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The triceps are the muscles that straighten the elbow. Biceps bend it. Pectorals extend the arm toward the front of the body. So, to accomplish a pushup, you need your triceps and pecs to work in conjunction. As well as some minor input from a few other muscles, for stability's sake.
*Turns into George Takei* OHHHH MYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!
OMG AN UPDATE!!! AHAHAHAHAHAHGAHH!!!
*takes out popcorn and reads*
Dawwww. *hugs back*
Religion is a strong subject. I generally feel it is best left out of a story. It tends to invoke knee-jerk reactions. So maligning the Head deity of any religion may well turn off readers.
Otherwise, I'm enjoying the story.
WOOHOO!!! *jumps in joy*
Well, ah'm impressed! The chapter held up, an' you really showed how mature yer was with the mature bits.
An honestly, ah had a lot of fun!!! The chattin, descriptin and attempt at phi-lo-so-phy made me grin hard.
What ah adore is how yer providin' a fresh perspective to the "human in equestria" genre! Be proud!!! You deserve them features, cause yer approach is creative and exciting!
GAH!! Ah can't talk straight, just so happy that yer writing talent is consistent!!!
Time to re-read the chapter!
Ah find this silly.
A cute silly. Haha.
Sweetie could'a solved the dilemma by chattin' about "intent" or "choice," regardin' what constitutes an accident. Instead, she speaks about how recklessness is inherently awesome; therefore, it's not a "crack" or "fault."
Ah dunno. Sweetie's purposefully long and twisty explanation made me smile for some strange reason. Hahahah.
Author's silly make meh smile.
[Human in Equestria genre]: Our glory is RENEWED!
Souljar/Sweetie Belle actually managed to get through to Scootaloo and Apple Bloom... WHILE REMAINING IN CHARACTER. On the FIRST DAY. W00t! Reading this fic is almost as satisfying as eating a Grand Slam breakfast with extra buttermilk pancakes at Denny's. Moar!
So much win in this chapter!!
*squee*
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OMG! YER RIGHT!!!
Sweetie's ridiculously wordy philosophy thingie makes extra sense naow!
Wait. Ah'm confused...
Chapter 2 was released on February 28th!?
Whuuuuuuuut.
Ah could'a sworn that wasn't there. Thought it updated today. *confuzzled*
Fimfiction ain't notifyin' me right or somethin.
5681755 Man, I would write the story but I not only suck at writing in general(everything is always a giant wall of text ) I honestly don't think I have enough patients to keep a steady flow of chapters... it would be like '1 chapter every couple of months' if I was head honcho since im a cronic procrastinator and if I start 1 fic im gonna want to start my displaced one ive been toying with... just need to find out what the humans going to turn into after the merchent dude transports him to Equestria since its currently a toss up between a X parasite/SA-X, hunter Ing, or Dark Samus. It was going to be a Metroid one since I haven't seen any yet so I thought "I like metroid, why not?"... the only question is will I ever get around to it
Remember what I said last chapter? Guess what.
5699749 should been yesterday or so that I noticed it and I dropped to check this more than a couple times.... if its coming in from last month that's some trickery of computer errors.
also that machine... wonder how exactly he got to it, was it meant to transfer a consciousness from another world/reality or was it storing one or more from a past and saved people as world went to a complete doomsday storm starting.
I don't think anyone has ever accused a pony that can't walk right of being OP.
As for the logical explanations... If Sweetie Belle always had the perfect thing to say, and was able to convince the other CMC's of her arguments without problem, then she would be heading towards OP. But as it is, she stutters, occasionally can't think of the right word, and has to work to change other's views.
Potential is growing, I'm liking it and I can hear this is Claire Corlett's voice, cracking and all. And Souljar manages to keep her almost entirely in character aside from being suddenly aware that cutie marks are attached to flanks which are connected to the plot of the story.
I sense genre savvyness inbound.
I'm gonna guess it's the last one.
Better question is whether it translates to:
'AWWWWWWWWWWWWW YEEEEAAAAAAAAAAA!'
or
'NOPE, NOPE, NOPE, SO MUCH NOPE'
I understand his reasoning, but that still makes him a horrible human being.
I have a hypotheses to how he came to be inside Sweetie Belle. The machine that caused this had a complete copy of his mind, up to a certain point in his life, and somehow magic got it to swap with Sweetie Belle's mind... Maybe. It might be from a human experiment later in the protagonist's life to copy his mind into a machine, but he could only copy the beginning of his life. Which is why he doesn't remember doing this. For this to work that would mean Equestria is Earth's future. Or some type of multiverse thing. Or you don't have a reason. I really hope it isn't the third one though...
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SEES MORE SOMETHING!
Can
Not
Wait
For
Next
Chapter!
Time to figure out time travel!
NEW CHAPTER!!
your writing has sertainly improved sinds you started with your first story
You mean lich?
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Lech is a real word but Celly being a murderous lich would be even worse.
Dude.
The detailed genital descriptions do not, I repeat, do NOT add to your story in the least. Lose 'em.
So much purple prose that I developed a headache by the end of chapter one. Chapter two was worse.
Is this the sequel to Sweetie Belle and the Magic Tablet?
Ummm... What?
Wow she's looking good for her age.
Like it so far thank you sir.
When i saw this "Here I am getting all chummy with my– with Sweetie Belle’s best friend, and I’m just a big phony in her place." This is the only thing that came to my mind.
suave motherfucker my ass, the dude is a mess of a human being, the creepy weirdo.
More story! *reads on*
( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
*just want a taste of that, even just for a little bit, before I die and can’t have it ever again. * ... so depressing!
Pinklestia grabs the little unicorn filly and hugs her, then gives her candy
*“Sister, my ass.”* Dude, that's rude!
*My sister back home can go fuck herself.* She must really hate her sister.
Er ... 97 years old? No, he doesn't sound like an old man... the way he speaks... and maturity wise...
And "suave motherfucker"? No no no no... this guy... he ain't that. No no no no... if that's your "suave motherfucker", then... ugh. Unless he improves, then he does not deserve to be called a "suave motherfucker"
I wish I could say this was a self insert, but the protagonist is turning out to be way more of a suave motherfucker than I ever was. I hope it’s not too OP its not op my oc is op two parts demon badass fighter and casts dark magic turns into a antromophic demon swims in lava is op
I don't know, normally I'd actually like this type of fic, but with the constant mention of the question of where the actual Sweetie Belle is I have to admit a slight disgust with how the protagonist is acting. By going the way he's going when the issue comes out in the open he's lost any hope of getting anything but anger, and potentially has left an innocent with a delay in rescue while he has his fun.
Now admittedly, it's quite possible you're doing this type of thing on purpose in some form or fashion (there could be so many reasons for things that are happening after all). If so, then nicely done; otherwise, it's kind of showing the wrong way to go about things. Regardless, I still wish to see where things go with this, so nicely done in total.
Oh sweet Celestia that was awesome!
This was a awesoe and sweet read .read
pardon? Could it be the dastardly Wob Niar!?
--I'll be damned, that is a correct use. Delicious vocabulary!
But those hugs are delicious!
Palomino
This story is now 10x better.
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Huh, the Badlands, you say?
>checks map of Equestria
Sweet Celestia they've travelled! The CMC sure can get themselves into some pretty crazy predicaments. And they are surprisingly good at traveling vast distances in short amounts of time.
So no mention on how to do magic? and detailed genital descriptions? c'mon
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No one deserves a red and black Alicorn OC
How did we get to the desert to the cart? When did they get on it?
Edit 5/31/2019:
lol shots fire'd !
Did Sweetie just give Scootaloo a blank check to do whatever crazy thing she wants as long as she thinks it’s cool?