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You go boy fapfapfap ;)
Pffft *snirk*...heehe...bwahaha! ow my sides
That ending was just awkward.
Wow, an explosion of backstory, is as surprising that you got a child.
Poor Gilda. :(
I know everyone hates a grammar nazi but the mistakes kept pulling me out of the story. For example
should have been,
Better remind, Twilight, not to keep any samples for herself!
Good chapter!
Still good, but needs an editing pass or six to fix the punctuation.
I think you missed this o' dear author.
Could be rephrased better.
I laughed a bit to hard at this.
I think Gilda would make an excellent mother.
I loved this was a sweet and a little sad Pur Gilda that goodness she found him I think he helped her heal and change for the better. I can't wait to see what happens next between them all next and what happens to them all next.
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Has any one played we happy few
Because thats how I picture "You" sounding
Another fine chapter i love it poor Gilda abandoned at 5 years old well done here bravo, onward.