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I never really liked the "oh they're not really singing that's just the reality filter for TV" theories. So much funner to live in a world where you can engage in spontaneous choreography without even realizing it, and they just have to adapt to living like that as normal.
You can imprison her body but you'll never deperv her mind!
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I'll be happy to send you a private message, if it helps you feel better. But you might disagree when you read about what actually happens.
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You too?! I thought I was the only one!
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Well, I also love different viewpoints than mine, so when somepony wants to shove them in my face, I'll be happy to open my mouth and take every inch they have to offer.
But thanks for telling me I write good! It makes my day to know that half of what's knocking about in my head successfully gave someone else something to enjoy. or complain about
Don't worry, by the end this character will basically be Jesus and everyone will fall over themselves with how beautiful and relatable they are.
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If I enjoyed writing it half as much as you enjoyed reading it, I think I would never stop writing long enough to post anything. <3
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On the contrary, there was a very important, profound and plot relevant development happened in that last chapter of Call to Adventure. For the first time, the protagonist found herself able to smile.
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Yeah it is simple. No idea why I keep doing that.
The main reason this is going into my 'Read Later' folder is because all your chapters are based off of stages of the hero's journey. This should be good...
You've got an interesting protracted dealing with transformation story going... But I wonder if you are aware that ponies can stand minutes after birth and walk souly on instinct. Is the solution to him walking simply sopping trying to and just letting himself do it?
I keep waiting for that screeching halt of a conflict to hit GOD DAMMIT SUSPENSE YA KILLIN ME!
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It seemed like a better idea before Ordinary Life blew up into a 200,000 character chapter. I am so terrible at reaching satisfying conclusions.
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Because brain damage. The doctor speculated Sweetie's self perception got stuck sideways. The whole "feeling like standing up straight while crawling down on all fours" thing. Also because the protagonist isn't an infant horse. Also because ponies aren't like our ponies. Most horses don't have to deal with spooky zero point energy gripping techniques. Also because everyone already writes human ponies walking right away, and I'm a contrary little shit about stuff like that.
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Hey come on, Bruce is awesome!
I will strive my hardest not to lose confidence in my own ability to write a colt/man getting dragged into a Willy Wonkaesque toy store, then suddenly write a bunch of metaphysical shenanigans in which his memory gets rewritten, twice, and also a time loop, and Nightmare Moon I think, then cancel the story in a fit of pique.
Other than that, I can't promise my story won't resemble Minalkra's. They are a pretty awesome author to be compared to, when they want to be. <3
Besides, that last chapter of Call to Adventure had some very important and dramatic plot progression. After having been unable to for so long, for the first time the protagonist found herself genuinely smiling.
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I'm just worried my idea of a happy ending won't be anyone else's idea of a happy ending.
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"for obvious reasons" was a joke. I find it hard to resist making fun of the English language sometimes (for obvious reasons). Besides, it was just some nobody background character that bears no relevance to the plot whatsoever, so why bother correcting it?
It's an ad populum fallacy to assume someone's claim is baseless, because a majority of people claim it to be. But yes, strangely enough, the protagonist feels no urge to present hard evidence and sound reasoning to her own internal monologue.
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So do lightning rods, but you don't see me going around and strapping those to children's heads, do you?
You do? Curses, they've spotted me! Away, children! Away! *flees*
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Funny thing about the moral event horizon is many who cross it continue to deny they have until their dying breath. But yeah the protagonist will get a wakeup call uh... eventually.
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Ah, commas, my old nemesis. I will try to, without reducing the quality of my writing, whose quality is debatable at best, unless you compare it to your average fimfiction author, not that I would criticise them for almost writing in complete sentences, even if they're really really bad at it, use them less.
No promises about the pedophilic self-insert though.
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Lots of people would die to save a child. That doesn't make the ones who wouldn't bad people though, or the ones that would any better for that matter.
...There is no sexual humor in this story.....
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People tell me that it's always bad to attack someone just for liking things I don't like, except pedo which is an exception for some reason. You're pretty much a pedo if you enjoy writing about any combination of children and sexuality, but being a pedo isn't actually all that bad. People point at the dag nasty evil pedos, and say all pedos are like that, but really they're just trying to attack people who like things they don't like. So instead of saying "They describe little girl pussy in loving detail but they're not a pedo because um, reasons," just say "They're a fun pedo, who writes cute things that I enjoy reading."
A murderer has to actually kill someone, but to be a pedo, you only have to like something, even if you never so much as breathed upon a living breathing child.
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No, no this story is clearly about the sexual escapades of foals raping a body snatcher.
It always mystifies me how people think you can't fixate on sexual things without being forced to by your hormones. What arousal? The blushing? I'm pretty sure little girls can blush!
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My favorite kind of introspection is seeing yourself doing the wrong thing, and it was all in your head the whole time. I... I have a confession to make. I actually liked the cartoon Doug...
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Tell you what, transport me to Equestria to wake up with a tether ball impaled on my horn, and I'll email you regular updates of my day to day life.
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I'm pretty sure you'll see it coming a mile away.
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Thanks so much! I really appreciate your support. Let's see if I can write some more to make you happy again. <3
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You too!
BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!-!!!
Like always... u 2 gud.
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You deserve so much praise!!!
6112066 Question: if *random dude* is in sweetie belle's body... then where's sweetie belle?
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6112227 seriously you are doing an awesome job. you're doing what every artist strives for "making people feel" and well.... i can't say i would not do the same thing in the characters situation. though i would have told twilight by now, Or another more responsible (that's iffy) princess.
so keep writing man
6080955 Yeah, the main character doesn't know what he is talking about half of the time. I would rather wear a helmet and not need it, then not have one and crack my skull open.
6112227 I see... yes.
I read the shiting part while I did the same XD
The shitting part was... uncomfortable. It was necessary, and really well written, but it still was gross. I guess you wrote it perfectly then, because if it was hot I would have questioned my sanity.
6112227 Would if I could :P
Just an idea but
Twilight later discovers the machine is used to place false memories.
Think about it. If he heard it would create so much drama such as 'Am I real'
You really are a master of suspense, It's impossible not to "CRAVEEEE" a new chapter.
...what's a 'blub', and what does it have to do with bulbs?
Yeah, that was possibly the worst place this chapter (for understandability, anyway) to make a typo.
I hate to be That Guy™, but: The bowels are for solid waste only; they're the end stage of the digestive system. The bladder is for liquid waste; it's connected to an entirely different system (kidneys). At least, that's what I've always thought I knew.
Also, while I'm here, I wholeheartedly approve of this story.
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bladder! That's the word I was looking for! I just gave up after getting stuck on what it was for days.
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SB is (c) totes original do not steal
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Game of Thrones would have been better if they didn't diddle around in macho politics for so long before getting into the snow zombies.
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Yeah, some of us really want to, too.
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I'm sure the possibility is on the protagonist's mind. We'll see what Twilight figures out...
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You all deserve praise, for being such good people, and making me feel warm inside.
6118867 IKR! Fuck heaven, I want to go to Equestria when I die :P
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Okay!
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OMG YES! OMG YES! That would be so epic if the Author went that direction.
Perhaps the nightmares are actually analogies for the computer's programming and how it felt in its isolation!!!!
Then we can see how the commentators feel about Sweetie Belle technically being the one killing a fictional OC. Dun Dun Dun!!!
Mwahahaha.
6119525 I know right?
6118883 Hear hear.
6118867 sweet!! Cant wait for more!
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Oh! You actually meant to say bladder? I thought you were saying that here bowels actually exploded with shit after the small amount came out, and then she started peeing like a fire-hose. It as a... disturbing image to say the least. Ha!
6114987 I'm not really a fan of the idea
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In a sense, I was thinking this might be what was going on. Sweetie just /thinks/ she is someone else, because memories were implanted into her head, and blocking other memories. Memories that are familiar to both her and to the 'guy' that was implanted by the machine are stronger and come through, while things 'he' would not be familiar with get buried.
It would explain a lot of why certain things instinctively 'excite' 'him' regarding stallions and the like. Sweetie finds them attractive, and it comes out over the implanted memories. Sweetie is still there, just a bunch of crossed wires, essentially, causing confusion. Just the theory I had in mind, and Sweetie will naturally start to show up more and more.
I don't think I've ever laughed so hard at a poop joke.
6120655 thats cool. It was just a thought.
6122623 so thats two people who liked my thought. THANKS!
Please try to tone things down.
Well that was all quite hilarious. Even if it's something I'm glad I didn't read before a meal.
MOOOAAAARRR!!!!
Oh thank goodness I found this story again! I read it when it was featured in February 2015, but I forgot to save it into my Read Later bookshelf. Now, after 4 months, I have finally located in deep within fimfiction's archives, and it seems that I've missed 11 chapters! But we can always catch up! Anyways, nice story.
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Too much singing, not enough ponies in Heaven!
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Yeah, that ruined the whole punchline of the protagonist's overblown anxiety there.
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What was that? More titillated fillies? Hearing you loud and clear!
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Goodness! I would have featured it again, if I was the all powerful dictator of fimfiction. Alas!
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And, thanks for all your support. Hopefully can get this next chapter done and posted soon.
Meanwhile in Ho-Man-Land Sweetie Belle is handling herself quite well. Even if she thinks peeing with "that thing" is a bit awkward.
Anyway good chapter.
“go poop you dumb horsebeast.”
This is the best thing I've read all day.
Thank you.
Looks like the clop/clip correct happened to you there, unless you mean to say that although that a weird thing to say.
Rarity contradicts herself, tryst means a private, romantic rendezvous between lovers, according to Google that is.
*dies*
Well when you put it that way . . .
THAT ISN'T REASSURING RARITY!
Figuratively right?
It is nice to see that he is getting over the... novelty of being a her. So long as they don't make it impossible to not think of it that is...
That hood over the penis is called a prepuce I'm humans. For a pony, it would be a sheath.
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This chapter waskina painful to read... Mainly because I was laughing so fuckin hard, i rolled off the bed and cracked my head on the floor!
That bathroom scene has earned this story's placement in my Comedy Gold bookshelf.
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That's quite obtrusive. XD
Bonafide.
The details for relearning to walk and spellcast really solidify the experience of this world; it’s not a one-and-done simple but rather a complicated hurdle to overcome. I know this story ended prematurely years ago, but if it kept going then I imagine there would be far more complexity given in the spellwork, schooling, more difficult physical tasks, etc.