I am totally for a sequel to this story. I felt like this was only the end of an Arc and not the end of a story. I hope to see Bon Bon's Conversion come to pass!

I keep hitting the thumbs up button, but it's not giving you more than one vote!
What do I do!?

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shoot I don't know!

You keep hitting that button, while I will contact the website admins.

You seriously need to do a sequel with Bon Bon. We need to see this story come to a happy ending. As it sits now I feel it is really incomplete. As you left us with a pretty big cliffhanger. Not a good thing to go out on. Please give us a sequel! I absolutely love the Lyra Bon Bon ship. And we deffiantly need to get Chris's hands on that sexy body of Bon Bon's! She isn't called candy ass for nothing!

If you need and creative thought or ideas for bringing her into the mix I am sure there are those willing to help you get the creative fire roaring. I myself would also offer. Bon Bon needs to feel the wonders of hands!
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he knew that it was hard to find a stallion partner that could last longer than a few minutes, let alone all night. At least that's what Berry Punch tells her. She’s only been with one stallion and he was…

Weak physiological - UnderSexed

The earth pony sat down in the middle of her living room. She took a deep breath and exhaled slowly. ‘There is no way in tartarus I would ever be friends with that thing,’ she thought to herself.

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I'm on it!
*click* *click* *click* *click*

So. This story is far from over. And now we start with Bon-Bon.

Can't wait to see the confusement and awkwardness with Chris XD.

THIS IS THE BEST STORY IVE READ YET
this is going into my favorite and read again section

So this is the point where I tell you guys that Lyra's Confession has come to an end, but Bon Bon's Conversion (If that's what I am going to call it) begins.

this note gave me a severe case of sequelitis, a lethal disease that causes unhappiness and the feeling of being left behind, the only cure is a sequel, would you condemn me and other sufferers like me to such hardship?

5539815 HOLD ON...I Didn't Know you have furaffinity account??
btw, i love you art. that sexy...i know why i see this story furry hen-tai come from...

i can just imagine in the sequel

lyra "Chris, go give Bon Bon a head scratchy!"

Chris "Are you sure? Cause personal space and all..."

Bon Bon "No thanks im good!"

Lyra "Do it or no snuggles tonight!"

Chris and Bon Bon "....." Chris gets up and moves to Bon Bon, she is extremely nervous and disgusted at the thought of this human touching her with his spidery appendages. He reaches out and begins to scratch.
Bon Bons mind is overwhelmed with conflicting sensations. Everything is blurry, she should be repulsed but every fiber of her being is screaming out how good this is! She succumbs before having one last thought "this must be part of his mind control magic!"

SEQUELSEQUELSEQUELSEQUELSEQUELSEQUELSEQUELSEQUELSEQUELSEQUELSEQUELSEQUELSEQUELSEQUELSEQUEL NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW

you shouldn't be so hard on your self, you did great with this story.

A sequel you say?

Must. Have.SEQUEL!!!!!!

It would much appreciated.

Bonbon is one racist bitch!

A sequel, eh? That entitles you to one free stalking.

Here, have a follow for the sequel...

And now, let's talk about this story!

It was good. Really good. Better than a lot of Lyra stories, actually. I'm glad it came to such a happy conclusion.

There, done. Liked and faved.

I would love a sequel, both because it was a great HiE fic, but also because you left it on what could pass for a normal chapter cut-off point. I've never seen such an abrupt end to a fic before.

Plus, Bonny's being a racist cunt. I would like you to redeem her.

Oh my God. I need some wine with this cheese.

I love it.

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Yeah the reason I cut it off there, is because the focus is going to shift from Lyra to Bon Bon now. So I figured that was a good point to cut Lyra's part off.

I'm sorry.

Oh a sequel would be just lovely!

I love how Lyra acts like she has ADD sometimes.
'OOhhh, shiny thing!!'

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Bwahahaha!

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Thank you friends!

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Oh my gosh your icon is the cutest! I love it! And thank you I am glad you liked the story.

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Well I have chapters 1-4 already planed out! And I know how I want this to end so all I got to do is to get writing.

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Yay!

First Bon Bon...then the world...

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Picture...too adorable...

That Celtic music is so based. I'm of some Scottish descent and part of Clan Campbell, so maybe I'm a bit biased.

>> Pusspuss2
Thanks the gif looks better

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I just use it for background music. It helps me focus lol. If you have any recommendations of actually good Celtic stuff I am all for it.

I'm glad you decided to go for a sequel instead of just packing as much as possible in the very last chapter of this story. There's so much potential for character development, especially with Chris and Bon Bon. In any case, I don't mind this supposed "cliffhanger" ending. I think it's a perfect way to build up for the next story to come. Beside, I myself have been known for my share of cliffhangers in my stories.

I think at the very least for the sequel's 1st chapter, Bon Bon should at least be very impressed with Chris' dexterity when it comes to wrapping up candies despite having those "creepy spidery looking hand things." That way, it will leave a good first impression on Chris' part.

please keep going definitely want to see how this story progresses.

Be sure to add a chapter update with a link to the sequel

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Candy wrapping dexterity? hahaha. That's awesome.

Also I am honored that the king of all cosmos is reading my fan fiction about minty pony polts.

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What like an update here in this fic? You can watch me and it will show up on your feed when its out. :P

5541334 "Pony polts?" What the heck is that?

Anyway, I just want to say your cover art is very impressive. Really nice use of contrasting colors, and such lovely rendering and details.

Again, I look forward to the highly anticipated sequel as well as its cover art. Congrats on the the success of your first story by the way.

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I have no idea what that is.

And thank you! I hope the art and story do not disappoint.

I...I got nothin'. I've rewritten this comment about a dozen times and I got nothin' worthy. No quick-witted references or snarky remarks underlined with absolute love, nothin'.
It was just a good time, ya know? Between how beautifully the scenes and characters were written and just how sweet the story was as a whole, I got nothin' to bitch 'bout and if I talked what I praised, I'd be here all mornin'.
Keep on keepin' on, Mate

>> Pusspuss2
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Wow man thank you. I am glad I could leave you speechless haha. It makes me really happy that you can enjoy the story so much!

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I... I can't... I just can't its too much! TO MUCH CUTE!

Whats the big deal about a foal. All they have to do is go out and turn some tricks with a royal guard or something and they'll get their precious genetics. I'm sure everyone would be fine with that. No need for weird spells and such, because from the way that spell works, it sounds more like a modified clone anyhow. Makes me think that Candice was pulling a fast one on the griffin and just put on a light show to distract him while the mare got it from a Pegasus.

I cant wait for the next story, "Bon Bon's Conversion". And the story after that! It'll be awesome. "Chris's Ruinous Double Divorce and Punitive Alimony and Child Support Even Though The Kid Aint His". And the fourth book in the trilogy: "I Have To Escape Equestria: The Story Of A Dead Beat Dad, Or, The Kid Is Half Zebra-- WTF?"

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I love you... have my babies.

5540186 OH MY GOD THAT AVATAR PICTURE

Such a Cute and lovely fanfic. But alas, all good things must come to an end.

BUT THEN THERE'S SEQUEL!!! *starts firing lazers at random out of happiness.

5542264 why thank you.

5542433 ITS JUST SOOO ADORABLE I THINK IM GONNA DIE

This story reminds me of an old critique I once heard:
"Dear Sir, your work is both Original and Good, but the part that is Good is not Original and the part that is Original is not Good."
This story went pretty heavy on the clichés and fanon; not that I object to such, it just leaves a been-there-done-that feeling to the piece. Nevertheless, the story was very well put together. I'm giving it an upvote and I eagerly anticipate the sequel.

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I agree with the sentiment. It could have been better in some ways, it could have been worse in others. Altogether it's technically competent, but really uninspired. So still same as my second impression was, really.