"I hope she likes it. I am so nervous. I haven't sung in front of Rarity in 5 years. I just want to make Rarity proud of me. That's all I want to make my sister proud."
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Sweet sister time!I love it!
Thanks for a sweet read! The idea that Sweetie Belle would earn her cutie mark while singing for her sister is delightful. Bravo!
Aww yeas. Best representation of Sweetie Belle getting her cutie mark EBAH
I found multiple spelling and grammar issues even though I didn't intend on finding it. You should fix that.
But the story was SO SWEET! It almost reminded me in Grade 3 or 2 when I sang in MS Got Talent. I was VERY nervous but I did it to make my parents and my classmates proud... Along with my teachers. And also, I wish I had a big sister. Very much. I have one, but she's in New York away from me(I live in the Philippines)
nice story, good premise. But please, please go over it or get a prereader / editor it is riddled with spelling, grammar and just using the wrong word errors.
This was a very cute story!
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I am glad you all like it.
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Ok I'll have one of my friends look at it. I not the best at spelling and grammar, but hey that doesn't stop me from doing what I love.
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How did you do in your MS Got Talent? Did the ponies/people you care about proud of you?
5190340 I didn't win, but I didn't mind that. I was just glad I was able to get my Kaya Toast after performing :D
5190415 cool. At least you tried. I love to sing, but I am just to shy singing in front of ponies/people.
5190439 I was sick because of my nervousness.
5191104 I hate that feeling.
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Me too!
Oh
My
God.
This was..... Amazingly beautiful.
With the song, I used sweeties voice in my head, but used her older version; like my own version and i smiled and smiled. In my heart was touched because in my life, i want to make my family proud. I have two sisters, but idk why i think they aren't proud of me. It breaks my heart.
Im deeply touched by this. I only want to cry now. Very well written.
5209939 Thanks that means a lot to me.
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Awh! You do love me :)
Thanks for making me smile.
I fan squealed.
This is a very sweet story! Great job!
5217622 Thanks
Great story. I really enjoyed it.
Could use a little polish though, there are a lot of grammatical mistakes that kept pulling me out of the narrative, but in the end still a great story.
Too cute!! I loved it!!
there are a bunch of spelling mistakes, but other than that this was an amazingly heartwarming story
I'm gonna cry! TOO SWEET!!
*claps slow* AMAZING!
