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A dare, that’s all it took to send my whole life into this mess. Now I’m stuck somewhere far away from home, with nothing but the fancy clothing on my back and an amulet I really wished I didn’t have. I only wanted for the convention to be less boring, but getting sucked to another dimension is a little too exciting. Oh, and did I mention the talking, multicolored ponies? My day couldn't get any better…

Don't Starve belongs to Klei Entertaiment/ Image belongs to ZombiDJ, look him up on deviantart, for his art is awesome!

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Oh, well I’m glad you liked it, but I see you are looking it my amulet,

^Only error I found. Nice story btw can't wait to see what'll happen next :pinkiehappy:

Honestly? I would be lying if I said that I didn't expect anything exiting during the convention. But getting sucked to another dimension is a little too exiting, even for someone like me

Idk if you meant exciting?

Saw a Don't Starve picture, my decision to read was instant.
Looking good so far!

5767516 I read the story like 5 TIMES, I'm surprised I missed that! thanks!
Also thanks for the Fave!

5767550 Errrm, my English not good proof enough. Thanks for pointing that error out!
And thanks for the Watch!

5767670 I know right!?! There is only like what? 6 Don't Starve related stories in the ENTIRE fimfiction! Also the art is from ZombiDJ, He is a Don't Starve fanatic.

This is a pretty good story. I like all the references to other stories in it.

Oh dear.

Also, I'm willing to do a crossover with you in the future if you want. I'll need someway for Lezard to learn about the Displaced at large.

5768092 I can see that in your profile's bio, and I'm glad you li-
wait, your pic seems familiar...
HOLD ON, you are the Metroid guy ain't ya? I think I mentioned your story among one of my reference links (pain in the ass to make so many btw) Well, I'm glad you liked my story, and I hope you have a fantastic day!

5768123 Erm, if you read my story you'll notice my character is nothing BUT clueless to what on Earth is going on, so if anything he wont know about the displaced universe, not yet at least. But I'm glad and willing to do a crossover if you want, but it will have to wait a little..

All in all, I hope you too have a fantastic day!

5768661 Ok, spidernests are a GO (completely forgot about those buggers)

*notices that there's a new displaced story*

Oh look, another one. Hopefully it's better than many of the recent ones... not that they where bad per say... just that they... where...

0 dislikes?

LET'S DO THIS!!! LEEEEEEEEEEEERRROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOYYYYYYYYYYYY JEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEENNNNNNNNNNNNKKKKKKKINNNNNNNNNNNNNNSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Holy shit that's a lot of references to other displaced... I LOVE IT!!!

5768983 AAAAW CMON YOU JINXED IT
THANKS ALOT :ajbemused:

nah jk, I still cant believe I haven't gotten any dislikes either, seems surreal!
I hope you enjoy my story! :pinkiehappy:

Also thanks for the fave!

5768997 It was also a PAIN IN THE ASS to add, too many to count, and I avoided the Older ones because I jumped into displaced a little late

5769002 It almost feels like you have the cooperation of other displaced writers...

5769011 Nah, i just read their stories and how they got into equestria, so i can mention them so my readers can read something else aswell without interfeering with the lore too much

Oh hey, two of my stories. Thanks.

Do unoriginal characters with self inserted personalities go in the crossover section?

5769534 Yeah, because why not? I mean, i tried to get as many newcomers to have a reference in my story so whoever reads it can have a look at what else the displaced have to offer. You were the exception because, well, I love your content! soo no problem!

5769554 Erm, i have no clue what you are on about to be honest, because:
1, There is like 7 Don't Starve related stories in the entire FIMFICTION, mine included.
2, Self inert!? oh please don't make me laugh! I don't think you even read chapter one!
3, What crossover folder, what are you even trying to pretend mate?

Also something tells me you are just here to hate just because, dam you, you tainted my no dislikes count!

well that and how empty your account is, seriously brother you look like a bot!

I love the idea that all the displaced HiE characters all got sent to Equestria at the same con.

*does a check list of displaced listed stories from what they saw.* Would it be correct to state 'bingo'?

5772088 I know right? Besides, it makes more sense since there would be reports of people dissapearing at cons, making less people want to go if it happened at different locations and/or on different dates.

5772587 Yes, yes it would

5772778 Thank you, your cooperation is highly apreciated!

Anyways, I hope you three have a fantastic day!

5774004 I did... for the 1 hour that was left of it after your message :trollestia:

5776605 hahahaha well, I'm glad someone else shares my opinion :pinkiehappy:

5777966 We always love to find those people, don't we?

5778055 It makes one feel less alone in the world, and makes for good company for shits and giggles!

5778058 Especially giggles...
Because;
You'll see that they get hurt and just laugh to make them disappear

5778102 Here you can see what the scripting people are fans of :pinkiecrazy:

I think i can really enjoy this story, but i hope for chapters as long as posssible, take your time if you must, but please make some awesome long chapters:heart:
yeah i started to enjoy long chapters, after i had to read some very large chapters, in a certain bleach story here on fimfiction.

Yep great as it can get. Only it's in need of more spiders! :pinkiecrazy:

*tack* *tack* *tack* *tack*

i guess he is hitting something, but what exactly is he doing everytime?
I mean while he was in the Spider web, in front of the turkey, what was he doing in "

*tack* *tack* *tack* *tack*

" that moment?

I can only image what he was doing.

till now this is a good story, i hope you make the meeting with the main six somehow interessting, in know he is probably no special Human, but if he is still able to do something, that would be rather interessting, i mean a weak character that is able to do awesome things, this is always a bit better.

The second thing is, am i missing something or did he really died once already?

5778801 I'm glad you are liking it so far!

5780425 And I shall deliver! just, gimme time!

5780556 Well, he can't just grow a beard in two days! that's insane! you must wait 3 not 2, silly billy!

5781264 I really want to, believe me I DO! but, well, my time is limited and I usually can't work on this story until the very weekend, too busy during work days.

5781257 The *thack* is the sound the spider made when it was crawling through the webbed floor, meanwhile the *tack* is his footsteps while running in this case, i really don't know what words to use to recreate the sound, any suggestions you can give?

5781264 Well, the world that he is in is taking the advantages and disadvantages of the world in the game Don't Starve, which can make the player very powerful if he has the resources to do so. The best example of this is the Life Giving Amulet, for it can heal the player from his wounds at the expense of hunger, and can bring him back to life if the player dies. (already stated in chapter one)

And no, he didn't die, if he did, the Amulet would have been used and it would have shattered.

5782007 Can't really do much about that now can i? Its an awesome game after all.

5781782

The *thack* is the sound the spider made when it was crawling through the webbed floor, meanwhile the *tack* is his footsteps while running in this case, i really don't know what words to use to recreate the sound, any suggestions you can give?

i know it is nice that you try to take the sound of the game for that, but honestly i think you could just write he was running or anything like that.
But i guess there are situations, where this works a bit better.

The best example of this is the Life Giving Amulet, for it can heal the player from his wounds at the expense of hunger, and can bring him back to life if the player dies. (already stated in chapter one)

well yes, i know that thing with the amulet, i guess there was something that made me believe, that he died, probably the grave. there was a grave right?

5784995 Well, ill try and see where what works better, might take me some time you know? but thanks for telling me, it really helps to have supportive readers!

And regarding the graves, well, here is a link but let me explain anyway. The game world features graves, which have items that can be useful for the player when they are dug. When the player examines the graves it will be either "Here lies some guy. Blah blah blah.", "This headstone is blank", "It says: 'Milk. Eggs. Bacon.'" and "Hey that's my name!" In the normal world.

So, when Robert found the one with his name on it, well, you can imagine why its freaky. :pinkiecrazy:

5786182

And regarding the graves, well, here is a link but let me explain anyway. The game world features graves, which have items that can be useful for the player when they are dug. When the player examines the graves it will be either "Here lies some guy. Blah blah blah.", "This headstone is blank", "It says: 'Milk. Eggs. Bacon.'" and "Hey that's my name!" In the normal world.

So, when Robert found the one with his name on it, well, you can imagine why its freaky

thank you, i just know a little bit about the game, i never had it, but i watched it on youtube a bit.

Is the guy who got sucked in with him a character or is it an open spot for another displacement fic?

5803808 OH MY GOD I READ YOUR COMMENT 3 DAYS LATE I'M SO SORRY FUCK FUCK.

Well, boy am I glad SOMEONE cares about the other guy. Poor fucker got sucked in with Robert and nobody gives a flying fuck.

And if you want to find out more about, him, PM me.

We see he is scared but adapting to the environment, instinctual responses are rather intriguing.

5820554 What do you mean

instinctual responses are rather intriguing.

Is that good or bad?

5820569 Fear of the unknown and the dark HAS both helped save thou human, also hindered due to solitary standing.

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