• Member Since 5th Feb, 2013
  • offline last seen January 22nd

Aleksandr Sherbet


Mediocre FanFic writer and Pro shoutcaster! "You wouldn't shoot a guy with glasses!

Comments ( 17 )

boredom yea right

Boredom more like sexually direct dirty mind

If u know what I mean....

:rainbowkiss::moustache:

Meh... 6/10... if only for it being a bit too rushed for my tastes.

A tad rushed in my opinion.

3432020 I made out of boredom so blame that

Too rushed, and even if it wasn't rushed, the flow and grammar is just horrible.
2/10. I don't care if you were bored, this is truly not something I'm glad I read. :pinkiesick:

3434219 well uh good for you I guess

3434298
Don't listen to him, compared to other stories, your grammar was actually not bad, it is a tadrushed, but I'm saying 7/10

3437143

Why the fuck are we rating the story goddamnit leave the story if it good enough for you

3440105
Oh my god, I'm just telling the writer what I think, it's called advice idiot, I wanna help for further stories, frick off

4205822 pretty much my own reaction reading anything with Pinkie.

The grammar was poor, everything felt rushed, and there were details we didn't need. Why did you mention Applejack?

5251906 to best honest this story wasn't at all thought out kinda winged it

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Do you by any chance know where you got that picture? If you do could you give me a link to it?

5312759 I don't know where I got it from exactly just found it on tumblr

:rainbowlaugh:
another birthday clop!:trollestia:
i need to find more of these!:trollestia:
:yay::yay::yay::yay:

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