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Fluttershy wins a mail raffle that includes a trip for her and five others to the fabulous Las Pegasus. Her friends feel that going on this trip will be a good way to help Fluttershy get out of her shell. Although Fluttershy feels conflicted about going, she is goaded into it.
While there, Fluttershy starts enjoying herself in the casino, but maybe a little too much. What will come of the entire trip?
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Oh man the premise sounded really exciting but I felt the characters were a little off for my liking. (I know Fluttershy is excited but I wouldn't think she'd be that bombastic, it's almost Pinkie level enthusiasm). Regardless, it flowed alright so I'll just see if this revises anytime in the future.
5440635 Not that I don't agree with you, but the Pinkie and Fluttershy are played by the same voice actor.
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Fluttershy does get bombastic when she's excited, though.
5441265 I know, but that's an extremely rare case isn't it?
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But it does give you precedent if you want to show her as being more exuberant.
5445024 Fair enough.
This needs more attention mate. I suggest you putting this in as many groups possible and wait.
Oh, and happy new year
Dang, they're all pushy.
Lol that Hobbit reference.
Also, dat pile of bits...
I loved this, made me laugh. If only this was an episode.
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For something that you don't consider your 'best work' this was a hoot! I'm surprised the series itself hasn't covered gambling. The part at the end was a hoot! Leave it to Pinkie to save the day. I particularly liked the interaction between Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy, being a FlutterDash shipper. Originally, I was going to keep track of your story 'I'm Afraid I Haven't Told You Everything', but I think I'll keep an eye out for your future works as well.
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Much obliged
Uh, for the record, Tirek is a centaur, not a minotaur.
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Thanks
Fixed it
Ha, she wanted the fridge.
They really should have just had Fluttershy play Pokémon instead, much more up her alley. And less expensive.
Quite amusing, a well done read. 8/10, if it didn't involve gambling, I could see this as a canon episode.
I'd like to see your best work if this wasn't it, because this was hilarious.
Pinkie winning gobs of money at the end was a cute little way to explain why she wasn't around for restraining Fluttershy.
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Well thanks. You're welcome to check out any other stories I have that catch your interest.
This a very funny story, sort of predictable with the "Fluttershy becoming obssessive with money" thingy, but very funny. However there's something that bothers me, some littleness.
How does ponies have electricity and TV? If we consider the show, they're at least either XVIII century or first half of XIX century. They don't even have invented the telephone!
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Would imagination be an acceptable answer?
thus begins fluttershy’s gambling addiction pfft
gambling is addicting, oh my goodness
that smeargal reference though hahaha!