Hey readers, if you're wondering where Enraged went. Don't worry, I'm just re-writing the chapters.
Hey everyone! The name's Chris....or at least it was on Earth.....Yeah.......
I was a normal guy living a normal teenage life, when I was summoned to Equestria as part of some kind of bet between Discord and Ares. (Yes, god of war), and apparently the deal included me becoming the embodiment of uncontrollable rage.
Now I'm stuck in Canterlot as a statue....
For 7000 f***ing years.....
Ironically, I'm a nice guy at heart.
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Stories referenced and/or recommended:
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/178610/i-will-hunt-you-down
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/159953/f-it-im-having-fun
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/182126/the-mighty-warrior-of-epicness
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/186544/dragon-of-the-past
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/181328/the-last-ride
Quick note before I read on. Put a comma before the name of the character that the speaker is addressing.
Aside from a few capitalisation errors. I like this, I shall favourite it to see where it leads me. I'm surprised Chris has managed to stay as sane as he is from being encased in stone for that long, even with the aid of that sleep spell.
4299435 just at the end of this chapter or everytime someone is addressed?
4299504 Every time. And your profile pic is very cute.
4299468 : if you're talking about Rage, it's the name he got while in equestria.
4299521 Yes Rage. I kind of feel sorry for him. I hope things turn out all right in the end.
4299530 I figured the last thing anypony would expect from the personification of anger was a fearful alter ego.
Hmm. Seems interesting enough. I'll see where it goes.
4300225 do my best not to disappoint.
Is... is that Akuma in the cover art? Will definitely read later.
4300316 sorry, just to exhibit rage, he's not actually in the story. Although I might find a way to mention him. Good job catching reference
4300363 I'm a massive Street Fighter fan. A bit disappointed, because I'd love to see Akuma in Equestria, but I'm still going to give this story a read.
4300370 akuma in equestria would be amazing. You could do that. I'd read it
4300387 You know, I might actually. I've already started on one LoHAV/LoHAH story, and I've been thinking about writing a second one.
4300415 Hm I'll have to check it out. Good luck
4300449 Thanks, you too.
Should be sheer, I think.
Minor grammar/spelling fixes again:
Hm, thought I fixed those.....well thanks, I never would have noticed
Welcome to the bandwagon. Enjoy your ride.
Why does nobody ever use sunass?
Ah, well. Lookin good.
Please call Celestia sunass in the next chapter.
Pleeeeeeease?
4302634 we'll see.
4302662 yay!
And so the human gets more and more and more filled with rage... until he pops a coronary and dies from a fatal heart attack.
The End!
New line when a new character is speaking! please!
Other than that, I'm loving this. ONWARD!
I enjoyed the chapter, a bit on the shorty side(In fact, very much so).
4306515 I Said I'm sorry. Later on when there's more happening, they'll get longer
4306550 I didnt mean to sound mean, i really love this story. Sorry if i seemed like i was insulting, i can fully understand the lack of length on chapters.
Wow . Uncontrollable rage. Turning into a crying wreck. Wow.
4306765 it's even worse when I reveal the extent of his anger.
Shhhhhhh..
4306779 Celestia damn it! Don't say those things! Now I know he hasn't reached his full power at least once!
4306789 if it makes you feel better, I can tell you that I have the same negative effect.
Loving it
I loved the "giant skittles beam of doom" line.
Are you doing the "can summon help from others Equestrias" bit?
4313957 care to clarify that.
4313966 Its a LoHAV thing. people can cast items out and they are sent out through other Equestrias and allow others to ask them for help. I think if you wrote a prequel you could add that one to LoHAV.
4313979 sorry, but no. As this is my fist story, I want to make it a simple plot. If I make more, then I may start experimenting.
4313997 Alright just wondering.
Holy crap, Akuma in Equestri-
*Sees League of Humans Acting X*
Oh, another one of these. Oh well, better luck next time.
Wow... DT apologizing? That's a in fics like this.
Why does everyone just take the manure thrown their way? Why didn't he say something like 'I don't accept; Luna has anger issues almost as bad as mine and can't be trusted to make a fair judgement, chose someone else'?
Negotiation; it's a thing that exists.
hahahaha
4314105 we talked Rhodesm96 is playing with the idea.
4314217
In one day, he's been hit twice by the rainbow is friendship cannon, and reduced to a sobbing, spineless baby.mand all he wants is a second chance. By then, I'm sure anyone would happily take any offer they could get. Besides, remember that everyone but Celestia and Rage think that this is a bad idea.
4314431
Willingly leaving his fate at the hooves of Luna doesn't seem very second-chance-y to me. He could have protested that...
Aslo, more Rupert, d'awws demand it. If Rupert falls asleep, Rage takes the helm, so... if Rage falls asleep, does Rupert come out to play?
4314454
A. He's desperate, and doesn't plan on screwing up as he found all terms possible to comply with.
B. pretty much. If the body is tired, both are asleep. If Rupert falls asleep, it's rages turn. If rage goes unconscious, Rupert will normally come out to play. (Read as shake, cry, and/or run.)
I know he's desperate but I feel like the embodiment of rage is severely under angry. He had his once sentence of "wait sorry i wasn't in control of myself." and that's the extent of his explanation? No, "by the way I was sent here by the god of war and its entirely his fault all this happened, also even if i deserved it at the time I still monstrously angry for being turned to stone?"
4314851 fine. Because you asked so nicely, I'll include a major transformation next chapter. It won't be as bad the next past pov, but better than the ones so far. Is that good?