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So true. So very very true.
*SNIFF* You're setting all us Wrirus shippers for failure, now. I mean, they even slept in the same BED!?... This is crazy, man.
Well, I thought there would've been more to them too, but Capcom (as per usual) had different plans... oh, and some of the fandom (Apparently, yaoi-shippers exist... makes sense, considering that MLP has yuri pairings).
... ... Welcome to the Franzworth shippers, Mr. Wright.
... Never before, until this day, have I ever felt sorrow for Maya not being with Wright. I never really thought much of them being together, since I didn't quite see a spark (Heck, I personally thought she was 14 when I first saw her). That's why I actually like the... Kayworth... Edgaday... kerjigger, pairing a bit better, because Capcom tried to cement a closer relationship [though not necessarily romantic], not only through their interactions in the present (The Forgotten Turnabout was GENIUS), but through their past as well... Plus, she's more helpful given that she can recreate anything with Little Thief, has a personality rivaling Pinkie Pie's, and some of the cutest expressions ever... Sorry, went off topic there. My point is, today, you have shown me a side of Maya that I feel... sorry for her. That isn't to say I've never felt sorry for her (She's been through more crap than most 17-year-olds can attest to), but this is something happening in her daily LIFE. Not only that, but you've shown the devastating effects of the OTP: When the protagonist doesn't quite know of the situation, the love interests cast aside will whither away, and they won't ever be able to win the affections of the man they love. I don't know if she'll move on, find someone else, or even become a part of a herd system like that weird guy's always saying (Me), but you've done wonders with her personality. While it may delve from the Maya we're used at times, she's still Maya Fay, and that's all hat matters... unless, she decides to be Sekai Saionji and mess things up.
... As a firebending master once said: "...fire brings only destruction and pain. It forces those of us burdened with its care to walk a razor's edge between humanity and savagery. Eventually, we are torn apart."... However, it should always be noted that Fire can truly be mastered once you realize that fire is merely energy and life, not destruction.
... omigoshomigoshomigoshomigoshomish! It's Franny!
Wait, you mean-
... Huh. Normally, Franny's ties with her father are met with ambiguity, but here, you can see her moving on from her past all at once. I suppose it's not a BAD thing. After all, that's what we ALL wanted from the Ace Attorney series from characters: directness.
Ah, Ace Attorney Investigations. I love it so much.
*sigh*, I'm STILL not done with Dual Destinies. It's a shame; it's no every day you get a Scottish-sounding (His vernacular and silence/objections, anyway. Not sure about actual dialogue) samurai for a Prosecutor.
YIPPEE! MORE FRANNY!!!!!
Heh... looks like there was a disturbance in the force, as it were.
Maya need to get laid in other words?
Also....Eh...haven't seen this sort of Celestia before...(Molestia doesn't count)
I could practically hear the Great Revival playing in the background when Franziska showed.
"That foolish fool of a fool!"
That's the thing with humans, we're tough as nails, no matter the odds, we will bounce back.
Fair enough.
I see.
Aye, you'd make a fine Green Lantern.
Knowing her, I would not be surprised.
Wait, she's only 18? Wow. Also, I see she's having a touch of fun at poor Maya's expense.
Fair enough. I like how she is taking this fairly calmly, which seems normal, from what I know, she's not the kind to blow up just like that.
She knows. She knows.
I'll admit, this got a chuckle out of me.
You have NO idea...
Column A. Mostly.
Agreed. I honestly like characters that play the voice of reason, it's nice.
Aye.
Sounds about right.
Corny or not, Yoda had a point. Wait, Franziska watched Star Wars? I can imagine her calling everyone foolish fools.
I see.
Oh this is going to be fun!
Go on...
Dis gun be gud!
Oooh myy!
I'm going to leave this here.
5930528 As a guy actually owns a copy of 50 Shades Part 1, for science, I can legitimately claim to hate this story because it's terrible as opposed to hating it being the internet cool thing to do. As Far as Twilight, I do have to confess to riding the bandwagon on this one. That and all the movie reviews which have covered in detail why it's worse than cancer.
50 Shades and Twilight do have a hilaribad component to them that is fun to laugh at though.
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That is so Twilight! Brilliant comment.
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Oh please god, no!
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He's an actual romance writer.
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OMG! This is so awesome! I'm really looking forward to more. Hopefully it won't be too long.
5930896 I DID say it was stupid.
Woooot~ it begins!~ 8'D
Awesomely done once again dude, this has gone swimingly~
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Thanks for all the feedback!
Phoenix is unaware of Iris at this point, since Trials and Tribulations hasn't happened yet. As far as he knows, it was all Dahlia, and he's got very ample reason to hate her. It also stands to reason he wouldn't have slept with any girl since, or even shown interest in one...
Leo has been writing her scenes, so he'll be very happy to hear you say that!
Well, we don't necessarily know either. By the time of Dual Destinies, we know that's she undergoing additional training, presumably so she can become the Master of Kurain as she's supposed to--Pearly delivered a letter to Nick from her, explaining she was in a particularly difficult phase of her training. But regardless, I'd like to think she's become a fine woman. Could she someday become his in the Phoenix Wright canon? I don't know, but I would think it'd be much more possible then than it is now. She's much more a kid than an adult at this point, after all.
As for *this* story... we do have some things planned for her, later on. All I'll say for now is... she won't be left out.
In Equestria, Fire is already seen that way, since it's associated with Celestia and the sun itself.
And there will plenty more to come.
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Mostly, she needs to see and experience things from Phoenix's point of view. As for how that will happen...
Oh, Molestia she's not. As ShadowLDrago stated, Molestia will screw anything that moves. This version of Celestia may tease and even troll, but she has rules she won't break and lines she won't cross. Here she's both motherly and sexy, and really does want Twilight to know her true self instead of the sun princess persona she has to project in Equestria. That's not to say some things won't happen, however...
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Thanks! Sorry to leave it off here for a bit, but that's all there is for now. More chapters will come, but they have to be written first. Expect new releases every couple weeks from here on out.
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And Phoenix even more than most.
You know, I didn't even think of that... then following that analogy, the tint of Twilight's aura makes her like a Star Sapphire?
As must I, for now... that's the last of the prepared chapters. The next has yet to be started. But thank you again for these running commentaries! They really make our day to see. And I'm very gratified you enjoyed the ending scene! Leo will likewise be overjoyed to know you really liked the Franziska appearance. He wrote it and did a bang-up job with it.
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Wooohoo!
Awesome saucy brosef!
Weird. With all of her passion and and quick temper, I would have had Franziska pegged as more Sith than Jedi. Not that she's evil, just more in their mindset.
Guess that sabbatical really calmed her down.
I love jealous maya. Sooooo cute. The way she supresses and denies her jealousy (and budding romantic interest) towards nick is just - ngggg.. the maya x nick shipper in me squirms in delight (even if its their pairing is unlikely in this story).
Perhaps another source of lols for me was the way she compared herself with twilght - in talent, personality, and physical qualities. Makes me wonder, just how big were these boobs maya was referring too with much disdain (i cant imagin twilight being the busty sort).
As a mayaXphoenix shipper i am happy that maya still gets good scenes despite twilight replacing her as love interest for out lawyer.
Fight on maya!!!
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I'd say being beaten in court repeatedly, getting shot, and *then* going on sabbatical really calmed her down. That's enough to make anyone take a step back and be given great pause. She's stubborn, but she's not stupid.
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Plenty more with Maya to come, fear not. And don't worry, in the end, she won't be left out. I daresay she needs to be able to see and experience things from Nick's point of view. As to how that happens...
Well, I have her as least a C-cup for two reasons: 1) most women in the Phoenix Wright universe are busty, and 2) if Twilight looks anything like Tara Strong as a human, she'd have to be busty.
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i have an idea of what to expect. Can't wait!
hmmm... daddy like
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Well, I knew that, it's just that if we look at this from a realistic point of view, while taking into account what was just revealed, there may be an increased chance that Phoenix'll be too crushed by what DAHLIA did to screw Phoenix over to remember all the good times he and IRIS had. He may forgive her, but a romantic relationship is oujytv... is ouuuuuugfx... is unlikely (Darn, it still hurts to say!). That's all.
But still, though... when Franny discovers all this stuff about ponies and such... whips will fly, Judges will be OK with that for some reason, and Wrights and Edgeworths alike will faint... despite not receiving any cuts... yeah, that's something that didn't make sense in the Ace Attorney universe. Whips, OK, that could put someone under, but a nine-year-old's slaps!?... I think Wright should take some self-defense classes. You never know when a DBZ villain will try to taze you (What? You thought that's what Manfred's Objection!s sounded like too, don't deny it!).
What I don't get is, why hasn't Twilight remarked that Mia looks like Sonata?
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This is a side story to the unofficial Turnabout Storm novelization, where you commented earlier. The novelization adds a lot of new scenes and subplots, including an alternate route to the verdict, an extended ending, and a Twilight/Phoenix romance. This story is a sequel to the novelization as opposed to the videos, and yes, it helps greatly to have read the novelization first to understand how things got to this point. If you don't want to do that, the cliffnotes version of the novelization is here:
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Because they don't really look alike. When Mia is channeled she has Maya's hairstyle, not her own, and Phoenix never told Twilight directly that Mia was who Sonata reminded him of.
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MILFlestia?? Oh hell yes~
5930316 But that's Edgeworth's theme...
5938823 If you look at the Justice For All Soundtrack, there are two versions of the Great Revival: one for Edgeworth and one for Franziska.
5938829 Oh wait, you're right.
Question. You said that this story was going to encapsulate the events of T&T. But according to Leo Archon, the sequel is supposed to happen after DD. How are the events of AJ and DD going to come into play?
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That would be a spoiler, sorry.
5943697 Ugh. I shouldn't have asked. Should have known this would be a big tease.
this story is really going strong but I am wondering ware it is going with the Interpol investigation?
and I think we all knew Twilight was a virgin.
Harts Fire
5946847 I don't think she is. I think at one of the parties that Pinkie threw before Phoenix ever showed up in Turnabout Storm Novelization, that Twilight got drunk and screwed some stallion. Or something. I don't know.
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Thanks! The Interpol investigation is a reference to events in Ace Attorney Investigations: Miles Edgeworth. Franziska appears there and announces she is investigating a smuggling ring related to a case Edgeworth is working on.
At this point, she still technically is. Don't expect that to last, however...
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well her virginity is not the question here. I am more surprised they stopped at that point.
5947408 inb4 Firesight says, "Who said that they stopped?"
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hum interesting thought.
Yes, I know this is labeled mature for a reason, but could someone make a teen rated version/edit? I want to follow the character development without the ... Suggestive parts
5953299 ...That's probably impossible, I'm afraid. We...wrote it in an interesting way. I'm personally going to see if we can get recaps put into the sequel so that if things from this fanfic come up and people haven't read the other one, they get a brief summary or something.
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Sorry, but removing even the merely 'suggestive' bits wouldn't leave much of a story. That's the way I write adult fiction-- the sex is very deeply interwoven into the story and even essential to it. Take it away, and it just doesn't work as well. In fact, for certain things it doesn't work at all.
5969162 welp, I tried.
Even though Twilight is my lest favorite pony, this works for me.
Pinkie is all time best pony.
Oy... Next time, put a clop warning on the chapters that have it.... But other than that, really enjoying the story!
I WANT to see that scene where Maya channeled Firefly, could be awesome.
7335285 My fellow reader, may I direct you to this chapter of Turnabout Storm: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/6177/66/phoenix-wright---turnabout-storm/part-65---channel-change
WARNING: THE CHAPTER PRESENTED IS A PART OF THE TURNABOUT STORM FINALE!
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I promise he will appear in due course, but most likely not until a subsequent story.
My boi Simon!
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Glad you spotted the reference! Guess you would like him, given your avatar. I really did like Simon in Dual Destinies. I haven't played Spirit of Justice yet, but I assume he's in there too.
Bit of a repeating here.
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Fixed, sorry.
Are you really talking about him...? Ponyfeathers; tell him to be wary of an international faceless spy who WILL kill his mentor and sabotage a rocket. Hopefully that will avert a major tragedy.
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I wrote this right around the time I first played Duel Destiny, so yes. That’s him. And Franny is someone I wish they’d brought forward into the newer games. I love the guy. He’s one of the more interesting prosecutors out there.