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Revenant Wings


"The world is a looking-glass, and gives back to every man the reflection of his own face." - William Makepeace Thackeray, Vanity Fair. Admin of LGBT, somewhat obsessed with Crash Bandicoot.

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It's okay, I've still got a spare apocalypse kit from last year. :pinkiehappy:

"That had better be your Stetson touching me."
:rainbowlaugh:

I'm about to cross another line here. Don't stop writing, just because the world is going down.

Blitz and Elusive? I like where this is going.

I joined the list of watchers for the Dusk-Jack shipment, BUT :pinkiehappy: A Blitz-Elusive shipment as well!? Oh I have much to look forward to. Keep up the great work and as with the previous chapters, very well written :twilightsmile:

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I actually didn't plan on Elusive coming into the picture at all when I started it. Then I put his name in the first line of the whole fic and figured "Why the hell not?"

Also, he's kind of sexy... but you didn't hear that from me. :raritywink:

!63TwiJack AND !63RariDash ? Looks promising.

....:pinkiegasp: AWESOME!

I gotta tip a wing to ya, you got me hooked wanting to see what happens next :pinkiehappy:

“It really is no trouble at all, dear,” Elusive said. “Also, I might have lied to him.”

Elusive cocked his head. “About what?”

I think you meant - Rainbow cocked his head. Or perhaps - Blitz cocked his head.

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Thank you for pointing that out. It has been changed. :twilightsmile:

Definitely keeping this one on my radar! :twilightsmile:

Well, I hope you figure it out before the next chapter :pinkiehappy:

Do your best, I'm sure it will take care of itself! :twilightsmile:

you say you dont know how to write it... well then... dont write it, your story can be just as good without it. ill read it one way or the other!:twilightblush:

:pinkiegasp: BUT you can only learn how to write it if you try it, take examples from other stories to help you find out whats best for your story, and your style.

just don't look at me, it don't do grammar well :ajsleepy:

Ah-ah-ah, Dusky!

Data requires more than one input! *singsongs*

wooo i have to admit... i was iffy on the hole r63 thing at first but..... its not much different. :twilightblush:
The voices i hear need to change a bit and the images i see needs changed a little...
but in the end i read, see, and hear it exactly as written.
cant wait for more! :twilightsmile:

3728831 Yes you are right my friend Dusk be a true scientist you must do multiple data collections

3733257 indeed he must have multiple date collections both hoof eye and other areas to get a full analysis. Eeyup!! :eeyup: :rainbowkiss:

This is the best r63 I have read in a long time. And I can't wait to see how Rainbow and Dusk will handle things.

Oh god. The way you've been telling this? Wonderful already. I'm hooked on the first chapter.

Three chapters in, rather dull and trite so far. Third chapter in particular is nearly physically painful to read - I sorta expected Blitz to have more relevant questions than "Whoa, can a dude dig another dude?"

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Fair enough. To be frank, as much as I like it, I'm rather inexperienced in terms of romance, so "can a dude bang another dude" is sometimes the best I can think of.

If you had any advice, what could I do to liven it up?

It's male on male, which i'm weirdly ok with unlike girl on girl. Not sure why, maybe it's because I won't be attracted and disgusted with myself! HEHEHEH LET THE FUN BEGIN!

That was very cute and I'm glad for the new chapter. It's been a while. Can't wait until the next one.

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Nice too see that this story ain't dead yet. Keep up the good work :pinkiehappy:

Because everyone's gay for Braeburn

But I don’t think I could become royalty.

*shots fired* :derpytongue2:

Good to see this fic is still alive!

AAaw Red Gala has a crush on Blitz!! and he doesn't have any idea about it!!

Finally, for a moment I though this was going to take a lot more time to update!

This is the second time I read this it is better the second time so good

Wait was the sticky thing what I thought it was?:pinkiegasp: it is! He eats lollipops in bed. I do that too! (Rainbow blitz is right warm water does cleanit out)

Oh hi macho madness. Get into any fights with kids or teens lately? :trixieshiftright:

IT LIVES, AFTER 6 FUKIN MONTHS IT LIVES!!!!!

Bout damn time mate, I loved this story, keep up the good work.

Yay! But "Noteworthy"shows up in the middle instead of Elusive. Leftover or on purpose?

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I kind of recycled it from another fic, if only because I am shit at writing sex. :twilightblush: It's been changed.

Spanks! It was a nice scene, though.

back off red gala :flutterrage::twilightangry2: biltzy belongs to elusive

Yaaay, this is such a lovely Christmas present, so happy this is back in writing, as it's really adorable seeing Blitzy comes to terms with his sexuality, and Sweet Luna Elusive is hot and seductive. I wish I had a Coltfriend who could make me glide into the bedroom the way he does with Blitz

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