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"I hope she likes it. I am so nervous. I haven't sung in front of Rarity in 5 years. I just want to make Rarity proud of me. That's all I want to make my sister proud."

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Sweet sister time!I love it!:raritywink::unsuresweetie:

Thanks for a sweet read! The idea that Sweetie Belle would earn her cutie mark while singing for her sister is delightful. Bravo!:yay:

Aww yeas. Best representation of Sweetie Belle getting her cutie mark EBAH :twilightsmile:

I found multiple spelling and grammar issues even though I didn't intend on finding it. You should fix that.

But the story was SO SWEET! It almost reminded me in Grade 3 or 2 when I sang in MS Got Talent. I was VERY nervous but I did it to make my parents and my classmates proud... Along with my teachers. And also, I wish I had a big sister. Very much. I have one, but she's in New York away from me(I live in the Philippines)

nice story, good premise. But please, please go over it or get a prereader / editor it is riddled with spelling, grammar and just using the wrong word errors.

This was a very cute story!

I am glad you all like it.


Ok I'll have one of my friends look at it. I not the best at spelling and grammar, but hey that doesn't stop me from doing what I love.:twilightsmile:

How did you do in your MS Got Talent? Did the ponies/people you care about proud of you?

5190340 I didn't win, but I didn't mind that. I was just glad I was able to get my Kaya Toast after performing :D

5190415 cool. At least you tried. I love to sing, but I am just to shy singing in front of ponies/people.:twilightsmile:

5190439 I was sick because of my nervousness.


This was..... Amazingly beautiful.
With the song, I used sweeties voice in my head, but used her older version; like my own version and i smiled and smiled. In my heart was touched because in my life, i want to make my family proud. I have two sisters, but idk why i think they aren't proud of me. It breaks my heart.

Im deeply touched by this. I only want to cry now. Very well written.

Awh! You do love me :)
Thanks for making me smile.

I fan squealed.

This is a very sweet story! Great job! :twilightsmile:

Great story. I really enjoyed it.

Could use a little polish though, there are a lot of grammatical mistakes that kept pulling me out of the narrative, but in the end still a great story.

Too cute!! I loved it!! :pinkiehappy:

there are a bunch of spelling mistakes, but other than that this was an amazingly heartwarming story

I'm gonna cry! TOO SWEET!!:fluttercry::raritycry:

*claps slow* AMAZING! :raritystarry: :unsuresweetie: :duck:

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