grandpa?

and a few more
something she converted with all her might. [ ???? ]
I mean, there animals, but its sorta the same right? [ they're ]
instructed her on one of there spar sessions [ their spa ]

6962344 No,sorry I'm just the author sorry.

author are you norwegian??? its rare to see norwegian in the fanfics...

6962344 or father?

But what happened to Muffins?!

6962546 or brother or former boyfriend

shit is ready to launched to the fan

Dad? Relative of some sort is my guess.

Also, is it just me or is Gilda getting the hots for Fluttershy?

6962526 I don't know if the author is Norwegian but the reason he has Norwegian text in his story is because the author sees the griffons language as a mixture of Scandinavian languages.

I don't think this male griffon is very young, because the griffon started out speaking his native tongue, and he not very good with the equish language meaning its his second or third language, this Griffons has had time to learn a second language(all be it not that well) so he is must be (in my opinion) several years older than Gilda, so this Male griffon is a male figure in Gilda's life who seems to care for Gilda's well being. So the griffon might be gilda's father/grandfather(or father figure).

6962370

haha you know what i meant

6962526 No sorry, I'm as British as the royal family...Who are German and Russian...
No sorry I'm as British as tea...Which is from India...
Okay I'm as British as... Ah forget it.

"So *cough* little fillies, I ask one more time, in case you are hard of hearing, you will step away from my Gilda!"

What is it with some people and this fixation on ending everything on a cliffhanger?

6964781 Its a good writing tool to insure people are invested in where the story's going and (hopefully) want to know whats next. Plus I'm awful at just ending a chapter, so I have to make it a point to cut it off like this so I don't waddle on forever.

Calling it now, Gilda is a Griffon princess.

6964869
God, I hope not. That's so painfully overused, it's not even funny anymore.

6964899 Where? I haven't seen any.

6964912
I've seen at least three or four different ones, although I can't remember the names right now except for Twilight's Secret.

Who is this mysterious griffon!

Ahh, an old lover, mayhaps?

Wait that other griffon is Gilda's daddy?

first of all seriously need Futtershy and them to make a herd seeing how close her and Gilda are getting.second your boy need to get and be there like now I hope they are going to be ok.

So it wasn't Rainbow Dash from the last chapter it was that griffon. Anyway really love the lesson of a parent is not always ready but will have to try anyway. Also, I really loved the part where Gilda was describing her runs to Fluttershy that I was right there with the Pegasus thinking that Gilda was in the mafia, until she started messing with her in the end. Oh boy things just suddenly turned up in the end, I hope Gilda's boyfriend will at least be allowed to see the birth of his child, that is, if that griffon will let him and knows the closest griffons that can help Gilda at the time.

Drama!! Cliifhanger!!

Welp, time for Fluttershy to harness the power of nature and sic all of her animal friends on this griffin. Especially the bear

... This displeases me.
Deus tecum.

Finally she is having the chick!

The Stare vs knife. Shouldn't be much of a fight.

Ah shit this just got ten times worse

*sigh*

I really hope that this doesn't develop into a herd fic.

Oh shit oh shit oh shit quickly bring the dinkster from spy kids have him crash through the window have the griffin and the dinkster mortal kombat each other to death https://tenor.co/vjPi.gif

So.... When will you be able to update?
Oh get stuff man.

7764373 "Oh get stuff man?" Sorry can you clarify. Also the next chapter will be in two weeks I have a dissertation I have been focusing on and a new story. Other than that, it's almost all finished.

7766110 crap crap crap. Sorry
That was to be 'great', not what you see now.

So to fix it, here it goes. Oh great stuff man.ha

7766211 No worries mate, it made me laugh actually, because it sounded like "get stuffed" and in England that pretty much means fuck off. Haha.

7768408 Oh.My.God. I am so sorry.
Well shit learn something new everyday. ah he he he well that was something. I would use the table now to hit my head on, but I would maybe break it and it will make to much noise and have my parents ask questions that I don't want to answer.

7768769 Hey don't worry about it, I needed a good chuckle.

7770272 but can you answer his question?

7772472 he did. In two weeks

7772788 Well that's a guesstimation anyway. I have about 6000 words currently written and unedited, which mean it will probably be more like 8000 when I'm done, because I like to write a skeleton chapter that connects the beginning to the end, then I flavor it afterwords with colourful words that make me sound like a smart witty writer. However, Christmas is the bane of my existence. And depending on the amount of time I get off away from this awful, materialistic holiday I think I can push it out, I know I can certainly write it, but the editing...
Anyway... Yes! Probably about two weeks starting today. Maybe much sooner, Maybe the fist full week of January when everything dies down and I can hear myself think again.

I don't know if that helps, but I can at least give you a less intolerable wait then most others can.

7773034 OK. Well no rush. yes, you must rush, ruusshh. shut up, I wasn't asking you for help. sorry for that. That is my bat pony half self, he is very angry. now as I was saying.....dame it! hahaha. ass
Ugh..... Away, I um...dam. Well I will end this here. Good day.

7773855 cringe

More please.

7773034
Any update on this story

Good fic. I'm hoping to see it continued at some point.

I love the story, in fact I love it so much I wish I could read it nonstop. It just pains me so very much to read so many grammatical errors. There is used instead of their, words that have to many or less letters, it's just all so frustrating! And not to even mention the fact if the next chapter not even being out yet! ;-; But I digress. While I'm still in high school I'd like to help, being a fan of books of all kinds and having, happily, a fairly good understanding of the English language, I'd love love love to help you edit and proofread chapters and maybe more stories to come if it helps speed anything up. So please, if you'll consider it, just comment back to this is you'd like the extra help.

Loved it, more pls.