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Teyeson Bee


"Something random a day keeps the boring away." - Teyeson Bee

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Bored with how her life has fallen into a rut, Trixie spices her life up by engaging in her newest hobby; Photobombing! While starting out small, she soon gets addicted, and her antics start to annoy the heck out of everybody around her!

Now it's up to Sunset and the other girls at CHS to put a stop to it...before the other students do.

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Comments ( 6 )

Trixie would pwn this class:

I'm on Trixie's side here.

Well, if it were me, I'd start breaking out the torches. Wouldn't set 'em on fire, though - the school's sprinkler system would go off.

Personally I don't even understand why would anyone want to take photos in a school.

Nice story. Though piece of advice for writing Trixie:

Notice in her previous episodes how she only uses the third person when she's feeling boastful and proud yet only drops it when's she's scared, nervous or sad? If you ever write Trixie again in future, keep this in mind. It doesn't seem very balanced here. But you definitely got her personality right. :twilightsmile:

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Noted. I'll make the changes then.
Glad you enjoyed it. :pinkiehappy:

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