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I'd never abandon... oh dear, it's been almost a month hasn't it.
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It's fine. I'd live a lot better life if I didn't like sweet things so much.
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How about you try to pause to think in appropriate punctuation when you're in the middle of beating it off!
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It's M. Night Shyamalan.
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Be careful when you trust the author's notes. I hear this author is a real stinker!
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I wonder if making Sweetie happy is really all that good an idea...
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It's true that a lot of ponies seem to have flowers and apples on their butt, and both those are a kind of womb...
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I'll type more better when I'm good and ready to!
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I've never actually seen the UFC. They're naked while wrestling? Wow, I thought they stopped doing that back in Rome in 0 BC.
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The other Sweetie slapped the mute button off when she was flailing around.
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In the episode "Somepony to Watch Over Me" in season 4. Sweetie Belle pretended to sleep, while Scootaloo hid in the closet.
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Carl Maria von Weber!
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Well it wasn't exactly mirroring reality. But yeah I know the feeling too.
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Gilbert Gottfried!
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Night M. M. Shyamalan
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She doesn't really think Rarity is worst pony, not even in the show.
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I try to avoid Google. My up to date 1913 dictionary says it's an agreement to meet in a certain place. But really I haven't heard the word used before in a solely sexual context...
I imagine a hoof sounds different on different surfaces, and it's hard to describe hoof on linoleum, but I imagined it as more of a clip-clip than a clip-clop.
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Oh no I trademarked! I'm so ashamed!
She's saying she is walking, even though technically it is still in question whether you can call that walking.
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Forehead cushons are available at the door.
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Thanks so much! I may have been a bit sidetracked from writing, mostly due to fiddling around with ideas of what to do after Boy Stuff dies an ignominious death. But I do my best to bring joy to the hearts of each and every one of you! And also crushing ennui, but mostly joy.
At this point, this is pretty much the best thing to do. If he didn't masturbate, he might have had a case going, but now he pretty much just touched a little girl to orgasm. So, her keeping quiet seems to be his only option for his safety in the future.
All in all, his reactions in this chapter were pretty good. I do like how Rarity gave her advice without getting too flustered like most people would.
For this story's sake, I'll go with the CMC being 8 y/o because that would explain their complete ignorance of sex. But in the show, the CMC have been calculated out to be more like 12 y/o. At that age, kids know much more about sex.
I read the chapter title and had to do a few things before sitting down and reading it, and my assumption was Dinky Belle would talk to Sweetie in his dream and my guess was somewhat correct! that's how you know a story has you right where it wants you and is telling what might happen in the future well, we really need to find out the mind rapist's buddy's name.... as always this chapter was amazing and my excitement and love of this story and next chapter knows no bounds! On a side note I had to write this 3 times because for some reason the page would close or revert back to the homepage
So Rarity is in heat? That does explain things.
Oh the story is taking way more form now, cant wait for next chapter
Something tells me the true Sweetie Belle can't be heard by others. Rarity noticed only because fake Sweetie Belle flinched because of the volume of the real ones exclamation/scream/question.
Cute picture at the end by the way
Yeah, you're pretty screwed up
Ah'm speechless.
All of My Nyeeeesss~
Number of Facepalms in this chapter alone:
4
Double: 6
Ultra Facepalm: 1
There are very real rational reasons why rape is considered taboo, outside of just preconditioning from cultural norms. Just as incest has real reasons for being taboo aside from culture. This is different from say, homosexual marriage, which is opposed entirely from a cultural standpoint.
I feel like being Cpt. Obvious, so why is rape rationally bad:
(1) Pregnancy from an unwanted/absent partner, leading to unwanted/unfit offspring.
(2) Pregnancy and offspring is a big risk, exacting large physiological and emotional burdens on the female which can get her killed in pre-modern times.
(3) The act of rape itself is dangerous to the female, and not just an assault on her pride. Imagine dancing with someone, except your partner is not someone you know and trust, but rather a stranger who is very pissed off about something, and you're the closest person he can lash out at.
The above caused humans to universally consider rape a form of aggression/assault/harm. Even social animals consider it the same way.
It occurs to me that the duplicating pool in Too Many Pinkies might be one answer to "where do we get an extra body?". If he has seen season 3, he should remember this.
*facehoof*
I loved it.
and apparently so did sweetie~
The best part:
6281052 I drink way too much soda. Like ridicoulus amounts of soda. Very unhealthy amounts of soda. Yet I have met people that drink several multiples of what I drink, and they where somehow still fine.
DINKY! you live! man you scared me for a while, hope you been great, love the chapter!
Wait, I can't continue? I could have sworn I picked out a completed story... for once...
So disappointed/dismayed Belle comes in next chapter, that's gonna suck.
So while I was meandering about the site, I noticed the cover art for this fic again between chapters and picked up on something that completely eluded me before.
Yes, it's Sweetie Belle looking over her muzzle at Rarity and Twilight with her mane blocking some of her vision, but the reason it's discolored is because the protagonist is viewing Equestria through rose-tinted glasses, as it were. An idiom meaning one who sees only the pleasant parts of something, representing the idealization of Equestria.
I must say, it strikes me as clever, given the views of the protagonist.
So when does Sweetie's soul get crammed back in the body and his soul ripped out like a blood eating parasite from a dog?
6281052 your q very very bad person. Lol, I'm trying to read this pg or pg 13, after all I'm not interested in any of that lol
Wow. This is...this is pretty fucked up. I normally love these kind of human becomes pony stories but all these perverted scenes are just so freaking uncomfortable to read. Not to mention he just corrupted Sweetie Belles innocence. I tried to enjoy this. I really did. But it's just so damn weird that I can't ignore how messed up this is.
I still say it seems like small or maybe medium portions of this story are missing...
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The point of this fic, I think, is looking into the workings of a disturbed mind. The author himself knows this.
Yes, it's messed up. But that's part of the art. If you can't appreciate this fic for that, then you also can't watch movies like Taxi Driver.
soothe
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“Not Another Teen Movie” is a movie that fits this story rather well, I think.
Pwhaha Ha Ha
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Is she humming the “if you just believe” melody because that’s the only one that I can think of that was a slow song but I’m not sure how you would hum the melody?