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fluttercord4ever


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Are you, are you
Coming to the Everfree
Where ponies strung up a stallion
They say murdered three.
Strange things did happen here
No pony would it seem
If we met up at the Everfree
In the hanging tree.

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That is truly tragic and depressing...

Wow.....Fluttershy killing herself after she lost Angel in the forest. I am both pissed that you killed Fluttershy, but also saddened, I mean, it's Fluttershy.

4901185
1) Angel was the one that was sick.
2) I love Fluttershy too. She is my favorite pony, but it's just happens. I can't control when my dark side comes in. :pinkiecrazy:

4901203 So, since Fluttershy couldn't get home and give Angel his medicine, and he presumably perished, she, depressed, hung herself? Or was the tree screwing with her mind-hole?

4901266 The tree was showing her the pass, once Fluttershy knew, the tree wasn't her died. Before she died she started to think about Angel and how his is sick. So she was sorry to Angel that she didn't make it in time.


4901237 Thanks and that video was creepy.

4901286 it's how I saw your story in my mind. Plus it is super creepy at night near some woods.

4901312 Yeah. I should know because my house is surrounded my woods, and it's creepy. lol :twilightblush:

4901286 I get it was showing her the past' so, the tree wanted her dead? Because you wrote wasn't her died. I'm kind of confused. Also, oddly, this popped into my mind.

https://youtube.com/watch?v=vVkDrIacHJM

4901489 Fluttershy did died. When I said Fluttershy jumped off the tree the rope was still around her neck so she died. The tree wanted to show Fluttershy the past but Berry came in. He didn't want any other pony to find out so he made Fluttershy hang herself.
Also what made you think of that video.

4901633 no Idea, anyway, I knew she hung herself. I was wondering what made her do so

Well then. This is dark.
Some inprovements though: I think it would have been better if, at the beginning, Fluttershy had just lost someone very dear to her (obviously Angel), and had gotten lost running into the Everfree forest.
Just a thought.

4901776 you know what happens to Fluttershy when she gets scared, she can't fly.

What a sad story.:fluttercry:

Where Fluttershy dies:raritycry:

Great story and loved the song.
Time to read Mockingjay again.

4904503 I am glad you like it.:twilightsmile:

4904628 I liked the song.:twilightsmile:

It was good, but the ending fucked it up, just because it's so unlike the character.

4911816 Fluttershy had no other chose. She didn't tell anypony where she was going. Her only chooses were stay on the breach and died from hunger/thirst or hang herself. So she picked the quietest way.

4911859 Wouldn't another choice be to just fly away? I'm fine with your story, it's not bad. My only complaint is that it doesn't make sense at the end. Was the tree fucking with her head?

4911875 The rope won't come off. Even if she fly she'll still hang herself.

Wow. That was.... dark. Also I had nightmares with The Old Ash Tree. Not because of the poem, it's just the visuals. :rainbowderp:

4936483 I hope I didn't give you nightmares with my story. I am sorry if I didn't.

4939687
You didn't give me nightmares. But it was amazing, nonetheless. :)

very morbid. I had never heard of this song/poem before. Its seriously creepy

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