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I like the direction you've been taking these last few chapters.
The first chapters bored me, I admit, but lastly, the pace picked up and I'm finding it far more entertaining to read. And the attempt at (over) analysing the situation is promising.
Huh. His lack of memory of where he came from is a bit odd at this point or at least his lack of curiosity is. Still well written though and I am curious as to where it is going.
I'm not the only one thinking that this actually is sweetie belle, right? It's looking like the other sweetie belle was more of an imaginary friend sort of thing, and actual sweetie belle just got confused by the artifact
This is not Sweetie. This is a sad sack of cuteness.
Hm, maybe this is actually Sweetie Belle... WHO JUST THINKS SHE WAS A HUMAN?
Maybe that ancient machine merely beamed memories of a long dead human into Sweetie Belle's brain, therefore causing her to believe she was a human (Obviously this human is much older - Many more memories = Longer life than Sweetie, therefore gets control?).
Has Sweetie told her parents her magic was unlocked yet? They seemed skeptical of her magical ability a chapter ago; And she better be a good cook now! Gotta make that toast all crispy and golden brown.
The whole "I have crippling brain damage" thing is a great way to get character development, though I really hope things work out for sweetie guy or Bell or both
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Also, this chapter a little slow passed but good as always. And that is what I like your story for. Very descriptive and interesting. :P
accoutrements, dear
Don't get too attached.
Dad, usually (unless it's used as relation rather than name like "my dad"); also Mom. (The toast was made by Mom, or the toast was made by my mom)
I realise my error on my previous comment now, stupid mistake. Oh well.
This adorableness is going to be the end of me though, you really are giving it to us in high doses.
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I'm doing my best to keep things moving! But I want to emphasize this is not a story that places a lot of priority on movement. Metaphorically speaking, that is.
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When did it say that she couldn't remember her old world? I certainly don't remember writing that part...
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Yes! No! Maybe? Speculate away!
Should be more on that subject, in about... 3 chapters or so.
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Okay... so...
"Oh Sweetie Belle, you have so grown and blossomed. I'm so proud of you!"
"ER WENT BOOM BOOM MOMMUR"
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Thanks! I've been thinking about moving faster, but I really am putting description at a higher priority than action here. I just hope I'll be able to write all the cool stuff I've thought up for the future.
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Thank you! My French is about as good as Apple Bloom's, I apologize.
Or what, impermanence will become impermanent?
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It's okay, errors are the spice of life! And you cen rest easy, because I promise, there will be no juice boxes in her near future.
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Someone here actually did a blog post on incest. A source that this person read from noted that from a study focusing on babies born of incest, the percentage of babies born with defects was actually smaller than what they found of babies born from mothers who drank/smoked during their pregnancy, and even those numbers were really small.
Also... I just want to say that I would like to see a fic from you that has a good balance of sex and plot. I know that this fic has almost nothing to do with sex, but there has been just a smidgen of it. By comparison, your other fics have sex in them every chapter or two.
I don't know... Just makes me want something kind of in the middle.
Why do I get the feeling that all that needs to be done to get Sweetie Ghost back is to 'recharge' her with another bought of clopping?
Hmm ... she was there after the night dirty deed and it was continued for a bit but now that it has stopped for a bit she has disappeared. Hmm ...
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As I understand it, genes can be dominant and recessive, and come in pairs for redundant safety. Only if both genes in a pair are recessive, do you see the recessive trait. That's why two people with blonde hair will never have a child with brown, because they both have only the recessive genes for brown hair. But the chance of two parents having both recessive genes from two different gene pairs is very unlikely, unless there's a reason for the parents to both have similar genomes. Even if the combination of these gene pairs being recessive causes a horrible disease, there's no pressure to kill off those afflicted by it, since it's just so unlikely to occur. It's a gross simplification to say that incest = retard babies, which is hilarious, but the truth of the matter seems to be that a large amount of inbreeding over many generations causes these recessive combos to show up, some of which like hemophilia aren't nearly fatal enough. It's mostly a concern for families who practice inbreeding systemically, either royal ones, or religious.
Well, I have something in the works... but you don't want to see it. Even I find myself cringing at this thing. Oh Diamond, how can you keep doing this to yourself...
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canon!
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Because you've read literally anything else I've ever written?
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I'm sure she'll figure out what's going on any minute now. Aaaaany minute...
I've been meaning to ask about that since I saw equestrian writing that one time on the show, it looks legible to me... then again I'm a vis media graduate. And, I see cosmetic changes without the filter of anxiety... Although I am bothered by organization changes that come out of left field because I find it unnecessary, irritating, and annoying.
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I assume this is the standard font of Equestrian writing, which would make it quite reasonable that it would be difficult to read. Every letter is just a vaguely similar squiggle, and every word is backwards.
Our protagonist should just masturbate again. I mean it made Sweetie talk afterwards, so it is a possibility, right? Maybe if he masturbates five times in a row Sweetie could even go as far as to take control of her body again!
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It’s not the masturbation, it’s the orgasm
Awwww I was hoping she would scream Rarity!! I liked that line!
Did Twilight never write the princess to inform her of the incident? What’s taking her so long to get back?
Where’s Pinkie Pie and Spike? Wasn’t Fluttershy supposed to foalsit Sweetie at some point?