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Dramatic chapter, yo.
Things are happening.
LE THERAPY ARC IS BE OVER
LET MERGE ARC BEGIN
TOOT TOOT HAIYP TRAIN
But seriously, good chapter.
It does give off the idea that it's being written in arcs.
Say, the therapy/walk arc, where Sweetie "Felle" (sick puns, yo) learns to walk
and now the merge arc, Where Sweetie "Felle" is becoming one with the original Sweetie Belle, while trying to figure out where Sweetie Belle went all while dealing with getting set up with her parents.
That's the impression I'm getting.
More! More! So glad you're still writing this.
Quite an emotional chapter. Great character writing, and an accurate depiction of having a panic attack. Can't wait to see what's become of real Sweetie. Is she slipping into the void, merging into the human's consciousness, or just inaudible until recharging via orgasm?
I feel horrible for Rarity. I really hope Sweetie stealthily climbs into that bed and refuses to go home until after spending more time with Rarity to comfort her whenever she wakes up. Obviously any good parents would have been angry in that situation, but it really wasn't Rarity's fault, and I desperately want to hug her and tell her through the medium of human-sweetie.
And I completely agree about the joy of cats as cuddle buddies.
This is such an awesome chapter! I'm really wondering what has happened with Sweetie Belle, is she supressed because of the panic that sets in? Or is she starting to merge with the other consciousness controlling her body?
It's really sad that not-Sweetie is going to move out, I have hopes that Fakey Belle will be stubborn and stick to Rarity until the parents admit to her demands. After all, there's the reason that her therapy in Ponyville is still ongoing, and as for now, it's the most favorable location to be for an amnesiac because she has some memories of there. Being thrown in an unknown environment without any memories and without anyone you can really remember or relate to, can be even more stressful than it already was.
Seeing Rarity so stressed and hurt though, really tugs on my heartstrings and gets me some angry thoughts about the parents..
I'm really excited for the next chapter though, don't you die on us now!
thanks for the update!!
Cool, anew chapter, thanks.
No! Rarity! ;A; I'm going to miss you...
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I would tend to agree, but the protagonist is sort of assuming the worst here, and harping on herself a lot.
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Arcs, weeks, same thing, right?
Goddamnit Carlos...
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Yeah, too bad my cat is allergic to me...
I suppose it was a bit short of a psychotic break. Thank goodness for fainting!
Not a bad idea... unfortunately Sweetie is anything but stealthy right now, and Rarity has a professionally trained attack cat guarding her.
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That... but they... ugh.
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No problem! Okay maybe some problem, but I'll try to have less problem.
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Always happy to help!
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I don't really know what to say...
So...She needs another orgasm to get Sweetie back? Got to say that would be an interesting requirement to keep Sweetie around.
bona fide
crèche
broken tag there
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For better or worse, I can't really load Youtube videos from here. Have to give them your IP and all.
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What? Oh no, I would neeeever do that. What do you take me for, some kind of pervert?
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Thank you very much! It might take me a while to make the corrections, depending on my connection to here, but I will definitely do so.
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Oh I was joking. Setokaiva actually helped me with corrections a lot actually, before disappearing right after that scene where the filly had an orgasm. And I appreciate every one, even if I don't always choose to make them.
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"fwuck" is the word for when you want to say fuck but you're so surprised that you inhale while doing so.
She's sure scatterbrained when she's trying to walk and talk!
I was wondering if someone would get that!
Technically acerbated has the same definition, but yes exacerbated is more commonly used...
Take a look at Ponyville when Twilight first approaches it in S01E01. It's rarely visible other than that particular view of the town, other than one brief view at the end of The Cutie Pox.
Bravo, sir! (or would that be brava?)
No, the protagonist just has strong feelings about the G1 rainbows, and season 4's Rainbow Power.
She said she couldn't be happier, not that she was happy!
No, I'm pretty sure "sooth" is the word I was looking for.
Brava.
and yes I take you for a7137883
Like breathe is a verb, and breath is a noun, teethe is a verb, teeth is a (plural) noun, sheathe is a verb, sheath is a noun...loath is an adjective, loathe is a verb…even if not all related to each other.
I hope Sweetie Belle is alright. I also hope Rarity is alright.
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I'm pretty sure sooth was originally at least an adverb. But Chaucer is kind of inconsistent about that, so I dunno exactly. "The sentence of it sooth is, out of doubt." using sooth like "truly". I probably should have worded it as "sooth to me" though, yes that works.
Yeah... My thoughts ain't too kind towards Rarity and Sweetie's parents. What was Rarity to do, keep Sweetie Belle locked inside Carousel Boutique while they go off on another one of their vacations? Hate to be the bearer of ill tidings, but the Crusaders would have gone to the Badlands had it been them watching over Sweetie Belle, and not Rarity.
Oh come on when is she going to tell someone!!