• Published 9th Oct 2014
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The Human Side - White Dragon



The villains of Equestria are tired, tired of losing. So Discord in all of his brilliance set a fail safe, if he were to lose a clone of him was to find the being closest to him in terms of chaos, and give that being his powers. He found me.

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THS 3: The Deal That Changed Everything.

The Human Side

By: White Dragon

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Chapter 3: The Deal That Changed Everything.

(Chaos’s P.O.V)

These ponies were… interesting. The rainbow one was flaming mad. The purple one was happy to see her… brother maybe? Or lover? Ehh.. not my problem at the moment.

“So what is the deal, you wish to make with me?” The ponies look towards me as Celestia and Luna start to converse with each other. Quickly growing bored I summon myself a gallon of chocolate milk to keep myself busy as I await the deal. Oh… hello there what are you?

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(Celestia’s P.O.V)

“So what should we ask for in this deal?” I ask as I turn to Luna.

“I say that we shouldn’t even think about making a deal with him.” Luna remarked as she looked at Chaos with a hateful glare.

“So you want a very powerful creature that has no problem with harming our subjects.” I say with an exaggerated roll of my eyes. Luna’s head turned toward the cold stone brick floor as she contemplated what to do. I myself had multiple ideas of what to do but I wanted to hear her counsel on the matter. It was a diarchy after all. Both of us must make the correct choices that help the country and it’s citizens.

“What if we asked him to help us, in court?” Luna offered, my response was an incredulous expression. .

“Please explain your logic, dear little sister of mine.” I asked her, to explain her asinine idea.

“We both know that we are slowly losing ground and power in the courts, all of the nobles are slowly making more laws that we can handle. You don’t even get to chose your own Sun Guard, and they don’t even want me to have any power, I’ve been less and less informed of law meetings as well as council meetings. We need someone who won’t take any shit from the nobles but is also as powerful as us so they aren’t in danger from assassins. The only reason that we haven’t been taken down is that we are the only people that know how to move the celestial bodies.

Well we have to come do a decision, he won’t just keep waiting for us to decide.

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(3rd Person P.O.V)

Celestia turns from her sister with a glare as they come to a choice. As she looks at Chaos her eyes get wide as she see’s what he is playing with. “Chaos where did you get that?” Celestia asked with a slight tinge of fear in her voice. Chaos held up the dark purple helmet in his hands.

“Oh this?” He said as he held up the helmet, as Luna took a few steps back. “This has some serious dark magic in it,” Luna lowered her head a tad as she felt embarrassed.

“That is the helmet of Nightmare Moon, an evil entity that took over my sister, when she lost herself to her anger.” Chaos laughed after the story behind the helmet. Celestia and the rest of the ponies in the room glared at him. Chaos stopped laughing, as he saw the glares confusion taking over his features.

“You can’t sense it, can you?” Chaos ask with confusion no longer taking over his features. Celestia along with the rest looked at him confused. Sense what? Chaos sighed as he tossed the helmet into the air in the middle of the room and it started to slowly rotate as letters and runes started to peel off of the helmet showing a dark pink gem. “This gem requires a direct link to the powersource.” The ponies gave him a blank look as he tried to explain it. “The gem here required that Luna, or Nightmare Moon if you prefer, had to stay near to the power source, but when she was sent to the moon the connection was cut.”

“So it’s not my sisters fault that she was evil?” Celestia asked with an underlying tone of hopefulness. All the ponies were listening closely as they sat on the cold stone floor or on pieces of rubble. Chaos sighed as he snapped his fingers, making seven chairs or so rise from the ground.

“No.” The ponies looked confused.

“Why not?” asked the yellow one, he looked at her odd.

“You are The Element of Kindness, correct?” Twilight looked suspicious and Rainbow looked like she really wanted to attack him.

“Umm… yes.” She was so quiet it was almost cute.

“Good then this is directly related to you.” The yellow one was scared, with the others confused. “This is the Element of Hatred.”

Author's Note:

I'm so sorry that this has taken so long, I’ll make another chapter shortly. I kind of rushed this one out.

This is part of the next chapter I just wanted to get this out right now so i can focus on the next part.

Comments ( 33 )

Nice to see a new chapter. While short it still captures my attention.

7298194 ya sorry this has been sitting for so long in my head i had to type it out and when I hit a block at the last part of it.

7298203 as i was always told, good things come to those who wait.
Or something like that.

It's been so long

hmm I thought this was long abandoned good to see i'm wrong.

IT LIVES!:pinkiegasp: Great to see a update.

So you want a very powerful creature that has no problem with harming our subjects

I have a little trouble with understanding this sentence,

all of the nobles are slowly making more laws that we can handle

Than we can handle, or, that we can't handle, than would be my choice

You don’t even get to chose your own Sun Guard

I think you meant choose

Other than that it's good to see this is back.
Keep up the work

Awesome chapters. you are doing a amazing job. i can't wait to read the next chapter.:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

Good to see a new chapter

7298203 more i have a idea this should help you with what ales you http://goinswriter.com/how-to-overcome-writers-block/

DUN dun DUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUN!

DUN DUN DUUUUUUUUUUUUUUAUAUAUAUAUAUUAUAUAUAUAUAUAUAUNNN

Keep updating, or else I will call Discord, punch him in the face, threaten him to give me his powers, then I am going to make your furniture alive!!,!,

7302448 How dull. Not even bringing possibilities of supernatural tormentors or literal floor is lava? The shame.

Wow. I kinda forgot about this gem. Glad to see a update. Hope for more soon.

7302656

NICE IDEA! THEN I WILL GO TURN YOUR FLOOR INTO LAVA! THEN I AM GOING TO FORCE YOU TO WATCH TWILIGHT, THE MOVIE! NOT THE CHARACTER!

7302941 See! there you go! Let the chaos flow through you~

We need more stories,please:applecry::applecry::applecry:

7302941 then i shall rip off their heads and tell teenagers that he did it

Comrade please make more chapters for this it is wonderful

A chapter a year lol

Someone should rewrite this as a displaced story and use these chapters as the reference for the prologue :pinkiehappy:

WHY IS THIS IN THE POPULAR BOX! Fiendish author, you shall not make me read this doubtlessly awesome fix that will leave me high and dry for new chapters.

This is part of the next chapter I just wanted to get this out right now so i can focus on the next part.

And they were never heard from again.

Annnnnndddddddd







Dead

(If you've watched Doctor Who, then read this comment in the voice of a Dalek)
What is the "Element of Hatred"? Explain, EXPLAAAAAAAIN!!!!

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Heh, hello Element of Hatred, I'm Element of Power!.

NmB

This fic is amazing, excluding this chapter (too rush and non sensical) the story is gold. I hope someone continues this.

Elements of Harmony meet elements of Chaos Elements chaos meet elements of Darkness
Elements of Darkness meet Elements of Light
Elements of light meet Elements of INFINITY ♾

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