This story is a sequel to Slipping through my hooves: The Apple and the Blossom
She's slipping away from me...my sweet little Sweetie is at last leaving me, for now she has her mark, and is free from all that was. Free from me. But I don't want her to leave...I still need her...my dear little Sweetie...
OBS: This do not require reading the prequel at all.
I think you mean crowd not cod.
5878386
Yeah,sorry. Did you like the story?
u wot m8?
5878636 Mhm.. I liked Apple bloom's better tho.
5878861
What the hell? Where is all these typos coming from?!
Chapter one, 1,108 words.
Total: 1,172.
...
Sure FiMfiction.
Sure.
(I will try to read the story tomorrow. :D)
5883885
XD
(Thanks)
5884774 Wonderful.
Kill someone off and it will be super awesome.
xDDDDD
Jk it was a nice read :3
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Gret you enjoyed it. Now you just have to wait for the 3 story! :3
5879576 I think the reason Apple's was better is because this story is very similar.
It's sort of like eating a bowl of Ice cream.
Then eating it again.
It's wonderful at first,
Then it's like, 'Yeah, I guess it tastes alright.'
Both stories are wonderful, but redundancy is the only issue.
5885631 I guess so. I had a hard time understanding this one, although it was late.
5886391 Late?
5886428 at night.
5889593 Makes sense.
I read both. They read more like a poem than a story, and the characters aren't acting anything like themselves.
5900830
So you don't like it then?
5900831 Sorry
5900832 it's ok. It's your opinion, and I respect it
5900831 Don't let my criticisms discourage you. Keep writing, lots of others seem to like them and you'll only get better with time.
5900835
Yeah
Beautiful... I could see Rarity reacting this way.
7547523 yep, have you read the first story?
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Not yet, I came across this when looking up Rarity pictures
7547559 haha alright