Q(^_^Q). The friendliest misanthrope you'll ever meet.
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Nice cover art
You need a space between these.
Wow. That. Was. Brutal. And... I actually enjoyed it. I usually do not. But you have a way of making me read things I usually would not, and end up liking them.
I shall favorite and like.
~KBO.
Similar Stories list includes Cheerilee's Garden.
Sounds about right.
Needs more proofing.
nice
Why's it called slaver rarity if she's not even a main character...?
"Spine".
Oh, damn, that last bit made me very queasy. However, it was still... enjoyable? Is that the correct word? Am I a terrible person if I found this enjoyable? I think I need to go read something cute or funny to make sure I am still capable of feeling good emotions.
~KBO.
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I'm surprised people still read things I write. Thanks.
Are you gonna write it up anytime soon?
6876796 Finnish dash of humanity 3 plz
Made all the creepier by the fact that this is a world of sentient farm animals that would otherwise be manufactured into leather.
"I".
Missing comma.
Missing commas.
"It".
Missing comma.
The hyphen is unneeded.
Missing comma.
Comma should be a period, "it's" should be capitalized.
Monster! Deplorable, irredeemable monster!
Did this Rarity always have one more diamond that canonical Rarity?
Either my stomach is getting stronger, or this chapter was way more tame than the others. Either way it was still quite enjoyable. World building is always good. However, I did not expect this story to take an Indiana Jones turn.
Thank you for updating this.
~KBO.
marry me
you got to continue this, i need my scootabuse!