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ok I don't think a cold shower is going to help this chapter wow exultant work.
Aw, the poor girl, feeling stuff she doesn't want to feel at the moment. That's ANOTHER time you've gotten me to feel sorry for her, so congrats.
Heheheh. Twi right.
Well, there are times when he falls flat on his face and people make fun of him a lot for it while he makes a goofy reaction, but other than that, he's pretty good at those.
Welp, I guess you could say... he got a penalty.
So anyways, see you later.
Ohhhhh yeah! I got something to say about this, people!
Upright and forward in Phoenix's case!
Ha! You added the bit about his spiky hair.
This was confirmed by the medical publication, Xenophilia, so we may trust its veracity.
Picture a giant red stain on the mattress and you get the idea...
This line approved by Zecora's Library!
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This line approved by Sea Swirl's Library!
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Or maybe not...
Oh, I don't know. I can think of one that they haven't tried yet...
Rainbow Dash, you're a jerk! I'd still have sex with you, don't get me wrong...
Sea Swirl is having PTSD at this point!
Between this and Unleash The Magic... and Five Star Service... I'm noticing your trend towards uncontrolled humping in large groups.
You must fight the Molestia, for our sake and your own!
Honesty ain't charity, ya'll! You have any idea what kinda taxes ah pay on three-hundred acres?
"The goggles. They do nothing!" -- Silentwoodfire.
AJ, you might very well be the horniest thing in Ponyville!
Oh, you! Yeah, I see what you did there!
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Popcorn ready! Let's do this...
Yeah, that hits the spot! I sorta... like it when the mares make horse noises during sex Don't judge me!
All of Canada approves!
Gentleman, we have liftoff! The greatest chapter of all time has left the platform!
Couldn't have said it better myself! Bravo good sir!
And a round of applause for our favorite unicorn/alicorn — the adorkalicious princess of all our hearts, Twilight Sparkle. You really took that scene with dignity! Fear not, we don't think any less of you. Time to go find a towel!
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My temperature went from Fahrenheit to Celsius and now Kelvin.
guess magicalliy induced Anal sex leads to unintended dick swapping
Side affects may include:
Strong cravings for hay and flowers
Uncontrollable whinnying
Lowered sexual performance .
.............Holy sweet mother of Joesph... I actually have no words to say about this right now...
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Thanks!
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Thanks. Yeah, poor Maya's been through a lot. She'll be a partial focus of the next chapter again as she tries to come to terms with what she just felt and you find out exactly what that private lesson of Celestia's entails...
I'm shameless, I know.
Agreed. Most cases he starts off a little shaky and makes some early missteps, but by the time they're deep into the case he is pretty much ruthless in his pursuit of the truth. Stand in his way at your peril...
In essence, they both did! The next chapter will deal with the aftermath of it. Some people have asked for some conflict between them, and this will certainly cause one.
Hope you enjoyed!
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I assume that means you liked it?
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Actually, it wasn't that specifically that did it. She's actually been doing it to him all along; this is just the first time he--or she--noticed. It'll be explained in the next chapter... and no, it won't cause him hay cravings or loss of libido.
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Well, struck speechless is *usually* a good thing in writing... does that mean you liked the chapter?
6865538 Both in the literacy and er... intimate ways Suddenly I feel even more nervous for my first try into the romance genre...
6865538 Nope. Absolutely LOVED it!
I'll bet you do!
What can I say? I'm a boobs guy.
I consulted the Xenophilian's guide to human/pony sex, written by one T. Sparkle, with a foreword by M. Dash and L. Bellerophon, also contributed to by L. Heartstrings.
Dude... Not an image I want or need!
What, do you mean you're expecting that one to happen here? What makes you think I'd ever be so perverse or shameless?
There's a reason I'm playing this up a bit. I'll let you wonder for now.
How do you think she got her cutie mark?
*whistles innocently*. Well, to be fair, Five Star Service had exactly one group scene the protagonist participated in over twenty chapters, and we certainly haven't seen one here... yet. Unleash the Magic...? well, that's kind of off in its own little world, as you well know!
Be warned, Molly is still very much within her... watch your flanks!
That's really good.. I may use that later!
I woudn't say she's the horniest, just the most practical and down-to-earth about it. If she wants you, she'll have you and make no bones about it. Does she want Phoenix? For now, she's just teasing, but... we'll see.
Who, me?
Don't forget the tea! Might have to make it Long Island for this one, though...
I put that in for you. Hell, I did the last scene of this chapter in large part for you! Which is NOT to say I didn't enjoy it myself...
And you were very patient, waiting months for it. You're welcome!
*takes a bow* If this doesn't establish me as shameless, nothing does!
Mission accomplished then! Glad you of all people enjoyed this chapter! Celestia knows you deserved this after reviewing my UtM stuff...
Considering the ending chapter, with the anal thing out of nowhere, I must admit my boner is now very confused. Again. Phoenix seems to be confused about his, considering the twist ending.
What confused boners we all have!
Confused as in they have no idea weather to be erect or not, mind. Our little lads have no idea weather what they're looking at is arousing or disgusting. Sorry to explain the joke, but...I felt I was obliged to.
Surprise pony buttsecks.
6865538 I can take a guess as to how Phoenix takes this.
I myself only vaguely understand, and I wrote it.
Don't tell me he will slowly be turning into a stallion with sex...
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Not at all. You'll get the full explanation next chapter, but I will say now that this has in fact occurred before and it's just the first time they noticed it.
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I'm sad to say, I get most of the references in that...
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Him and Twilight both. Despite how intense it was they're both feeling a little squicked right now so don't expect them to shake this off quickly...
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The best kind!!!!
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Just checking. And if you want a preread...
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Whew!
6866328 You want to hear a secret?
My first gaming system was a
Atari 2600
6866303 Huh, so you know what Homestuck, COC, and/or Insane Clown Posse and juggalos are? Cool.
6866328 In Markiplier's voice NO THANK YOU!
...okay, maybe so...
...Huh. So that's why so many guys like anal...
And, uh...
Dear
PenthousePrincess Celestia...6866139
I know a bit more than that, if only because of my past
OK readers...there is one extra video link in the story, lets see if you all find it!
6866303 Calm down, it's a joke. I already know this. I guessed. And you told me anyway.
Also, I know what horse nick erring sounds usually, but I'm presuming when Twilight does it, it's using her more human-sequel vocal cords, therefore making it sound like her voice, therefore making it cute...
How about that for adorable.
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I remember the 2600. I'd still play it, too. My family's first PC was an Atari 800.
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Three out of four, anyway. I didn't know what Homestuck was.
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All you have to do is ask. Oh, and I'm curious... have you been keeping up with Unleash the Magic?
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It all makes sense now, right?
Hah! Only problem is, she may have her own Letter to Penthouse to write after next chapter...
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I wasn't upset.
I think this is one of those things where I leave it in the mind's eye of the reader--her nicker is whatever you imagine it to be.
6867626 You went on about how there would be character reactions and dramatic revelations and serious stuff after I made a gag about confused boners. That's what is being taken too seriously.
Also, can I have a bit in the next chapter put in involving the phrase? Honestly, AJA seems to think it's the greatest comment ever written.
And yes, her nicker is whatever you imagine it, I guess. I'm sure Phoenix would find it cute anyhow.
Also, BREAKING NEWS: THE 3RD STREET PROMENADE OR WHATEVER HAS AN UTTERLY MASSIVE BARNES AND NOBLE BOOKSTORE ON IT. Well, you know what to do in a later chapter.
You.
Oh you poor poor dragon.
And a massive perv. But yes.
Hardly, it's plenty safe, usually. However, when it DOES go wrong...
Probably, even Shy does sometimes.
Threat to her? Humans have invented spaceships that can go faster than Rainbow ever could.
Oh boy.
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Zen badass Lyra... Ugh. I just can't get over it. I wonder if there's a chapter for making the base of the triangle a pair of mares with absolutely no desire to have sex with each other.
The haaaaaate!
Sorry!
I guess I meant it in more of a generalized way. The potential was boiling beneath the surface here for such actions to break out.
And yeah UtM is out there alright! It's an enemy Blitzkrieg of fetish clop from which there is no hole deep enough to bury yourself in!
You're more than welcome to it!
Reading over it the last time, it really stands out. It's like partial homage to my own writings, particularly Fertile Ground. Especially this bit...
From Fertile Ground:
I'm deeply honored to be have inspired any part of your story given you're the one who's taught me so much.
I may never fully recover!
6867626 And now you know of the greatest webcomic of all time. You're welcome.
6867626 alongside other books I've been reading
I guess that answers if fluttershy is interested or not. Good chapter
ok... I did NOT see that coming... (Probably did, but...) yeah, I'm starting to picture Phoenix Transforming to a Stallion. Let's now call him... Phoenix "Stallion" Wright.
6873201 Ehm...partially...but he isn't transforming entirely. As of now, it's just his dick.
Yep. Nice. So...
1. Can we see Twilight in heat? Like, to some degree of lust-crazed?
2. Is Twilight or Phoenix going to even want kids? As of now. Not counting... img00.deviantart.net/b239/i/2009/207/d/6/trucy_wright_wallpaper_by_vickinator.png
6876030 aaaand that went wrongly in my mind than it should have... thanks for that inappropriate imagination feed...
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Fair enough and thank you for commenting. It wasn't intended to be a new case story, though that's coming. I accepted that it was likely to get heavily downvoted, and it was. I wouldn't say I'm happy about it, but I understand it. I wanted to write a crossover romance based on Turnabout Storm, so perhaps 'sequel' is the wrong term for this. Side story or bridge fic (to the coming true sequel) would be more like it. I marked it as a sequel because I had no other way of associating it, and it is a continuation of the Turnabout Storm novelization which as you note I heavily wrote, so I figured I'd earned the right.
Regardless, I'm gratified you like it as a standalone romance, at least. There's a ton of worldbuilding and character development in here along with some occasionally gratuitous clop. That's the way I usually write. It's already spawned its own independent side story as well, as you'll see in due course.
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Upon reflection, I have removed the sequel tag from the story description and marked it as a simple continuation of the novelization rather than outright sequel. Thank you for your input.
6883303 It's more of a Stop-Gap, isn't it?
6883199 I honestly thought the charm of the Ace Attorney and MLP universes can through just fine in this fic. At least, as well as they can for a romance. The charm will most likely be more visible in the continuations to this story. I think Firesight has already spoken of the "Phases" I think. It was in a blog post, somewhere.
Hey guys...slight update. Firesight has gone to finish off Unleash the Magic, after which he'll hopefully fully finish off this story, and move onto the next part of this epic saga.
...In the meantime, Leo Archon is off doing...whatever he's doing (I have no idea what he's doing, as it's not really my buisness) So..."Someone else" is working on the next chapter. Hang tight, folks!
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Welcome and hope you enjoy!
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In the novelization, which this is based on and I wrote the last third of, Phoenix stayed behind and had two more quick cases. He defended Sonata and then Trixie, facing two new prosecutors and arguing in front of a pony judge.
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And I just now noticed you're reading the novelization as you commented on it a week ago. In that case you'll read about the other cases in due course.
6909638 The magical scientist can't comprehend it. She ain't on her home turf no more...
...You should see how she reacts to...something else later on.
Hahahahahaha xD Pinkie Pie, you... I love you so much xD She's so damn silly, I loves it! And I am glad I am not in this universe, I don't think my heart could take rejection from Dashie *sobs and holds Dashie card close* I shall appear in this story! And win Dashie's affections! *dons Flight Jacket* It shall be done! Teh Dustchu, rolls out~
Pfft
But hey hey, awesome chapter man, awesome chapter. And... somehow... I'm not surprised at that little ending thing there, with his shlong taking on an equine shape Not surprised at all... I expected
Good work on this man, good work!
Oh, God. If Twilight's rut button is pushed when she's in heat...around Phoenix...with no risk of pregnancy...she'll go bucking CRAZY!
...So, is Nick lucky or unlucky? Probably lucky anyway, just for having Twilight...but what about in terms of estrus?
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Very well. You are hereby warned that Chapters 7 - 9 have clop, and 8 has particularly heavy clop. After that, no real clop until part 15, which is the heaviest clop chapter yet. It's an M-rated story with a sex tag, so I didn't think I had to put warnings on each chapter except for the particularly heavy stuff.
When I first saw this trailer, I was instantly reminded of this fic. Waiting with bated breath for the next chapter!
7004052 Soon, good sir.
... Well, I'm sure Maya fans are going to like Ace Attorney 6. Meanwhile, I'm just thinking to myself: I wonder what it'd be like if every assistant in the series were in one room. Maya, Tracy, Emma, Kay, Susato... well, I bet YOU know what you'd do if you had the chance, eh Firesight ? But in all seriousness, I'd bet it'd be adorable.
7074357 Oh. Dear. God. If you're referring to something sexual, I aught to kick you in the nuts.
...Besides, that isn't the kind of show Trucy does.