to say it's The Mastermind of Ace Attorney Investigations 2: The Prosecutor's Path.
But you know, it's a shame this doesn't take place in the Corruption of Champions universe. Otherwise, Phoenix would be back to normal just by eating some hummus.
7204287 Yeah, it is the upper right. Phoenix ain't just gonna give himself up to some villainess. Unless Midnight SOMEHOW hypnotised him...and even that wouldn't work for long. And Phoenix was able to kick down a door with a specially reinforced iron lock on it. And he's really smart. Yeah...you're going down if you mess him around,
7195281 Rough you say? I like it rough...
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I just had an idea for a discussion... do you guys suppose Twilight likes it rough? That's a question. She wondered earlier if talking Phoenix into roleplay was a possibility, and honestly...we have no idea what titles she reads in THOSE kinds of books. Probably all of them, so she might be quite kinky...
I assume by the time of A Sonata for Two Worlds (Or as I like to call it, "Phoenixverse Chronicles 3: A Sonata for Two Worlds" (Assuming she's an alicorn in Leo's sequel) her newly found alicorn libido will make her quite...well, you know. Phoenix is gonna have a hard time. In more ways than one, too...
(Not entirely relevant to the crisis in the story... but I am curious.)
7207442 Yes I believe so. A number of years ago there was a study of female Mensa members. They were more promiscuous towards male Mensa members. I forget the exact wording.
Twilight having found a very smart, driven and curious man in Phoenix would be quite taken.
7208149 That isn't entirely what I asked. Do you think either Twilight or Phoenix has any fetishes, or kinks? Seeing as Twi mentioned role play, and the Mane Five saw things she already did as kinky...
7208881 Phoenix in my opinion has no kinks or fetishes. Given time and a strong loving relationship, then I think he'll blossom in that regard.
Twilight I'm certain has a few kinks. What those are I dare not hazard a guess....... Ok, I dare. Light bondage and subjugation. Also having been exposed to horses of this earth some of that tack could be considered fetish wear. Let's not forget that a saddle has an entirely different use here too. I can imagine her sending her friends a picture of a cowboy atop a horse. The scandal.
7209760 How does a saddle count as fetishwear? A sort of primal excitement? Possibly.
I do kind of agree with your decisions about Phoenix and Twilight. At the time of the third Phoenixverse story...Twilight and Phoenix's sex lives would need some spicing up. Then again, what specifically makes you say Twilight likes light bondage and subjugation? Makes a bit of sense, but hey. Just curious as to your reasoning. (Phoenix being somewhat dominant does make sense...)
7209822 I'll give two examples. 1) Winer wrap up. Saddle used primarily as a means to keep warm. Here saddles are made of Leather and used primarily for comfort in riding a horse. This occurs after the horse is "broken" in to accept the weight of a person.
2) Dog an Pony Show. You know the scene where the diamond dogs drop onto the backs of the five ponies. That thing they put in their mouths was a bit made of rope. To control the horse or pony. Thus light bondage.
As for subjugation. Twilight spent her formative years as a student under Celestia. She strove to please her by being the best. In Lesson Zero we learned to what lengths she'd go through to please Celestia. A few tweaks here and there and it's yes master no master how may I please master sexy times.
7209866 Good points, but now we need to particularly apply the light bondage stuff to Twilight. The submissive student thing...Confirmed. That really is in character, eapecially seeing as the stallion seems to come first in the average mare's head.
I always imagined Twilight having a fetish for being used as a toy. No need to worry about disappointing anyone. Just lie back, go limp, and relax as you're relentlessly used by whatever stallion matters without worrying of doing anything wrong to them, or in general. Kinda messed up for some, but hey...
7209887 Twilight 's curiosity is your answer. She will probably go out and buy a set sized to her pony form. She'll need "help" getting it on. Hint hint wink wink.
7209924 Yeah, that makes a bit of sense.
Twilight: Oh, Phoenix! I need some heeelp heeere... *winking*
Phoenix: ...Twilight, you're way too small for that...
Twilight: No, I'm not! I bought a set tailored specifically to my physique!
Phoenix: I mean that, well... You can't carry me on your back, you're too small...
Twilight: .........You don't know what this is all about, do you?
7209947 Phoenix would be blindsided!
7210915 Twilight even has a full latex bodysuit...
Phoenix: Why... Why do you even HAVE that?!
Twilight: For sneaking around. And I might have found another use...
Phoenix: You really are a kinky one... Almost too kinky...
Twilight: Are you scaaared?
7212567 Phoenix: Yes....yes I am. Very.
7207442 You.... You get my idea? Ahaha~!