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Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie. Loyalty and laughter. Two ponies painted in two different coloures, that no one would ever try to combined. Yet they have somehow ended up combinded. Rainbow Dash know how it came to be, that they were combinded. Pinkie don't. One night when Pinkie question thier friendship, Rainbow Dash decide to share the story.
Written for the EFNW pre-con writing contest 2015
Cover art not by me. If anyone knows who the artist is please contact me!
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5744381 it was AWESOME
5744387thanks! :)
5744392 no problem
5744394
:)
5744400
Yeah, good luck on that contest, buddy.
CATCHING
THE
RAINBOW
ORIGINAL MOTION PICTURE SOUNDTRACK RECORDING
1. OUR STORY OF LOVE
Performed by Pinkie Pie
(P) 1974 Sony Music of Equestria, Ltd.
Courtesy of Columbia Records, by arrangement with Sony Music Licensing
2. HAVIN' A PARTY
Written and Performed by Sam Cooke
Recorded prior to 1972. All Rights Reserved by RCA Records, a Unit of Sony Music Entertainment.
Courtesy of RCA Records, a Unit of Sony Music Entertainment, by arrangement with Sony Music Licensing
3. LEAVING COLOURS
Performed by Feather PonyArtist
(P) 2012 Feather PonyArtist
4. TUTTI FRUTTI
Written and Performed by Little Richard Penniman
Courtesy of Specialty Records/Fantasy Records, Inc., under license from Concord Music Group
5. GIGGLES & GUMDROPS
Performed by 4EverFreeBrony
(P) 2014 4EverFreeBrony
6. LAUGHTER
Performed by 4EverFreeBrony
(P) 2014 4EverFreeBrony
7. LOOK BENEATH YOURSELF (And You Will Find It)
Performed by Sunset Shimmer
(P) 1979 Sunset Shimmer
Courtesy of The Sunset Shimmer Company
8. LEAD ME ON
Performed by Maxine Nightingale
(P) 1979 EMI Records, Ltd.
Courtesy of Capitol Records, under license from Universal Music Enterprises.
9. THE GLORY OF LOVE
Performed by The Five Keys
Courtesy of Capitol Records, under license from Universal Music Enterprises.
10. OUR STORY OF LOVE (Reprise)
Performed by Pinkie Pie
(P) 1974 Sony Music of Equestria, Ltd.
Courtesy of Columbia Records, by arrangement with Sony Music Licensing
Album compiled and produced by Jesse Coffey.
(P)(C) 2015 Keam-Moon Corporation, Stockholm, Sweden. All rights reserved.
Recording distributed in USA by Jesse Coffey Productions, Tucson, AZ 85719.
WARNING! Copyright subsists in all recordings made by the companies listed above. Any unauthorised broadcasting, public performance, copying or re-recording of such recordings constitutes copyright infringement and renders the infringer liable to an action at law.
5744906
-_-
Okay. I'll fix it. Anyhow, you liked it or not?
5745079
You liked it? People do not seem to like this, yet they do. I feel this was a failure now...so m7ch work for nothing...
This story was great!!!
I can totally see this fitting in with the show! 
That is what makes it so good!
And the fact it wasn't a romance thing between those 2. I really hate gay....
5745528
Thanks for the comment. The promt was about building new friendships, and I decided to based off the cover art take a different view at this one...
5745542 Hey well you did awesome with it!!!
5745547
:D
Nice!
5745278
I didn't even read it. If the author doesn't care enough to spell check the title, why should I care? If you give this thing a proofreading then I suppose I'll have a look, but not until it seems like you have more interest in the story succeeding. The fact that it's eight hours after you said you'd fix it and the spelling error still remains in the title, my hopes aren't too high.
5747219
Hey, first off, I haven't even found the mentioned error, secondly, that is not the standard of the story
!
5745636
Thanks! :)
5747703 It's alright. Just change Cathing to Catching.
5747815 okay. Still, the story is not like this in hole.
5747820 I believe you. And don't worry, you'll find someone who can proofread for you. And if I ever have the time, I could do it.
5748298
Yeah. Also I fixed it.
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:D
5749495 Just asking maybe you could check out my story it is only on the first chapter though. :P And I doubt it is as good as this!!!
5749510
Sure, or at least when I have time...
5749520 lol thx I know what you mean!
5749531
Yeah...
Okay. So, this story was good. Had a good idea. But, it had several noticeable errors. I still liked it though, I might even favorite it
5749886
Thank you! You said there where errors. Could you help me locate and fix them maybe?
5751686 I can try, but i ain't got this site figure out yet so I can't like actually show you. I Can tell you what they are in each chapter... Tomorrow :derpytongue2 I'm hella tired and I got work in a few hours, but I'd love to help out anyway I can
5751780
That's what I meant...poor English from my side, sorry! :P
And I can wait...
If I could mention a point of criticism.
I almost brought this point up back in Chapter 1 when it mentions that the pink filly's life was surely changed, or something along those lines, but I didn't think it would come up again. However, here it is again, so I'll talk about it.
It seems odd to me that Rainbow Dash would have known how she changed Pinkie's life. She was flying at breakneck speeds over a rock farm and could just make out a pink filly. The two never exchanged any words. On her return trip to Cloudsdale, Rainbow Dash stopped by the rock farm out of curiosity and spied on the party that Pinkie threw. Nobody in the Pie family saw the eavesdropper.
It really doesn't make any sense why RD would know the impact she had on Pinkie's life. The two never talked, and there was no way for her to draw that conclusion from observing in secret since she only observed for a few minutes. Now for this chapter. Recognizing her as the filly from years ago, sure. No problem there. Knowing she created that filly's happiness? That's kind of a stretch.
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Well, I...I don't really know, actually. I guess it's something in the heart orr something
Despite my point of criticism in Chapter 2, I actually really enjoyed this. I found the decision to make the interludes individual chapters instead of combining them with the following chapters to be curious, but the story itself was actually quite intriguing. The "knowing she created happiness" thing is something that would just take a little revision to fix, and it wouldn't require any major changes to the story as a whole. So by writing good characters and giving Rainbow Dash a strong drive, you did a great job doing what you set out to do: Establish the reasoning behind their strong friendship. Have a like and a fav.
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Thank you very much. I will think over the thing you pointed out and I'm glad you still enjoyed the story.
So sweet! I
it!!
6075055
Thank you!
6076755 NO PROB!
Okay first off, I'd really recommend fixing up your story summary. The grammar is terrible in it, and I couldn't really understand what the story was even supposed to be about when reading it.
The summary is incredibly important as it's the main thing people look at to decide whether they want to read the story or not.
I also don't see why the prologue and epilogue have only speaking. That's not a good idea.
*combined.
You need editors. Bad.
6112359 I agree with you until the end.
And then I say not necessarily.
7171101 it's very olkd piece, it would be better if I'd written it now
7171116 >olkd
riiiight
7171138 Yes, I've eritten a lot of stories since! And it was one of my worse stories