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Poor Fluttershy, missing out on all the fun. :(
Is there gonna be another chapter? You could make a story out of this.
I need more, this is amazing. Just a few typos here and there.
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There will indeed be. All and all I was planning to make this a three parter.
4205374 Aww, don't worry: It'll be her turn next.
Pot of gold. Heh.
That was lovely.
There was something weird about this though, as if some paragraphs are missing:
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He's teasing her. Although that 'He' should be a she...
4228315 As Pixel Pony noted, he was indeed pulling her hoof. The fact wasn't that obvious though, but I preferred to keep it that way.
I'm sad to see this end but the end was amazing.
That last line... Perfection. Like and favorite.
10/10.
The last time an author got into the heads of his characters so much in a mature fic was romance reports. It was really neat how each encounter in each chapter was an attempt to understand each other better, and how fluttershy's decision comes out of an empathy with thunderlane that they both want something more from rainbow dash. There was a ragingsemi fic a LOOONG time ago that did something similar with braeburn/strongheart/dash but this blows it out of the water.
The only bad part were the few spelling mistakes, a few word mixups, none of which were that bad, but also a ton of mix ups for he/shes him/hers. There were like 10 in this chapter alone. They really take you out of the moment, but surprisingly never caused confusion in a fic about a threesome.
Welp, off to read your backlog.
4287387 Your words warm my heart. Alas, it seems that I really needed to find a proofreader for this fic: I tried to cut corners and do everything myself...oh well, got to fix them afterwards at least. Ironically enough, mixing the s/he pronouns was something I especially tried to watch out for, knowing that I get them wrong all the time, even when there's only one sex present in a scene.
But thanks for the kind comments! Who knows, maybe Dash wasn't kidding in her last comment...
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4580823 I was surprised that the meme hadn't been incorporated into ponydom before. Or at least not in a story name...
4580823 Is that Sakamoto?
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It's Tohno Shiki and Len.
4584667 Oh...
The cat reminded me of Sakamoto from Nichijou is all...
I really enjoyed this! In first chapter I thought that Thunderlane would be some kind sleazy weirdo, but happy that it worked out in the end, thumbs up!
5500954 Thanks!
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lulz ikr
That last line! XD And here I thought Thunderlane's mom had won the fic with that line about cats.
8183644 Glad to have made you glad!
Bucking awesome
There is just something special about reading how Rainbow gets rutted hard like a crazy mare in heat
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That special has a name: arousal.
Well, actually.... :))