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Oh s!
Welp, Phoenix is dead.
The amount of work that went into this chapter is truly a sight to behold.
Dude... DUDE! Add this to your best hits paragraph collection. Holy shit bro! The detail is phenomenal!
Is this a challenge to write a group scene as unhinged as this one? If so consider this challenge accepted!
Now that I think about it, I can't remember one of the alicorns nickering either. I think Celly snorted once or twice though.
Lascivious and positively adorkalicious. That's our Twi.
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Sorry AJ, your Celestia shipping is in another fictional universe still under construction.
Have fun pissing blue fire for the next couple weeks is all I'm sayin'. The absolute madmen!
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Fact check: True.
And the rest of your linen closet is on strike until working conditions improve!
Cannot unhear the "sheeeiiiit!" I've listened to the My Way Power Rangers parodies one too many times...
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Don't count your chili-cheese dogs just yet, Sonichu.
All that's missing is the micro-machine man.
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No, no dear. The stallion!
Sorry, Rares. I didn't have a meme for that.
This ship sails itself. The make-up sex must be mind-blowing...
Welcome to the Dick Emporium. We have hundreds of thousands of new and used dicks for you to choose from! More than you can shake a dick at! Miles of dicks! Piles of dicks! Big or small we sell them all! Now open 24/7! Dick Emporium: Where the ride never ends!
You cannot escape the hands of fate, RD...
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(Hug)
The scented mares meme has no brakes!
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Sexy Pinkamena it has been too long... Toooooo loooong. The hype for the next chapter is indescribable!
Bang up job on this chapter. Lord knows you busted your ass for this one.
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I must say I do have an incredible infatuation with Pinkemana, then again I just have a thing for mares/girls with long straight hair.
And this was a good chapter well done, and holy dicks was it long, but enjoyable. Felt just a tiny bit bad for Dashie, but in the end she enjoyed it. Feel bad for AJ though, thinking about Soarin... poor filly You can do better!
Good show, good show!
Minor piece of stage management - Vinyl stops sustaining the magical constructs shortly after the climax, but then Phoenix rests his hands on Rainbow's withers when she laments having to revise her sexuality.
And, of course, that's the detail I get hung up on...
Something something horsing around.
Sounds loud.
There's a fair bit of difference between court and sex.
The little touches really do make this shine.
Probably both.
Oh dear.
Perhaps. But that's half the fun.
See, you say that, but...
NONE CAN RESIST THE CUTE!
Perhaps not. But considering that he's drunk and all he's been through, I don't really blame him.
You're an evil pony, ya know that?
You're enjoying this.
I enjoy Rarijack.
I personally like the idea of the ponies worshipping the Greek/Roman Gods, and Bacchus would likely be the one Pinkie favors.
I know a friend who's gonna like that.
Ah crap...
Oh. Well then.
... Can that be an omake?
That's fair.
I'm suddenly worried.
Wait, how did you-?
Wait, what, how, I-
Well, better than killer psycho Pinkie, right?
*reads further. Sees that it's the last paragraph* You cocktease!
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Nah, too cheap a joke even for me.
Well, he was seen practicing from Apollo Justice's 'Chords of Steel' workout in the Turnabout Storm videos...
Oh, I don't know. I'd imagine Franziska von Karma uses her whip in both.
Agreed. And you know me. I'm very big on the details, even minor ones.
Definitely both. Oddly enough sex seems to be something she's not that bashful about...
You only have to show Twilight a spell once for her a copy it, something she's demonstrated more than once. I can think of two instances offhand--she copied Sombra's dark magic after seeing him and Celestia use it, and she copied Starlight's entrap-in-crystal spell after she got hit with it once.
As she's about to learn!
All I'll say for now is that a certain somepony already made arrangements to recover their memories later from the other side, as it definitely wasn't their first sex-soaked bender...
She doesn't even have to use her stare to get what she wants! Think you'll agree pure beauty and adorability is enough with Fluttershy.
True, but then again, he really doesn't know who he's dealing with here...
When she wants to be? Very. Wanna know how she found out she could cast spells right across the mirror portal? She was teasing Miles Edgeworth during their upstairs chat a couple days earlier. She showed him her mating aura and was surprised when it affected him. Discovering then that magic was transmitted along with sight and sound, she then seduced him with it through the portal and used that doppelganger spell of hers right on his equipment, going down on it as he watched. That explains why she was so pleased with herself and why Edgeworth didn't want to talk about it afterwards!
Immensely. And though he doesn't know it, it's an apt repayment for what she did to Edgeworth.
So does AJA, myself and several other people I could mention. It's one of those opposites-attract ships that works well for that reason. Seemed a shame not to use it here. It also features heavily in my new Unleash the Magic - Nightmare Night story, which I hope you'll take up eventually.
Without a doubt. And the ponies do have the equivalent Gods of Ancient Graze, who live high on Mount Mulelympus.
Oh?
Didn't really make sense that she would be automatically okay with it afterwards. I was thinking the same kind of reaction as when you, say, have a same-sex encounter for the first time. Or in Rainbow's case, an opposite-sex one with an entirely different species you've been disparaging all along.
I just reworked that paragraph and that area around it to show more of Rainbow's reaction. Give it a look and tell me what you think?
It can... or it might be saved for the next book in the series. Stay tuned.
I went looking for what Phoenix's rule 63 name would be, thinking it wouldn't be hard to find given the amount of art out there on the subject. But nobody had one. The only 'real' name I've come up with is Felicia. Miles Edgeworth would be Myla, but Phoenix? Then again, Phoenix is a name that can be used for girls as well.
You should be.
Mia's keeping tabs on things. And as to what she's doing with Celestia at that moment, you got a hint at the end of the first section. You'll learn more in the next chapter.
Exactly the reaction they all had.
My explanation is that Pinkie can jump from place to place by entering dream and ethereal realms that basically give her access to everywhere, at least in her own reality. These are also realms different dimensions may intersect. She can use those realms to observe those different dimensions (which she did a few times in this story), but she cannot normally cross into them for reasons both arbitrary and arcane. So no, she can't just pop up on earth any time or place she wants as she can in Equestria. Mia Fey enabled her to do so for just this one night.
But in some ways even more dangerous for it!
Had to have one last cliffhanger. I could have continued, but didn't for two reasons. First was of course for the cliffhanger effect, and the second was the chapter was already 13k+ words of wall-to-wall and off-the-walls clop, and having already come down off the high of the main scene it would make sense to ramp it up again. Best to wait and give this its own chapter or section so readers will start fresh again. Will Phoenix win the bet? Even if does, will his sanity survive the experience? Stay tuned and in the meantime, hope you enjoyed the chapter!
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Speak for yourself.
I can imagine.
Probably.
Oh absolutely. Makes good become great.
Not unlike Majin Buu. But smarter. And less psychotic. Not that that's very hard.
Pinkie Pie probably.
And I think to some degree, she knows it.
Once again, fair enough.
That is VERY impressive.
The premise doesn't entice me too much, but since you asked nicely, I might give it a shot on Wednesday if you remind me. Tomorrow, is entirely too busy for my liking.
I see, appreciate and love those puns.
She's a BIG fan of Rarijack.
True enough, and while Rainbow may be the brashest and aggressive of the Mane 6 on average, that doesn't mean she doesn't feel. That said, if you piss off the pony who can punch you at literal supersonic speeds, you'd best hope you can hide. Because there is NO running from that.
Yeah, sure.
Ain't got much else to do.
True enough.
So, she's a Loony Toon. Kinda.
True. But, death by sex is death a la Cupcakes. Never actually read that, nor do I particularly want to. I read the TV Tropes, it was enough.
Always do.
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But what a way to go! Nah, this isn’t Cupcakes and this isn’t that version of PInkemana. Which is not to say she can’t still be dangerous in her own way...
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Apparently, so do a lot of people! Well, she is attractive on many levels, and not just because she has a good look. Maybe simply because she is so dangerous. This isn’t the Cupcakes version of Pinkemana to be sure, but that’s not to say you want to get on her bad side...
Well, like I told ShadowLDrago, it just didn’t make sense that she’d be immediately okay with it after given her previous preferences and proclivities, and to be perfectly frank, I think it’s more of a turn-on if she’s enjoying it in spite of herself and can’t escape it no matter what she does, those hands following and pleasuring her and slowly reducing her to putty. Better yet, you note that Phoenix didn’t use anything on her *except* his hands and still blew her mind, meaning even better things can come later. Actually, I fleshed out her section even more now both during the action and after when she’s coming to terms with it. Give it a read and tell what you think!
Well, she’s tried Phoenix now! Surely that counts for something? It’s a sure bet it won’t be for the only time, too...
Thanks! And the show’s not quite over yet...
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Oops! Dammit. Fixed. Removed, actually.
Hey, if that’s the worst thing wrong with this chapter given how incredibly complex and difficult it was, I’m calling it a success!
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Thank you very much! For as much of a struggle as it was, I can’t tell you how glad I am it shows...
Thanks again! I’m very proud of it. Proud of the whole chapter, in fact, but especially stuff like this. That first section actually came easier than the subsequent one, perhaps because it was simpler in some respects just for having fewer characters and a single focal point--Phoenix punishing Celestia. But what came after...
Go for it! You’ve certainly proved you can at this point...
I can remember once, and that was when Starlight switched their cutie marks. Or was it Luna who did so?
One of many reasons Phoenix loves her! That and the fact that her tailhole is a magnet for his cock...
As far Vinyl’s concerned, this is just another wild party! Okay, maybe a little wilder than usual...
Courtesy of someone who’s even more crazy about certain things than me... and who specializes in making unlikely ships happen!
Don’t worry. She’ll be getting them more after this!
Hell yeah! That’s our sexy girl...
Well, the villa linen has certainly gotten a workout this week... and don’t envy the housekeeping crew cleaning up after this! Though they’re going to be wondering about all the strange footprint in the carpet and the strange violet and blue hairs to be found all around...
You showed a couple of those to me. Hysterical!
You have a date with destiny, Rainbow... the hands of fate are nearly upon you!
Gods... I remember that guy and those commercials quite clearly from my youth. Damn, I feel old... I even remember he voiced a fast-talking G1 Transformer named Blur.
I needed a way to make her stick around, and what better one that a powerful fetish? Makes sense that she’d love wings, not just because she’s a pegasi but because of how she loves flying.
Ah, Star Trek: Enterprise... you were cancelled before your time and worse, your series finale was reduced to a second-rate TNG episode.
That’s okay. Considering what shortly happens, I don’t think she’ll mind!
And usually based on trying to outdo each other.
Not in this chapter, it doesn’t! Seriously, I’d love to see the commercial for this place...
I think that joke wrote itself!
I fleshed out that scene even further. Give it a look.
And it’s all your fault! You corrupted me with your headcanon...
One of the funnest episodes of the last season! And don’t forget Piratejack...
Everybody commenting seems to be fixating on that. I ain’t complaining! I’ve never tried writing her, so here’s hoping I can deliver once again...
Thanks! And you ain’t kidding... this was a struggle all through the second section, which was all but about 2500 words of a 13000 word chapter. But man, am I happy with how it came out. And a very strange phenomenon has been observed with this chapter... usually I write something crazy like this, and after it’s published I have a hard time reading it without cringing. But this time...? I love it! I want to read it over and over just because I pulled it off so well. This is the best clop chapter I’ve ever written, I think. As you said before, I must have been on some particularly wicked Crystal Heart Meth!
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I've noticed, hehe, and her bad side? Oh jeez.
Mmm, looks good, so nice job on that. I'm just a vanilla reader I guess, so some of the stuff like this can be a bit jarring for me But it was good, so nice.
Yes, yes it does, Phoenix will have to clean her of the taint that is Soarin's jizz
Oh I know, hehehe, we'll see how this goes next chappie.
To say I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter is an understatement.
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You know, I just now realized you finally got yourself a real avatar. Nice!
No reason his courtroom voice can't be used in other settings!
She's usually shipped with Miles Edgeworth, for obvious reasons. Their rivalry was born long before Phoenix Wright showed up as both trained to be prosecuting prodigies under Manfred von Karma. Fun fact--Ace Attorney: Investigations at one point showed a younger 16 year-old version of Franziska that dressed even more provocatively and used a riding crop instead of whip.
Agreed, usually. But can it be overdone? Yes. I think the Lord of the Rings books are way too overdetailed to nearly the point of inaccessibility in the first half of Fellowship of the Rings, for example.
And less prone to turn people into candy, chocolate, or other sweets. Though come to think of it, Pinkie Pie is exactly the same color as him and shares the same tastes in food...
Nope. Vinyl, who's been involved in more than a few wild and crazy shindigs over the years. When she wants to remember events of a party afterwards, she 'saves' her memories to a music crystal and restores them afterwards once she's sober.
She does. And here, she's not quite above using as a form of sex appeal to get her way when the mood strikes. Rarity bats her eyes and uses her beauty and confidence to make stallions fall into line, while Fluttershy uses cuteness and goes demure and bashful, even vulnerable. That's why Photo Finish had her act that way during her modeling shoots because she knew damn well that would enhance Fluttershy's appeal even further.
Then again, neither did Rarity... Phoenix is nothing if not resourceful and able to turn the tables with a little magical help from his 'assistant'. In that sense, he and Twilight here is not much different than how things work in court with him and Maya.
And possibly worth an omake all on it's own...
Sorry to hear. Consider this your reminder, then. I'll give you a more personal plug--it's a far different and more plot-driven flavor of clopfic than Midnight Rising, featuring Starlight and Trixie as its focus, taking place after the former's visit to earth seen in the EqG shorts. It's pacing is different but once it gets going features one major scene a chapter, each showcasing the magical (and sensual) corruption of a separate mane 6 member until all that's left is Starlight, trying frantically to both protect Trixie and find a way to undo what she herself accidentally set in motion as her friends become nightmare version of their former selves (such as Fluttershy becoming Flutterbat again). Starlight's intentions were good in the spell that started things, but you know the saying. For added incentive, it will also result in a call for help into the EqG universe late in the story.
Not everybody does, so thanks!
Clearly a lady of good tastes, then!
Oh, absolutely. But it isn't just her. if you think about it, ANY member of the Mane 6 is very dangerous when pissed off. Twilight can turn into fire and cast any number of nasty spells on you, Rarity could wield multiple blades as easily as she does her sewing implements, Fluttershy can turn her stare on you, an enraged Applejack is unstoppable given her massive strength, and Pinkie... well, one word: Pinkemana.
Opinion?
Currently, I've got plenty. So much writing, so little time... and there's work to be done at my job before winter vacation. Business before pleasure and all.
Other options are plays on his nicknames like "Nixie" or "Nicky" but those sound less serious.
Given her reality-bending/realm-hopping abilities, she might as well be in some senses, yes.
Nor did I. I know it by reputation and that's enough. But the idea that she's got this darker half/alternate personality inside her is kind of sexy and she doesn't have to be homicidal for it to work. It can take a sexual bend as well.
And your longposts are always appreciated and looked forward to. Thanks again!
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So is everyone else who's commented thus far! Hope you at least liked what led to it, though...
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Thoroughly enjoyed that's for sure. But Pinkie, well she's really hard to write. It will be interesting indeed to see your interpretation.
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Thanks, it's from an old anime I used to watch, it was fun. Stupid, but fun.
I guess that's a valid point.
... Dammit Japan!
Why do you think I stick to the movies?
And if taken apart, she can reassemble herself, and she's been shown to be very different from anything the protagonist has ever dealt with before...
Huh. That's, pretty smart.
She might not do it OFTEN, because most of the time, she's content with what she has and in canon, well, one of her friends can make the laws of physics huddle up in a corner, comforted by an equally battered logic and reason. I speak of Discord.
He earned the nickname of Turnabout Terror.
You are correct, sir.
Oh what the heck, sure, I'll give it a shot.
You kidding? I love puns! The worse the better. Mostly because of the groans and the "goddammit"s that I get. They just make me laugh.
She is. I can send you a link to her profile, see if any of her stories interest you, minor spoiler, a handful of them contain my longposts. And I may or may not have had a hand in one of them.
And even without PinkAmena, Pinkie can offscreen teleport, has a CANNON, which fired confetti, but still, she can probably load YOU into it, and is a minor reality warper. If you make her mad, Celestia help you. And if MAUD catches wind that you got her mad, you're going to need divine intervention because even Celestia's steering clear of that.
It works a lot better. It isn't MUCH, but it makes enough of a difference that I REALLY like it.
Quite.
And while I can see them working as jokes, it'd be hard to take her/him seriously like that.
Hell, she even pulled a Duck Season Rabbit Season on a pony. And Iron Will. Which was amazing. I love that bit SO much.
True. I can see Pinkie having a darker side to her that, she doesn't actively repress, but most ponies don't really bring it out in her, but that doesn't mean homicidal. I prefer darkly sexy Pinkamena to psycho "I'm going to murder you while making darkly appropriate puns that might get an 'oh god why' laugh out of you."
My pleasure.
well ok this was a interesting chapter.
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That’s one word for it. Hope you enjoyed it!
Wow, and I thought the horseplay was over but, damn! Nicely done. If a bit gross here and there, but overall enjoyable to say the least. Wish Nightmare Moon got some of that "punishment."
Cut the music. What I'd like to have right now is for all you fat out-of-shape sweathogs, keep the noise down while I take my robe off and show the ladies what a real man looks like. Hit the music
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sorry about that. curse you ravishing rick rude
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If anything, the Ace Attorney Pursuit music should play right here, given he's definitely in pursuit of Twilight's friends!
Somehow, I don't think you're sorry. And pretty much!