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I hope I'm not the only one who was actually thinking more about the music video which was coincidentally released just earlier this same week...
I always do love long chapters. There's a bit of satisfaction when you see just how long the chapter to a good story is before reading it. This is a good chapter and it brings out completely different emotions throughout. Looking forward to the next installment.
Oh, also, any chance that a certain von Karma will show up at some point?
6052889 Probably inevitable that she'll show up again. She already appeared earlier in the story.
OK, now with that tiny anomaly taken with some salt, let's move on to THE PLOT!!
GAH! THE WORLD BUILDING! IT MAKES TOO MUCH SENSE!
GAH! YOU DID IT AGAIN! *sobs* You did it again!
I'd imagine that Luna would summon Miles Edgeworth to use Logic against her ('cause let's face it: Phoenix may be god at Turnabouting, but Edgeworth is superior in more complex thinking).
So...they had sex, reheated dinner...and went straight back to having sex?
THE SECOND COMING, EVERYONE!
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Which music video? And yes, there's a pretty good chance Franziska will make a return appearance. Glad you liked the long chapter! I honestly wasn't sure how well it would go over at first given I'm taking the reader on a bit of a roller-coaster ride during it.
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Sorry, what tiny anomaly? I get the feeling there's a missing comment here...
Did what again?
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[groans] Bad pun, but essentially correct...
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Yes, shenanigans involving other places/characters are coming. Some have been hinted at, others may be a surprise...
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Oh, I was talking about the Appledash thing; I've moved past it.
World building... you sick, sick person. How DARE you make your story more interesting by providing insight into things that aren't explicitly stated, all while having it all make sense by keeping the fanon and canon in mind?! That just makes me like your fic MORE, you jerk!
the chapter so touching. extra sweet.
Harts Fire
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Yeah... I'm thinking maybe that whenever it was I read Part Six, I was just falling asleep or just waking up...
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Lullaby for a Princess Animation
I was honestly expecting Twilight and Phoenix to react in disgust, anger and shame about Pinkie and the others spying on them, turning the pair " special first time" into a cheap peepshow.
Nope. But he's awesome for it.
You're insatiable.
You're magnificent.
Yep.
Indeed.
Perhaps.
Wait what?
Daaw,
I see.
Nice
Troll.
Hehe.
Like most beings.
Let it Go, Let it Go, I am one with the wind and sky...
Fair enough.
In a sense.
...
Yikes.
Aye. Blinded by her own pride and power that she could not see the monster she'd nearly become.
...
I can imagine.
I can't help but think this is a jab at Lunaverse.
Hardly. Twilight respects and loves you like a mentor and a mother figure.
Heh.
Daaw.
*daaw meter explodes*
Oh. Nice. A reference instead of a jab. Nice.
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That's too good an opportunity to tweak Twilight to pass up.
*Pearl begins singing along with you while Maya just turns up the volume on her headphones*
Not a jab. Homage. What Celestia is describing is a path not taken, one that could have led to the Lunaverse. She knows full well that things wouldn't have had to change much to turn her into Corona, The Tyrant Sun.
Not until it was almost too late. But she finally did, and that is to her great credit. Many cannot bare self-reflection or admit the error of their ways. She could.
Indeed she does. And in the end, everything that's happening is bringing the two even closer together.
This was a daaw chapter. Glad you liked, and thanks as always for the commentary!
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Fair enough.
*Sings louder*
Which is why I corrected myself later on.
In the defense of those many, it's often hard to swallow one's pride and admit to error.
Nice. I do like how calm Celestia is, not the usual diplomatic calm, but like she knows she can relax here, and her smile isn't a polite one, but genuine. Plus, I suspect it felt good to finally be able to just vent in a sense, tell someone else how she nearly fell.
Not a problem.
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Aw... I'm sorry. I'm a horrible person to write such a story. But you already knew that, right?
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Thanks! A D'aawww chapter is what I was going for there...
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The chapter only rates two spikestaches? I must be slipping...
6056165 Eh, you're a'ight.
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Nah. They're her friends and Twilight knows full well they're very happy for her even if they're now teasing them both a bit. Besides, it's not like they meant to--it just kind of happened that way, in part due to Twilight's subconscious desires for her friends and teacher to know how good she felt. More on that later.
And as for Phoenix, he's not really one to get out of sorts over something like that. He's not at all a fragile person, considering some of things he's dealt with, and I don't think this would rank very high on an emotional upset scale given he's had to deal with things like his boss being killed or Maya being kidnapped or Dahlia betraying him. Think of it this way: He didn't get particularly mad when he realized they'd heard him bare his soul to Twilight back in Part 59 of Turnabout Storm, just a little annoyed. Here, he's in a much better mood, and honestly, he's just happy they're okay with it--okay with him, since he'd been worried they weren't after what happened during his last visit. He likes Twilight's friends as well, after all, and knows they mean well.
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Oh right... duh. I saw that and it moved me to tears. I added a link to it in the new chapter and may find a way for Celestia to sing it later.
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[Derpy] Thank you! Thank you! [/Derpy]
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Appreciate it, thanks. Though I'm sure there are some people out there who think I'm evil incarnate for writing this and what I did with Turnabout Storm.
6056269 Eh maybe things are a TOUCH too ecchi (And no paizuri... aww), but hey, it's been like over 60 chapters since they've gotten the opportunity, so it kinda makes sense... plus, WORLD-BUILDING (I wonder if you're going to expand upon that fake ransom plot. I mean, Iris said that she was supposed to be a factor in it somehow, but failed, so the questions are, "What was her role?" and "How important was it that Dahlia cast her off as a sister?"... or you can be normal and expand upon something more important, I guess... still, it'd be awesome.)!
6056269 Come to think of it, though... were you implying the possibility of Wright getting his herd of the Mane 6?... If so, I'm a touch dissappointed, because if the sequel fic has Apollo Justice in it, I was wondering if Juniper Woods and Fluttershy were going to fight over him due to their similar personalities... yeah, it's a weak basis, just something I thought was possible is all.
Any chance Gumshoe will appear before the Trials and Tribulations arc?
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Had to look up those terms. With regards to the first, it can be tricky to find exactly the right level of it, but for the most part I think I'm okay. With regards to the last... be patient.
Certainly glad you appreciate the worldbuilding! As for T&T... honestly, I need to play the game all the way through before I can answer those questions. I watched a game walkthrough like two years ago, but that's not exactly fresh in my head now. Not to worry; I'll figure it out.
For the moment, I'm just engaging in a little fanservice. Where it will actually go remains to be seen.
6057244 Well, it seems cleaner to say paizuri rather than... you know... the other thing. Nice to see that you care, though.
6056363 Fluttershy? I keep thinking Rainbow Dash would try to seduce him.
6058117 Why, because she's sort of like Athena, or because RD is just plain adorable like that?
6058152 RD is gonna fall for Apollo, if you ask me. Because they seem to have a matching personality. And they both make a lot of noise. And Rainbow is gonna find Apollo to be Awesome McCoolname incarnate.
6058155 Ah, so it's the latter. OK.
Will Iris be making an appearance at all? She is (basically) Phoenix's real ex. The only reason I can think of why they didn't get together for real would be because the memory of Dahlia would loom over everything.
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So, the reason Equestria is so Earth-like is because Celestia has been smuggling human technology and Other cultural Elements? If Celestia and Twilight 's comments about cinema are a hint, ponies aren't much about improving.
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Oh, I wouldn't go that far. It's not like they *meant* to, the opportunity just kind of kind of got dropped in their collective laps, and Twilight was in fact partially responsible--Pinkie (and Celestia) picked it up in large part because of Twilight's subconscious desire for her mentor and friends to know what was happening to her and how wonderful it was. And no, Pinkie can't actually turn it off, particularly when Twilight's broadcasting like the she was.
Just remember that above all else they were very happy for her and delighted that she and Phoenix had finally gotten together. They can certainly be forgiven for wanting details and unexpectedly getting them in realtime. And like any good friends, they're going to mercilessly tease her (and him) about it afterwards.
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Not entirely. But those are good points and questions that will be addressed in a discussion to come.
I hope Twilight and Celestia see the other two The Lord of the Rings movies. I bet they would love them. Also their reaction to the movies would be cool to see.
If Twilight reads about World War II please don't turn her into a misanthrope. The stories of heros like these stories (link) should help her realize that humans aren't all monsters. And learn, that most of us are good.
Awesome awesome awesome~ :D
Nice chapter you gaiz, nicely done and written.
Peace out for now!
And keep it up~
6056165 raised to the level of awesomeness.
6059114 I don't see how that's even possible. She's IN LOVE WITH PHOENIX. Of course that won't happen.
In case anyone wonders what this number means, the average dick size (In the U.S at least) is supposedly 5.25 inches. In the UK, according to the UK National Health Service, it's about 5.5-6.3 inches.
Just think about that for a few moments.
6062116 It means I got majorly screwed friend.
6059114 Firesight would never go that angle. I think the angle on Twilight presented in Gentleman for Mares — in reference to the atrocities committed by man — was the correct one and bears repeating here:
This is the Twilight Sparkle we know and love; the open-minded intellectual who takes the good with the bad.
Words in brackets mine of course.
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Can someone tell me what that means?
6062672 Oh, for crying out loud! It means I couldn't even meet average by North American standards. Shameful, I know.
6062697 Don't hate, I don't know these things. Probably because I'm British.
Point being, Phoenix is well endowed. Just bringing it up due to the surprising lack of comments.
...KTHXBAI
6062701 Hate? Nothing hateful here. Anyway, that sure was a quick response. BAI
Also, can someone tell Firesight I have Skype messages saved that I kinda need him to read, so could he do it when he's got a moment?
Thanks.
Also, regarding human world atrocities...
War brings out the worst in people. It brings out the best in others.
Mmhmm.. kinky
This again? I'm guessing it's Magical-Viagra.
Mmmmm-magical Viagra! Magical viagra!! Magical viagra!!!
ah god damn it! Spike!!!! Loool poor, poor spike!
would somebody pls think of the minor in your midst! *grumbles* Irresponsible horses..
Phoenix you're such horny perv
Celestia wants... hurhur
oooh burn maya.
Damn i could just about comment on every little thing like this! A plethora delicious subtext on every chapter, every scene... fuck, if only i can cram them all into this single commentary
shit... phoenix.. you damn lucky bastard.
Damn.. that got heavy all of a sudden. Great backstory. It makes celestia's character in this story more complex and interesting.
Interesting... I'll have to check this Lunaverse out...
Oh my god I am on the seat of my pants as I read all the way to this chapter. It took all of my effort to stop here for the night. Already 168 pages into it after just starting it the previous day. I read fast... maybe I should stop now when it isn't that terribly exciting (though at this rate, it's only a technicality)
Franny as a psychologist somehow fits as she has no outright malice toward anyone outside Phoenix and Edgeworth to some extent... though that relationship is more of a rival... plus it fits her characterization in the third game.
I personally don't like the concept of the Luna Verse, despite perhaps ironically liking Trixie. It's the same reason I don't like Fallout Equestria and stopped reading it... nostalgic depression. Seeing an AU with such a drastic irony themed Mane 6 just hurts... (plus I didn't like how everyone was deadish in FOE) but I don't hold ill will toward it, and maybe when I can get in a healthy frame of mind to read past my anxieties about it, I MAY read it at some point.
I laughed a little too loudly at Larry's scene and hope he isn't shoved off to the side for the rest of this story... I get that this isn't focused on the court, but Larry is Larry and is going to cause trouble.
This is fantastic. The only negative I can find is that my excessive excitement over the future installment of Trials and Tribulations and how I imagine it would go is giving me some excited anticipation that is probably messing with me with how much I am looking forward to it. I would call it excited nervousness.
If left to my own devices I would finish what is available tomorrow so I have a choice to make. So I might as well consider picking up Spirit of Justice (Middle of Case 3... on the first trial segment of the case) which I am putting off for similar reasons. I play the games for the story so I am using guides. I can care less about the game I just play this series for the story! (plus I am a bit of an idiot in later cases and play the constant "How about this evidence to that testimony?" game after awhile)
Or as this rapidly shared video states:
I can figure out like 25% of the game on my own and play the save scumming game if low on penalty juice (eww ) but I don't like the bad ends... so I play for the good ending. In my experience, 99% of the bad endings are melodramatic, tragic, and trauma conga line of insanity.... I did succumb to a penalty because one of the "bad" answers in SOJ was, She was dating him... and I found it too hysterical how Apollo all but contradicts himself proving it wrong. It was worth it
I love how with a single paragraph you managed to put ten times the effort into making the setting make sense than the games’ North American localization team did. Now you just need to explain why the L.A. courts are suddenly operating under Japanese jurisprudence.
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I know this is rather late, but I totally know what you mean, I am really tempted to keep going, but for the sake of a busy day at work tomorrow, I need to get some sleep. also, I wasn't originally too keen on FoE myself, but in the course of reading it, it grew on me, much like Pinkie's parties grow on those who are not terribly comfortable with big crowds.