Welp, just gonna follow and fav this without reading. Going off the bar that is already set by the prequel.

Bun in the oven! Can't wait for the next installment. Couple of errors here and there. I'll send you corrections later. So excited to see this continue!

Ha! shes pregers. lol.
have some RAINBOWS!!!

It will be interesting to see where this story goes.

For future reference, assuming it wasn't just an error of being sleepy:

Idol is a effigy made in the likeness of something and or a figure you admire
Idle means something is stationary

This... could do with some cleaning.

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ok gilda and the main character are about as dense as tom...or whatever the name of that boulder that rarity was obsessed with was.

human/griffon hybrid? sounds neat!

wow we must be denser then the earth

Some theirs should be they're, many here should be her.

"That's ok I forgive you, i think "okay" would work better.

Speech feel off (long sentences that get confusing) punctuation need a lot of work.

It pains me to see that the dude portrayed here is equivalent to the thickest person in the universe. Even I saw the signs from a mile away.

It may have been obvious to the readers, but wirhout experience some things are only clear in hindsight. Also, I hope Twilight actually keeps this quiet and doesn't go into full research mode..... oh who am I kidding, we all know she's going to drag everyone into this with her meddling.

Damn, beat me to it. Fair game lad.

ok, so either gildas a cheat or genetics can go fuck itself

4920192 if hippogriffs exist, or for that matter, griffons themselves... it indicates an incredibly unusual environment for genetics as is.

Huh...I wonder what sort of mom Gilda would be...

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It's here! Yes!

4919755 I'm pretty sure if you were in that kind of situation you almost wouldn't want to realize it.

Wow, guy must have really good genes if he manegd to knock up a Gryphon.

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honestly, i think she would be a great mom.

You could use another editor. The main problem I had with this and the prequel is the grammar. You just need someone else to be able to look over it for mistakes the first editor missed.

Well, yeah, it was pretty obvious. Geez, ya dufus

4920903 Are we talking about the same Gilda?

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yeah, its not at all surprising to see that typically the most brash people become the most nurturing parents.

I'm reading the comments and no one has mentioned this, so I will........ Why does Fluttershy have dick flavored tea!

"H-huh, would you fancy that." You weakly chuckle to no one, before your world goes completely black.

Well, I guess that's one way to cope with it.

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I caught that a robot chicken refuses

Either your editor needs to do a better job, or you need a new editor. There were dozens upon dozens of errors in this, and I only read the first half.
There needs to be some major revising here.

I have to say, his reaction would probably be mine if I found myself in a similar situation.

I think it was great, please continue. Though, it was exhausting to read.

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Being a jerk to people sometimes doesn't preclude that person from being a good parent.

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Hey dont let me stop you man; Loved your Changeling/Human Story would love to see what you could do with a Griffon/Human hybrid.

Let’s see now berry flavour, cherry flavour, strawberry flavour, mint flavour and snozberry flavour? Screw it Earl Grey will do.

hehehehe

4923293 That's terrifying I honestly was not making a reference to Scott pilgrim when i wrote that. Havent seen the film in years. Although that defiantly has put me in a better mood.

The density is real

Really liked the story though. Are you gonna time skip though?

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There is always room for more. You must complete your hybrid collection.

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Everything can breed with either a pony or a human. MOTH PONY SATYR, AWAY!

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Fluffy pony satyr! Zebra satyrs! Griffon-human hybrids! It's a mad world. Humans sure like to sleep around.

Soon we will create Sheeple.

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wait what only one chapter? no i don't what to play the waiting game, also figured that was what's wrong. sigh well can't wait for the next chapter looking forward to it

stay classy

I haven't even read the story yet, I only read the description.

Gilda's pregers! I done goofed, me!!

Mamma mia!!! Gilda is pregnant with a human?
AWESOME!!!

Since no one else seems to be thinking of it, wouldn't a cross between a gryphon and a human be a sphynx?

Hmm. Totally no signs in the beginning of the story. XD

no, your only magically ability is that one card trick you learned ten years ago from your mate... missing a comma and YOUR

4924885 No, a sphinx is a lion with a human head or something. Occasionally they have wings. That's less Human/Gryphon hybrid and more slapping a human head on it and calling it a day.

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The Magic of Sperm!

4923322 Accidental references are best references

4924885 Na that would be too much cat not enough bird and human. I prefer this version of human griffin hybrids: derpicdn.net/img/view/2014/2/23/559802__safe_meme_monochrome_comic_human_vulgar_open+mouth_gilda_fwslash-mlp-fwslash_4chan.png Human torso and head but all the limbs (wings, tail, legs and claws) still griffin.