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Meh. Needs more salting of wounds.
Why scootaloo? Why not use a colt? Didn't make sense for scoots to be a dude...u could have just had her be a chick with a dick....aka futa....would have been hotter...meh
Went too fast, kinda flat.
2/10 wouldn't breed.
Futa would have been much better, so much hotter
HOW THE HELL
Does somepony get by with a shop that ONLY sells quills and sofas?
4860941 this really needs to be tagged as R63 scootaloo
its a piece of shit
Makes no sense hate it :(
4926405
lol only in Equestria, its that bit-to-dollar exchange
Just, no
Ahh... A for effort?
Eh.
Some good fetishism here. It could have been better if there'd been more description and emotion. The end felt rushed but the set up seemed alright.
Thanks for the story!
Rainbow leaned a bit closer, enough to whisper in your ear. “To be honest, I could use a couple of days without her following me around, you know?”
I'm way late for this, but you really should be more descriptive and emotional. It feels kind of like a list. If you did decide to revisit or rewrite this, then I hope you took some of the criticism given by the other comments to heart.