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MightyShockwave


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"Sorry sickos"? Way to win over prospective readers there.

Hmmm....might wanna edit that little opening note a little bit...I like to think we're friends or at least acquaintances and I don't like to think of myself as a sicko really...I rather like your bad ends.

Once again you intrigued me with this story, can't wait to see who you do next!

You know that you're just as much of a sicko as i am Shockwave. :pinkiecrazy:

I would say the story is not one of your best, but i there's still alot to love about this.

Thanks for another enjoyable Lamia fic. :twilightsmile:

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You're right. I need to stop hanging around 4chan so often. I meant it affectionately.

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so, uh
whats with all the deleted comments?

5407088 I was a bad commentor :(

Good story but I hate really really really really really really dislike the constant down put on Fluttershy here and it's not just a one time reference. I know it's a fic and I should relax, but she's my favorite pony and she isn't as weak willed as you keep making her out to be. She was the only one to resist Discord mind probe thingy and had to be influenced directly, has The Stare, which is pretty damn close to hypnosis, and has been shown to have an iron clad determination when push comes to shove (See Hurricane Fluttershy or CKaFO for examples). I know you wanted it for the story as it is a sequel to "Cuddling the Caretaker" but please do try and tone this part down in the future. (if you plan on making more. Please do!)

Also I like how you say will have to get our jollies elsewhere yet it's in the clopfic folder in the Mind Control group :rainbowlaugh:

staring into Twilight's eyes with her mouth dangling open, ironically only just reaching the point of the trance that Fluttershy herself started at.

NO.

Also, you are a filthsome comment deleter of the foulest kind. You are a coward and a fool, and I have zero respect for anyone such as you.

So then, is this more or less a sequel story to the good end of the Fluttershy story? I'm confused... :derpyderp1:

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Wow, great catch! Thanks for letting me know, I removed that ugly word. Sometimes things just slip through.

Also I only deleted those comments because it was literally 4chan-tier shitposting completely unrelated to the story.

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Oh.

Well, disregard the whole "Fuck your asshole" thing, then.

Carry on.

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Pretty much, but it's meant to be enjoyed as a standalone.

Great fic, the induction was pretty good in this.
>no bad end
Goddamn it man. You're killing me here!
:rainbowwild:

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You're right. I need to stop hanging around 4chan so often. I meant it affectionately.

Ehehehehe.
I know that feel.

this is ma fetish but i cant even READ those fics if i know there COULD be a bad ending...just wrecks me
soooo...GREAT fic

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What do you mean, no bad end? That one came out first.

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I must have missed that story, thanks for showing it to me!

If I may I would suggest that you put this story in the group bimbofication,bimbos, and sluts this is just a suggestion and great story btw.

This is what Twilight acts like after the good ending? Those of us who enjoyed the bad one have nothing on Twilight for being sickos...though me specifically could be an exception:pinkiecrazy:. I find the thought of Applejack with an entranced expression, and speaking in a slow, monotone version of her usual drawl, in a dress and dripping from her behind very :rainbowlaugh: and also a bit arousing now that I really focus on it...oh how I love hypnosis!!!!:heart:

These stories are the reason I want to follow you. Now...

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I followed you now. :3 Your stories are awesome! :pinkiesmile:

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Oh thanks!

Just curious, which one do you like most?

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Probably Cuddling the Caretaker. It's one of the first I've read on this site and it's AMAZING!

Not bad at all.

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