This is quite OOC for Twilight. Estrus would explain it, but not the blind date. You're entering into a date not knowing the other person. Hence, blind. If there is chemistry that's well and good. But still that will only get one so far. You made Twilight out to be the town bicycle. Easier to make than a pb& j sandwich.
Also your setup needs work. Movie theater, I got that. Where? Equestria? Earth? not a clue. Just exactly who is this mysterious friend? What are your expectations? Hers? Would have been MUCH better in a bar scene. Heaven knows I've scored from my watering hole.
I'm going to track this. Holding off on anything else.
5204332 I'll agree, you have some points. But the thing is, it's shameless clop, not really much about why it's happening, but I worried about it actually happening. That being said, I implied that she was in estrous, but never explicitly stated. You want plot, I have other stories. Lol.
You smile at her, she's riding cowgirl on you, and she's wondering what kind of kink you are into? "Anything."
That's how you get a red hot curling iron shoved up your bum.
"I can't change you because you are already under that spell, but there's no problem with me changing myself." Without waiting, her horn lights again, and her entire body glows, and in seconds the glow fades, she looks down between her legs, and smiles at you, "There, now you really get to experience sex like I do."
Ohh, was so close
Btw, I just so happen to be working on a Twilight clopfic of my own CX
The friend that set you up on this blind date is so going to get it. You chose the sappy romantic comedy instead of the new Marvel movie that just came out.
Of course I'd choose literally any other movie than yet another comic book movie! The Doctor Strange movie was BULL****!
The Great and Powerful Trixie approves!
Twilight :"You did say you were up for anything."
You: "Yeah, but I kinda expected that you'd...stay human."
This is quite OOC for Twilight. Estrus would explain it, but not the blind date. You're entering into a date not knowing the other person. Hence, blind. If there is chemistry that's well and good. But still that will only get one so far. You made Twilight out to be the town bicycle. Easier to make than a pb& j sandwich.
Also your setup needs work. Movie theater, I got that. Where? Equestria? Earth? not a clue. Just exactly who is this mysterious friend? What are your expectations? Hers? Would have been MUCH better in a bar scene. Heaven knows I've scored from my watering hole.
I'm going to track this. Holding off on anything else.
5204332 I'll agree, you have some points. But the thing is, it's shameless clop, not really much about why it's happening, but I worried about it actually happening. That being said, I implied that she was in estrous, but never explicitly stated. You want plot, I have other stories. Lol.
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Oh, well then. I stand corrected. From a clop perspective then it's excellent. I doff my tam'o shanter to you.
Wow just Wow.
time for a vary cold shower.
There better be more.
I demand more dates.
5206303 check out the group... Your date with... That's where those stories go.
That's how you get a red hot curling iron shoved up your bum.
Ohh, was so close
Btw, I just so happen to be working on a Twilight clopfic of my own CX
is something phenomenal , congratulations
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You sound like the voice of experience. Care to share something with the ready of us?
5209348 I assure you all of my experience in matters of this nature are second-hand.
I'm just presenting the idea, not saying that it's a good one. Hot curling irons are painful no matter where they're shoved
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To those that have enjoyed this story, would you like a second chapter to continue the story?
normally I would say no. but . as I know your style I am going to say yes lets pull all the stops out and see if you can melt my screen down.
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There definitely needs to be more! Gimme!
Continue, please.
5219250 I'm about 700 words in on a second chapter. I do hope you like when I get it done.
5219266 Sweet! I'll be looking forward to it.
Ok this was unexpected in a really good way :D
Really cannot wait to see more!
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Dem likes though, well for the time being "69" ..... All I can think right now is "69 dude!~" :'D
the best thing about this it was made on my birthday thank you god
kinky!
Of course I'd choose literally any other movie than yet another comic book movie! The Doctor Strange movie was BULL****!
Meh...I'm a subscriber to xXHomerSimpsonXx, and I'm currently listening to a Pony Thread Simulator, so...draw your own conclusions...
Welp that got weird fast.