• Published 30th Oct 2014
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Your Date With Twilight - Sparky Brony

A short story, detailing a date with Twilight, and everypony's favorite protagonise... you.

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Comments ( 13 )

Yummy! Love the inclusion of Rarity.


She giggles again, "How else? Magic. It's bigger on the inside."

Nice Doctor Who/Whooves referents. :rainbowlaugh:

"Rarity is in just as much heat as I am, she was one of the friends I told about coming to your world. She did seem interested when I told her about you. If you want to, go ahead."

Now I fell bad for Spike. :rainbowlaugh: :fluttershysad:

wow I really don't even know how to post a reply to this new chapter, I guess my only thought is send Rarity my way I would follow her any ware.

aw who am I kidding just plan send me to ponyvill and I would be a happy person.
now for a really cold shower. :heart:

This is so hot.

Well done! There are a few little things here and there that overlap nicely with Xenophilia, such as the horns being erogenous zones that emit magic when unicorns are aroused. It gives a nice level of consistency. :twilightsmile:

You put a very interesting twist on the first chapter with the characters being changed, rolls reversed, and experiencing things from literally every angle. :rainbowwild:

I'll definitely be checking out your other stories. Putting this one in my romance favorites library :heart:

I'm sorry to see that this line of story has been marked complete, as inquiring minds want to know; does he stay in Equestria? I think we know the answer, but it's still nice to see it. :derpytongue2:

this story is amazing it deserves a sequel

oh man this needs to have a longer sequel...:twilightsmile:
not just with twilight but with other ponies as well...:trollestia:

WTF IS THIS SHIT!!! DELET THIS!! :twilightangry2:

7942866 And why? You don't have to read it. It's clearly marked as clop.

7942917 I was joking!! LOL

I feel that this ended as a cliffhanger. I personally feel that there could be more chapters added to this. But all in all I liked it and enjoyed reading it. Good work!

Ok i want to say it needs more chapter's like the rest of the main six and even tia and luna

I don’t know if you are still thinking about continuing with this store but it was great :twilightsmile:. I only hope that you do but I noticed you have another store much like this (Hearding Instinct) and will read that one next :rainbowdetermined2:. It would have been interesting to see how this would have played out but it’s still good. Thanks for this story :pinkiesmile:.

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