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Stryke


Just a Brit who likes writing fics about ponies (with a very high percentage chance of Trixie turning up).

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Lightning Dust is finally prepared to seek her vengeance on the mare she blames for denying her place amongst the Wonderbolts.

Of course, that kind of behaviour is probably only due to her romantic feelings for Rainbow Dash, which she just hasn’t admitted to yet.

It’s time for an unrequited intervention, whether Lightning Dust wants one or not.

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Vectors used are by theluckypegasus511, jeatz axl, turbo740, noxy and boneswolbach. Image composition was by myself.

This a fairly silly one off that I wrote most of at the end of last year while somewhat down about some of the reception that All for You was getting to de-stress. Then due to various factors it took me bloody ages to actually finish the thing and take account of the show actually bringing Gilda back in the meantime so nearly a year after starting it it's finally done.

Pre-read and edited by the always wonderful Mooncalf.

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Lightning groaned. Second coming of the Mag’ne Witnesses. That was just what she needed right now.

Oh, could be worse. Could be Tirek cultists. :p

Okay, cute. Random but still awesome. :D Love the ending, too. My headcanon is all of Trixie's wishes came true that night. ;)

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Glad you came round on it :pinkiehappy:

Aww I was hoping that would be longer! Great story!!

Comment posted by SunBlaze deleted Nov 6th, 2015

Amusing, though I'm not sure I got all quite all the references. Was the drunken mare Starshine the cult leader?

shadowy alley

Ally. Unless a shadowy gap between buildings freed Mane-iac.

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No chance of getting that one as that was a fic I was writing around the same time as the very first chapters of Random Elements. It was pretty bad and as I lost what I did do of it to a dead laptop means it will never see the light of day.

Thanks for the spot!

6605253 Well, now my face is red. I didn't catch that one at all when I pre-read. I really thought she had managed to reach Equestria through some kind of magical passageway, Planescape-style. Oops.

shipping intensifies.

Okay, this came out surprisingly well. Lots of fun little references and the chemistry between the main cast was fantastic. Well earned Like. :twilightsmile:

SO MANY SHIPS! SO MANY!

So which one of Gilda's unrequited loves was lucky number 3?

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Left to the reader's imagination :raritywink:

What are the chances we could get a sequel or prequel detailing everyone else's story of revenge to love? It'd be amusing to see Trixie and Gilda's then Chrysalis and the others trying to win the one's they love's hearts after coming to that realization and forming the support group thing. Wonder how Twilight reacted to Nightmare Rarity and Chrysalis returning though? Not to mention Adagio returning home after 1000 years Equestria side.

This fic was really fun, most so is the banter.

Hahaha. That was awesome.

Thought, what happened with Chryssie? Did they him her up with someone?

Cya
Raziel-chan

Man, this fic is all sorts of awesome.

Good fun. And good on you for a fun take on the oft-ignored "social" villains.

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