Rainy Days
Rainy Days
By TomaTanuki
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Princess Celestia, ruler of Equestria and shepherd of the sun itself, watched from her throne as Canterlot's pegasi moved dozens of clouds into position for today's rainstorm. A recent drought in the more arid areas of her domain had required her to postpone half a dozen small showers in Canterlot and divert them to save the crops in the region.
Now that the worst was over, however, the Canterlot weather teams had decided to schedule a large downpour for today. Officially it was to make up for the missed storms and to 'rebalance' things, but the actual reason was that one of her advisors noticed the flowers in Celestia's garden had begun to wilt and panicked.
While she preferred it if her subjects didn't make such a fuss over her she certainly didn't mind the sudden change. Due to the storm several of her appointments for the day had to be postponed. As eager as she was to meet with her subjects whenever they needed her, it had been many years since she could take a half-day and she was looking forward to it. She already knew just what she wanted to do and anxiously waited for her last meeting to end.
She listened patiently as the delegation from Manehatten finished their presentation and told them she would review their requests and give them an answer as soon as possible. Satisfied, the trio of earth ponies bowed and excused themselves. As they departed, Celestia glanced out the window again and saw that the weather teams had finished arranging the storm clouds.
"Looks like they're about to start." Celestia half-whispered to herself before looking to her guards. "Argento, Scarto..." The two armored unicorns snapped to attention. "Is there anypony else waiting to see me?"
Argento took a quick look at the appointment book and shook his head. "Looks like that's all for today your highness. Shall I close the court for the day?"
"Yes, please do. Thank you both for another job well-"
Celestia was cut off as the throne room's door was pushed open and one of her pegasus guards rushed towards her.
"Your majesty. Miss Rainbow Dash just arrived, she says she has an important message for you from Twilight Sparkle. Shall I show her in?"
"From Twilight?" Celestia raised an eyebrow at this. Usually Twilight's messages were sent directly to her via Spike. Why would she send Rainbow Dash all this way instead? "Please send her in right away."
The guard bowed and quickly returned to the foyer while Celestia continued to ponder what was going on. Seconds later, Rainbow Dash came running through the door towards her. She came to a screeching halt at the bottom the small staircase in front of the throne and panted for air, clearly exhausted.
Very worried at this point, Celestia leapt from her throne and moved to her side. "Rainbow Dash, are you alright? What happened?"
"I'm... I'm okay... " Rainbow continued panting, trying to catch her breath. "I just flew... all the way... from Ponyville." She finally took a deep breath and reached into her saddle bag, producing a sealed scroll. "Twilight asked me to bring this to you. Spike's got a cold and can't breathe any fire so she asked me to fly it here as fast as I could."
"I see. Well done my little pony." Celestia smiled at the cyan pegasus and used her magic to open the scroll.
"Thanks... um, I mean thank you, your majesty." Rainbow sighed and sat down on the floor. "I hope it's not bad news. Twilight seemed pretty frantic when she asked me. I've been running all over the place all day and the last thing I need is-"
"Oh dear." Celestia said, in a slightly weary tone and shook her head.
"What's the matter?" Rainbow asked curiously. In response, the princess lowered the letter so she could read it...
"Dear Princess Celestia,
I am writing this to inform you that Spike has come down with a slight cold and will be unable to send any messages to you until he recovers. Fluttershy says he'll be better in a couple of days but suggested he rest for at least a week. Please do not worry as I will be saving any friendship reports my friends and I write and send them along to you as soon as he's better. Hope all is well.
Your faithful student,
Twilight Sparkle"
Rainbow Dash blinked as she finished reading, going over it again to make sure she had read it correctly. When it finally sank in...
"Are...you...KIDDING ME!?" Rainbow bellowed, stamping her hooves on the floor. Argento and Scarto started to react but Celestia motioned for them to stop as Rainbow started pacing in front of her.
"She sent me all the way here for that!? I can't believe her! In fact, I can't believe this entire stupid DAY! It's just been one stupid thing after another, ending with that stupid egghead making me bring her stupid letter to her stupid teacher! When I get back there I'm gonna-"
Rainbow raised her hoof to make her point when she realized what she had just said. Her face paled visibly as she shrank down to the floor and gulped, looking up at the princess.
"Um... I-I'm really sorry your princess-ness. I just... I didn't mean..."
"Not another word, Rainbow Dash." Celestia said in an even, patient tone. The pegasus whimpered softly as the princess turned to her guards. "Gentlecolts, you are excused for the day. Hurry home before the rain starts."
"Thank you, your highness." The two guards spoke in synch and trotted past Rainbow Dash, giving her a pair of pitying looks as they left the room.
Celestia looked down at Rainbow like a parent would a misbehaving foal, considering her options. After a minute or so of silence she turned towards the side door. "Come with me. We'll discuss this further in my chambers."
"B-But I..." Rainbow trailed off as the princess looked back at her and she quickly fell in step behind the alicorn without another word.
The two made their way through the castle's empty hallway, neither making a sound, until they came to a pair of large double doors blocking the way. Celestia's horn glowed as she opened them and stepped inside, Rainbow following her closely. As the princess set about lighting a few candles Rainbow took a quick look around. The princess' bedchamber was just as extravagant as Rainbow imagined. The walls were decorated with bright springtime colors with the ceiling painted to mimic the sky, complete with a bright yellow sun in the middle.
There was a large fireplace, the mantle of which held several decorative knickknacks and statuettes. Nearby was a full sized gold-rimmed mirror, a work desk covered with stacks of papers and scrolls, and a large wardrobe, despite the fact she had never seen the princess wear anything aside from her crown and jewelry.
Finally her eyes fell of the massive four-poster bed, which took up almost a third of the room. The aurora-colored curtains were drawn so she couldn't see much else but just the sight of it reminded her how worn out she was. Almost all at once she felt her fatigue from the day she had hit full force and she nearly passed out on the spot.
"I must say you surprised me back there." Celestia said in a bemused tone as she magically removed her crown and necklace, placing them gingerly on her desk. "Twilight's letters mentioned you had a bit of a temper but I always thought she was exaggerating. I certainly wasn't expecting an outburst like that in my throne room. Having one of those days, are we?"
Rainbow nodded, blushing as the princess removed her golden slippers. "I-I guess. But... but I know I shouldn't have gone off like that, especially in front of you. I'm sure you've had plenty of rough days. Way worse than mine. You've gotta help ponies coming in with serious problems all the time, not to mention national disasters and stuff. So hearing me whine like a little filly must have been kinda... unbearable." She whimpered and closed her eyes, shaking in fright. "S-So if you wanna have me locked in the stocks or thrown in the dungeon or even b-banished I'll totally-"
"Rainbow Dash, please calm down. I'm not angry with you." Celestia interrupted her, chuckling softly. "And I definitely don't plan on banishing you. Yes, during my time on the throne I've had my fair share of bad days, some of which still haunt me." She sighed and looked up at the ceiling for a moment before smiling at Rainbow again.
"However, that doesn't mean your problems are any less valid. No matter what your problems are, the worst thing anypony can do is dismiss them as trivial or unimportant. Everypony has bad days... days where they feel like everything is going wrong no matter what they do. They can be overwhelming, even painful. Sometimes they just need somepony to listen and vent to before the stress makes them sick. Now, that being said..." Celestia paused and sat down next to Rainbow, giving her a little wink as she did so. "Why don't you go ahead and let it all out? I think you'll feel a lot better if you do."
Rainbow let out a sigh and sat down as well, having relaxed quite a bit now that she knew she wasn't in trouble. She briefly considered trying to play it cool and polietly decline the offer. However, when she looked up at Celestia again, seeing the genuine and earnest look in her eyes, she found herself unable to do so.
"A-Alright. I guess it can't hurt." Rainbow said, taking a deep breath before starting again. "So, first I had to cover for Blossomforth this morning when she cashed in a vacation day. That wasn't really a big deal since it was just a couple of hours of cloud clearing but, as soon as I finished, Applejack said she needed some help getting her carts to the market. I skipped my mid-day nap for that. Then when we got to town Pinkie asked me to help her watch the Cake's twins, mainly so she had someone to keep up with Pound Cake, that little guy can really move. After the Cakes got back I was about to go home and relax when Rarity roped me into trying on her new line of prissy outfits for a client. Finally, after standing perfectly still for almost an hour, I walked out the door only for Twilight to run up to me all panicked and ask me to fly here at top speed with a quote 'vitally important message' about how she can't send you any messages for a while!"
By the time she finished, Rainbow was panting heavily and a few tears had formed in her eyes. She sniffed and wiped them away, quietly hoping Celestia didn't see them, before finishing. "I-I know it must sound lame to somepony as super-important and busy as you but I just haven't stopped all day and I don't-" She was cut off when Celestia suddenly draped her wing over her.
The alicorn gently pulled Rainbow closer to her body and nuzzled her. "Rainbow Dash, I don't think you give yourself enough credit. From the sound of things you've run yourself ragged all day to help your friends without any rest or asking anything in return. That's hardly 'lame' in my opinion. In fact, I think it's very admirable."
"Heh, th-thanks." Rainbow Dash blushed, both at the praise and from the nuzzling. Once she had caught her breath, Rainbow was surprised at how good she felt, as if a great weight had been lifted from her chest. Letting out a sigh of relief she laid her head against the princess's side.
"Now then, I think I know just what you need." Celestia said after a brief moment of silence. She rose to her feet, gently lifting Rainbow Dash up as well. "I'm sure you noticed as you flew in but we're about to have a nice spring storm."
Rainbow nodded, hearing a bit of thunder rumbling outside. "Yeah. Looks like a doozy too. I was hoping to be on my way home before it started but... well so much for that, right?"
"Indeed." Celestia chuckled and used her magic to open the curtains on her bed. "I was planning on taking a nice long nap until the storm was over. Since you're going to be stuck here I was thinking..." She trailed off and let the pegasus figure the rest out
"W-Wait a minute..." Rainbow gasped as she realized what she was offering. "Y-You mean... I can take a nap in your bed!? With you!? Th-That's like a royal nap isn't it!? You... you really mean it!? I-I mean..." She cleared her throat and calmed herself. "Are...are you sure that's okay? I-I don't wanna intrude. You're royalty after all."
The princess simply smiled and climbed up onto her mattress. "It'll be our little secret. Besides, after everything you and your friends have done, the least I can do is offer you a place to sleep after a hard day. However, if you'd prefer your own bed I suppose I could arrange for-Ooh!" She yelped as Rainbow dashed onto the bed, smiling ear to ear.
"No no no, I'm good! That just sounds so..." She was cut off by a sudden yawn, her body reminding her of how tired she was. She blushed and practically collapsed down onto the soft mattress, her ears twitching a little as the first few raindrops hit the roof. "Guess the storms starting."
Celestia nodded and used her magic to extinguish the candles on the walls and to close the curtains, dimming the room considerably.
"Now, just one more thing." Blushing a little, Celestia aimed her horn towards her wardrobe and pulled it open. She smiled as she levitated a large blanket, half pink and half blue, out of it. Before Rainbow could ask about it, the princess's magic gently wrapped the blanket around her, tucking it underneath her. "There we go, nice and snug."
Rainbow blushed again at Celestia's motherly tone but couldn't really complain. The blanket was almost as soft as a cloud and very warm. "Wow, this is... th-thanks your highness."
"It's my pleasure Rainbow." She replied as she fluffed the pillows with her magic. "It's my old security blanket. Before Luna's return it helped me get though a quite a few rough patches."
Rainbow's eyes went wide upon hearing this, overwhelmed by the gesture. "I...I don't know what to say. I-" Once again Rainbow was interrupted as Celestia slipped a pillow under her head and gave her forehead a little kiss.
"Think nothing of it, my little pony." Celestia closed the curtains around the bed and levitated the bedspread over the both of them. Letting out a soft yawn, the princess settled down next to the pegasus. "Have a good rest Rainbow Dash. Sweet dreams."
Rainbow yawned as well and snuggled up closer to the sun princess. "You too... th-thanks again... your high... ness..." Rainbow closed her eyes and just listened to the wind howl, the rain clatter against the castle walls and the princess' steady heartbeat.
Celestia smiled and laid her head down on her pillow. Being very careful not to disturb her, she gently slipped her hoof around Rainbow's middle and pulled her just a little closer to her. Letting out a quiet sigh, the princess closed her eyes and waited for sleep to take her.
One was the ruler of Equestria, she who brings the dawn each day and watches over her beloved subjects. The other was captain of the Ponyville weather team and one of the Bearers of the Elements of Harmony. At this moment, however, they were just two ponies, drifting off into a peaceful slumber in a warm embrace.
The End
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Like.a mother
heart-warming
that was sweet
So much d'aaawww and sweetness.
The only tiny issue I have is that I think Rainbow would have protested just a bit before she started unloading about her day, but as I said it's a minor thing. Good story, overall.
522808
Stress can do strange things to a person, and most know that times all you need is a good rant
Pretty damn good one-shot you have here. And a good lesson for anyone and everyone.
It's a neat little oneshot, but some of the spelling bugs me a little. Excellent idea and setting of the mood, though.
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Trust me, I know 'bout ranting to let off steam, and certainly I liked that Rainbow did do that here. Just sayin', a brief "Oh, I couldn't," kind of protest, then Celestia going "Really, it's alright, and I want to hear about it" and then the rant would have been good. But again, it wasn't a dealbreaker for me, it just jostled the mimesis a bit. So, it's just, like, my opinion, man.
how adorable
This almost gave me diabetes. I'm pretty sure my blood sugar just rose about 20%.
This isn't Molestia, right?? The bed thing kinda gave off that vibe.
I am glad that there isn't any sexual vibes in this story. Excellent work.
D'aaawww.
This is the Celestia I like to think of.
Bra-vo!
This was so cute, loved how motherly Celestia was in this.
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I see what you mean but I'd like to think that Celestia's words were enough to get Rainbow to put down her defenses. Though that's definitely something I'll keep in mind for future stories.
Also I want to thank everyone for your kind words, I'm honestly surprised at how well recieved this was. I've fixed a few of the more obvious errors but if I missed any feel free to point them out.
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522808
I've seen the toughest bastard I'd ever known, burst into tears one day because everything was just WRONG. Wrong wrong wrong. Nothing went right, and it just made him feel like trash.
Emotions can be a powerful thing, that can hit you out of nowhere.
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They can be dreadful things, right? It's a pity we can't turn them off when we don't need them, like when dealing with such days.
Really well done.
D'aaaaw! That was so cuuute! I really love seeing Celestia and Rainbow Dash bond, they seem so different it really is great when they get scenes like this. And yes, those days where a million little almost insignificant things add up? They're almost worse than the days when one or two big things go wrong.
Really well written and loved reading!
I just love this kind of fics, showing Celestia's motherly side.
Thank you for it!
I like the basic Idea, it is sweet, it has some dawwwww...But it seems abit...out of character for Celestia to invite a pony to her bed just cause a bad day (Bow chica bow bow). offering her a room at the palace for part of the day I could see. but other then that it has...so much dawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
Sweet
Cue obnoxious snoring.
i just love these type of fic's.celestia being a mother to rainbow dash or any pony.(but mostly rainbow dash because i'll always think that celestia is the mother to rainbow dash)
So I know others have asked you this, but please consider giving this a couple of editing passes.* There are still a decent amount of obvious spelling errors running around like they own the place.
I mainly ask this because this is one of those stories I already know I'm going to keep coming back to. This is just the best idea for a scene and the best brain candy ever, and I can't get enough of the finale.
*(If you really don't have the time or anyone who can look at it, I can take a crack at it.)
2897990 All done. Sorry for taking so long to reply, I have no excuse. I had a friend of mine give it a good look. He fixed up most of the spelling and grammar mistakes and then i went back and re-did a few parts that I thought needed some work. I hope it came out okay.
Also, thank you so much for the compliment. It really meant a lot to me
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Remove the comma here so readers won't slam on the brakes as they're reading about Celestia's greatness.
"dozens of clouds"
Should be "was" to maintain past tense.
Suggested: "Come with me. We will discuss this further in my chambers."
Giving Celestia a more formal tone here will drive home her mood -- or at least the mood Rainbow perceives her to be in at that moment.
And that's all that jumps out at me.
EDIT:
"It's." That's in the description. Speaking of which, you might not want to give away the entire story in it.
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SUBARASHII, good sir! I certainly wasn't expecting you to go back over this (simply due to the story's age) but I really appreciate it. From where I'm sitting, this is an effortless read now, and you should be proud. This has cemented its place in my Favorites now.
I guess the only other thing I'd advise is to screencap a cover for this, just because it really deserves one! In the meantime, if you don't mind, I'm going to toss this over to some groups. This deserves far more viewers than it has.
3090016 *Goes through the checklist* Okay, that should do it. Thank you so much for pointing those out to me. I also re-wrote the description a little so it didn't give the entire plot away. I'm worried it might be a little too vague but hopefully it won't drive anyone away either.
Once again, thank you for your kind words and also for passing my story along. I don't think any words can express my gratitude.
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You're welcome -- and the description's perfect.
Now go write more things!
Equestria has the best royal family.
Very nice!! Glad to see you still got the gift Toma!
Awwww, this story is just too cute!
I wonder if Rainbow Dash is Celestia's daughter though........
This story was adorable. Probably one of my favorite portrayals of Celestia so far.
Fun, cute, short. Not ground breaking but it didn't need to be. I definitely enjoyed.
This was a sweet, fun little read. I think we've all had days like Rainbow Dash's, so it was easy to sympathize. Loved the kind, nurturing Princess Celestia you gave us. My favorite Celestia.
That was an adorable interaction between those characters, not often to be seen in non-shipping fics. I really liked it
This is a beautiful story between Rainbow Dash and Celestia.
This story was definitely adorable, and it ended up being different than what I thought it would be.
But why does it have the comedy tag? Nothing really stood out as being funny to me.
6596896 Call it an amature mistake on my part. When I first posted it I thought slice-of-life was a little too vague and the comedy tag would show that it was a light hearted story. But I think you're right, it probably should go.
Thank you for the comment. I'm glad that you enjoyed it so much.
6597529 You're welcome.
Wholesome and sweet! Wow! :D