2144432 You're welcome! I just wrote down which parts of the chapter came to mind when I wrote "I really like this chapter" and why. I know many authors (and apparently editors! :D) look to the comment section for feedback and I'm happy to provide it if I can.

Oh, and what I like the most about the escape sequence is how the pace transitions from Aeron calmly observing his surroundings to him frantically trying to escape. Aeron's thoughts at the time seem very real and appropriate. Kudos to you guys for that! :)

Thanks for your comment on Evergreen Heart. I didn't want to make a big deal in the public comments, but as editor, I wanted to say something. The escape sequence was one of the more reviewed bits the author and I worked out, among other things. So I appreciate the detailed comment.

It's good to know we did our jobs well.

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