"Would you believe that I've always wished I could be somepony else? Yet I can't see what I need to do to be the pony I want to be."
Diamond Tiara is the daughter of the Rich family. After she cannot win the school president against Pipsqueak, her mother scolls her. The Cutiemark Cursaders reach out to her, but when Pipsqueak tells he cannot afford the promised playground, Diamond Tiara sees her chance to get back in her mother's grace. However Applebloom, Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo are trying their best to turn the course for Diamond Tiara. Can they succeed?
AN: This monologue is a praise for the episode Cursaders of the Lost Mark, therefor it contains spoilers.
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Is this it, and the incomplete tag is just an error, or is there really more to come?
Since it feels like it ended at a good point.
Just a couple of things I feel the need to point out here. First, scolls, clearly you wanted the word scolds. Secondly you used uprising in the short description when you meant upbringing.
Edit: Two more things I've noticed. Blanc, blank and you used off when the word you want of. Other then these few details you seem to have captured what seemed to go through Diamond Tiara's mind during all of this. Nicely done.
Question: why is this fiction incomplete? In fact, why does it exist? Unless this is supposed to be an aftermath of the episode from DT's perspective, why not cover the entire episode's monologue in this document? Why am I asking all these questions? Why is this stupid elephant in my room?!
I need a drink.
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I forgot to add the finished tagg. *facepalm*
its blank not blanc just letting you know.
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I somehow have a C in mind instead of a K and it is not leaving so easy.
6522174 lol owell close enough c and k do make the same sound.
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Yes. Indeed.
Nice! Very very nice! I loved this! Gosh! I re-watched that episode today, and I cried again at the scene where DT sings sadly...wait...am I crying now? I can't believe it! Sorry...I...I have to go...
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No problem. I am glad, you liked it.
Corrections: Apparently she did.
Those blank flanks are following me.
Those blank flanks do not know me
lower kinds and those blank flanks
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Yeah, I somehow got the wrong writing of blank stuck in my head. XD
6540429 Yeah but anyways this story gave me a flash back on the part where they were singing Light Of Your Cutiemark. Also, Am I the only one that noticed the 'Apparantley'?
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Probably. Light of Your Cutiemark was the scene I based the monologue on.