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It finally happened. The day she'd been waiting for so long finally came, but I couldn't be happy for her. Everypony expects me to be happy for Apple Bloom, for she finally found her destiny. Only I seem to see what it really means. It means that she's slipping away from me, slipping through my hooves one final time before abandoning us forever.

This story now has a sequel called Slipping through my hooves: The Diamond and the Belle
Cover art: Original episode screenshot edited by me

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Comments ( 40 )

I cri evrytiem.

5872813
Are you say this is good, but my grammar suck?

5872851 No, actually your grammar was fantastic. A few times you said 'weren't' when you should have said 'wasn't', but other than that the story was great.

It was sad is what I was saying.
I had fun reading it aloud to my friend in the most annoying Apple Bloom voice, everyone stared at me xD
My friend right now is staring at me and making fun of xD
He's a little xD
That's an inside joke.
Not literally.
Anyway.

EDIT: Maybe a friend

5872859 Wow, thanks. that's good.

Glad you liked it! :yay: Do you know the music references?

5872874 ABBA. Original idea was inspired by a song named 'slipping through my fingers', and other songs featured is 'Our last summer', 'the winner takes it all' and 'One of us' and perhaps any I forgot

5872906
yeah. being swedish it is nothign weird loving ABBA

5872912 ABBA?
Sounds Muslim

5872923 It's extremly Swedish! :P And sweden is christan...or well, we got people of all religiouns, but when they were active it was mostly christane, and it's still our state relligioun.

5872937 Thank oyu

"Where did those happy days go? they seem so hard to find now. I've tried to reach for you, but you'd always close your mind...what ever happened to your love for me? I wish I understood. It used to be so nice, it used to be so good..."

SO WHEN YOU NEED ME DARLING CANT YOU HEAR ME! SOS!!

Also I really liked the story! I should expect no less from a fellow contest entry...est...er...how do you say...participant! Yes! You deserve a ticket to my hall of approval!!

5872947
THE LOVE YOU GAVE ME, NOTHING ELSE CAN SAVE ME S.O.S

Also, thanks! :)

5872950 sorry, I usually slip with my fingure so it get like that


5872957 =3

The elder gods above may throw the dice

Their minds as cold as the lakes winter ice

And somepony way down here, way below the banished two

Loses somepony dear, nothing to do

The blessed one takes it all

The unlucky pony has to fall

It's simple and it's plain

Why or how could we complain?

Was I the only one who sung that to the tune of "Vida la Viva" in my head as I read it?


Just me?


Okay.

5873739 yes, that was a modification of a pice of text from the song 'The winner takes it all' by ABBA

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Dear readers of this story, there is now A sequel to this story. I'd very much appreciate, and I think you will too, if you'd go read it

5878257 will do. Will you read Fly Away, Sweet Scootaloo and thumbs up please?!? Thank u

I was wondering if these were ABBA references.

I've got a Momma Mia based story starring Dinky Doo that I should consider finishing...

5878417 I'll read it, and thumb up if I like it!

5878480
It is. So much. But what can I say? I'm one hell of a Swedish bastard

5890472
Glad you liked it

Tears then a smile.

PresentPerfect
Author Interviewer

What's with the ABBA lyrics? c.c You're not supposed to include song lyrics in stories anymore.

7220492 I'm Swedish. ABBA is life. I will never not includ them

Besdies it's not that new of a story

PresentPerfect
Author Interviewer

7220682
From what I recall of the rule, there's no grandfathering. <.< Be careful.

7220733 :rainbowlaugh: fine. And technically they ate not clear song lyrics it's not permitted. All is modified.

Ow ow ow, my feels
Does this mean Rainbow and Scoots are next by the way?

7547580 Well, they were, but unfortunately I don’t wrote My little Pony fiction anymore so the two last parts in the series were never finished. Especially as they were made none canonical by the show

7547644
oh... how sad to see an artist give up her craft. Ok then, well it was fun

7547748 give up? I simply koved on to write an abundance of Steven Universe and Hunger Games fixtion instead. But I do agree withyou when I say there are stories and series, this one included, that I would have liked to finish

7547854 oh, sorry, lol. I took it out of context but I still understand. What kind of Steven Universe stories you make? If you have any sweet sad one, I am interested.

7547933 I have a lot of Sweet sad ones, mostly bout Pearl and maybe garnet. My fanfiction.net name is Pearlislove so go check my profile and see if you find any stories you like.

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