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Going into this, I expected it to be rather cliche and typical clop. I expected it to jump right into sex and finish.
I love being proved wrong!
Brilliant writing, I love how you portray Luna! You have great talent at this!
5357184 Yay!
Very rarely do I get the joy of reading clop that is more about the emotions and the peo-ponies rather than the norm of "Blah blah blah and then they fucked."
Very well done.
5358334 Thanks!
Some stories just have that one line that stands out, you know?
I don't know what it is, but to me, that's beautiful.
Very well written, and a great concept.
5361512 Lines like that are all I'm looking for. Thanks!
your third fic link is that of the second fic link....
5361659 Not anymore. But thanks for pointing that out.
meh, not really a fan, didn't go the way I thought.
I really liked it, and I think you should make a second chapter, when fluttershy wakes up
5377693 Thanks! Yes, there will be continuation to this, although in a different story most likely. It will connect to the "Pegasus Is Fine" series.
Wow-wee, that's quite a story there. fun to read
5431480 Thanks! I was afraid Luna would come across a bit too laid back here. She's writing for herself only though, and in general I prefer the ironic Luna over the gloomy-mystic one.
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I like your Luna as well. Her personality was interesting in this one.
Maybe not make a habit of usurping romantic dreams, but this one time can't hurt
As I stated in one of my own stories, I'm not the biggest fan of one-shots; they're too short. But here I can make an exception. This story was great, and very visual. A joy to read. The whole story, given the dreamscape and all that, had me constantly playing every event out in my head, and there was a sweet, calm fantasy soundtrack in the background. We need more authors like yourself. Have a like for the road!
6117356 I certainly will! Thanks!
I must say, I would greatly enjoy a more thorough story here. This was a great piece, but I feel it's a bit of an injustice to keep it as a simple one-shot. The dreamscape was very well done, very vivid while simultaneously allowing the reader plenty of room for interpretation. The ending though... there's some great emotion there. You could build off of that potential story if you chose to make more chapters. That's one that I may consider writing myself in all honesty.
Excellent work, have a like and fave.
6142784 Thanks! Yeah I've actually planned on continuing this fic, but in a somewhat indirect way. As is, it ties to the "Pegasus Is Fine, Too" series, at least loosely, so whenever I get to working on that again, I might as well throw Luna in there for company.
That was hilarious, sweet and beautiful all at once. Oh, and even the clop was good, real good in fact, but the best about this 'clopfic' is that it actually isn't one. It's more of an erotic character study. Does that make sense?
The only thing that bothers me is Celestia reading Luna's diary. That's just wrong. Still a very green thumbs up, just not a fav.
Anyway, very well done.
6407197 Aww, you make me blush. Again.