Yummy! Love the inclusion of Rarity.

She giggles again, "How else? Magic. It's bigger on the inside."

Nice Doctor Who/Whooves referents.

"Rarity is in just as much heat as I am, she was one of the friends I told about coming to your world. She did seem interested when I told her about you. If you want to, go ahead."

Now I fell bad for Spike.

wow I really don't even know how to post a reply to this new chapter, I guess my only thought is send Rarity my way I would follow her any ware.

aw who am I kidding just plan send me to ponyvill and I would be a happy person.
now for a really cold shower.

This is so hot.

Well done! There are a few little things here and there that overlap nicely with Xenophilia, such as the horns being erogenous zones that emit magic when unicorns are aroused. It gives a nice level of consistency.

You put a very interesting twist on the first chapter with the characters being changed, rolls reversed, and experiencing things from literally every angle.

I'll definitely be checking out your other stories. Putting this one in my romance favorites library

I'm sorry to see that this line of story has been marked complete, as inquiring minds want to know; does he stay in Equestria? I think we know the answer, but it's still nice to see it.

this story is amazing it deserves a sequel

oh man this needs to have a longer sequel...
not just with twilight but with other ponies as well...

WTF IS THIS SHIT!!! DELET THIS!!

7942866 And why? You don't have to read it. It's clearly marked as clop.

7942917 I was joking!! LOL

I feel that this ended as a cliffhanger. I personally feel that there could be more chapters added to this. But all in all I liked it and enjoyed reading it. Good work!

Ok i want to say it needs more chapter's like the rest of the main six and even tia and luna

I don’t know if you are still thinking about continuing with this store but it was great . I only hope that you do but I noticed you have another store much like this (Hearding Instinct) and will read that one next . It would have been interesting to see how this would have played out but it’s still good. Thanks for this story .